Best Friend
Chapter One Out Of One
"Harry!" Louis cried running towards his best friend with the curly hair.
"Hey, Louis!" Harry called back, equally enthusiastic.
Louis came up to engulf Harry into a hug, to which Harry hugged back.
"I missed you" Louis spoke, a bit of sadness in his voice. Harry let out a small chuckle.
"Lou, I was just with my Gram for the weekend."
"Well, just know that I'll be coming over more than usual this week!"
Harry laughed that laugh that Louis loved so much.
"It wasn't that funny" Louis said, looking up at him since Harry was just a tad bit taller than him.
"Guess, I missed you too, Lou" Harry said, and draped his arm across Louis shoulder walking down the street to school.
///
It was Friday night and the home phone began to ring loudly. Harry looked over at the clock on his nightstand with read 10:15.
"Who's be calling this late?" Harry thought out loud.
"Harry, it's Louis!" His mum called from downstairs. Harry put down his crossword puzzle he was working on, and sat up from his bed, walking downstairs where his mom was holding out the phone for him.
"Thanks" He said, taking the phone from her hand and pressing it against his ear.
"Hey, Lou" Harry spoke into the reciever.
"Harold-" His voice was cut off by his loud sobs. "I-I.. we n-need to t-t-talk face t-to -f-face" Louis managed to speak out between sobs.
Harry hated seeing Louis cry, he wished he could jump through the phone and hug his usually chirpy bestfriend.
"Okay, Lou. I'll go ask my mum."
"Ok" He heard Louis' soft voice say before hanging up.
Harry walked into the kitchen, seeing him mum making some tea.
"Mum, Louis needs to come over" He spoke. Harry's mum sighed. "Harold, it's almost 10:30, he can come over tomorrow." She said, adding some sugar.
"No mum, it's urgent. He was sobbing on the phone. Please? We'll be quiet... if I can make him stop crying"
Harry's mum knew how Harry felt about people he loved crying, and she knew it had to be pretty darn important for Louis to cry. He was usually an entergetic, happy kid.
"Alright, Harry. He can come."
Harry smiled, "Thanks mum!"
He ran to the phone and dialed Louis' number.
"Hello?" Louis' weak voice answered.
"Hey, Lou. You can come on over" He spoke as soothingly at possible. "Okay, see you in a bit"
Harry ran to the window to see Louis walking out of his door of few houses down.
He opened the door before Louis could knock.
When he saw Louis' appearence. His puffy, blooshot eyes. His lips were swollen, and his feathery hair was a wreck.
Harry immediatly pulled him in for a hug.
He felt Louis began to cry, again.
"Shh, Louis. It's okay" He soothed, taking his hand and leading him up the stairs to his bedroom.
Once in his room, and Louis sat on his bed, the covers wrapped around him, Harry finally asked, "What's wrong?"
Louis tool a deep breath, letting it out slowly. "My mum said we're moving" Harry sighed, relieved he wasn't hurt or anything.
"It's okay. I'm sure we can still go to school together.. and meet up at the usual sp-" "No, Harry, we're moving to Doncaster... on Monday" Louis interrupted.
Harry went stiff.
"Oh"
He soon felt the tears begin to pour when realization hit that his bestfriend was moving so far away.
His cried became sobs, apparently loud enough for his mum to hear because she came barging in worried.
She gasped at the sight of the two boys hugging and crying into eachothers arms.
"What's wrong?" She asked, walking over to hug them both. Louis was just like another son.
"L-louis is m-moving to D-doncaster!" Harry choked out. His mum hugged them tighter, feeling sorry for them both, for she knew how hard this was gonna be.
///
It had been five years later, and Harry was still working in the bakery he started when he was sixteen, and going to university.
He eventually got over Louis' move, but still missed him. He wished they could still somehow meet up.
Harry was in the back, baking more bread when he heard the bell ring, signalling a new customer.
He walked to the front, his head hung down while he was wiping the hand sanitizer on his large hands.
"Hello, what would you like today?" He asked, still not looking up.
"Hi, and just two choclate chip cookies, thanks"
Harry reached down, unlocking the cabinet and grabbing the cookies, putting them in a small sack.
"That'll be 2.95-(Sorry, don't know British money..) He stopped dead in his tracks when he seemed to reconize the face.
Those eyes and cheekbones he could remember anywhere.
"Lou?" He asked in disbelief.
Louis seemed to remeber him instantly by the way his eyes lighted up.
"Curly?" He asked in the same tone.
"Yeah, it's me!" He laughed, overjoyed.
"Wos, you've changed. That haircut.. well, damn, it looks good!" Louis exclaimed.
"Look at you! You're so grown up!" Harry said, squishing his cheeks gently. Harry loved how they were acting as if they never seperated.
"You know I'm older, I should be squishing your cheeks like an old granny, not the other way around!"
Harry laughed at his joke, and handed him his cookies, and Louis handed him the money.
"We need to meet up" Louis said, "When's your shift over?" He asked. Harry glanced at the clock.. "Ohh, around 15 minutes, actually. Lucky you"
Louis rolled his eyes, "Same old Harry"
He went to sit down at one one of the small tables, and took the cookie out, eating it slowly.
The minutes seems like hours, and he just wanted to see Harry really badly! "What's up, buttercup?" Harry said, walking towards the table.
"Well, hello, curly." Louis smiled.
"I don't really want to stay here, let's go to my place, shall we?" Harry asked, taking a bit from one of the cookies.
Louis nodded, "We shall"
///
They got to Harry's small flat, and walked straight into the bedroom, from old habit when Louis came over.
"I missed you, curly. A lot. I still consider you my bestfriend" Harry smiled, pullimg Louis in for a hug, and smiled even bigger when he noticed he was still shorter than him.
"I missed you a lot, also. And, simce I still count you as my bestfriend, also. I am going to announce to you that.. I'm gay"
Louis sighed, and hugged Harry tighter.
"That's honestly fantastic, because I'm gay, too" Harry smiled, and nuzzled into him.
"You know you were my first boy crush?"Harry asked Louis. Louis' heart swelled , warmth filling his stomach.
"Can I kiss you?"
Louis went rigid, was he gonna let his bestfriend kiss him?
Harry snuggled out from Louis, "Uhh, sorry, I probabaly shouldn't have asked that so early" Harry couphed nervesously.
Louis smiled, and pulled his chim down to smash their lips together, Louis' arms wrapped around Harry's waist, pushing him down further into his body. Harry bit down softly on Louis bottom lip, and louis opened his lips . Their toungues fought for dominance.
Louis could feel Harry's growing erection, and was sure Harry could feel his. Harry rocked his hips, frinding their erections together.
"Hmm" They both moaned into the kiss. After a few more moments of grinding and kissing, they needed air.
Harry began gringing harder, his eyes clamped shut and biting his lip. Louis grew harder by just the sight of Harry's face.
"Damn, you're so sexy!" He groaned, bucking his hips up into Harry's . That sent Harry wild.
He tore off both of their shirts and jeans, leaving them only in boxers with obvious tents in them.
Harry gave small kisses down Louis' torso, coming eye level with Louis' clothed cock.
He gave it a kiss and sucked on the thin fabric. Louis moaned, "Harry.. please!" He begged.
Harry smiled, and pulled his boxers down, taking ahold of Louis' thick cock and pumping it slowly.
Louis' head rolled back, moans and pants coming from his mouth. Harry planted a small kiss on the tip, and began to lightly suck, while pumping him. Louis bucked his hips up once again, wanting more of Harry's warm, wet mouth.
Harry licked a stripe across it, amd finally took it in his mouth, swirling his tongue against the flesh. He slowly began to bob his head, and felt one of Louis' hands pull his curls.
"Fuck, Harry, stop or I'm gonna cum" Louis panted.
Harry stopped, not wanting him to cum like this. He crawled beside Louis.
"Lou, I want you to fuck me into this matress where I can't walk for days. I know your big cock can do it. Fuck me, Louis!"
Louis nodded, and pulled Harry's boxers down. He sucked two fingers, and had Harry lay on his back, his legs in the air.
"Look at you" Louis whispered, pushing one finger in, "All open and spread out for my cock" He slowly began to pump, and Harry let out a loud groan.
"Fuck, Louis!"
Louis added another finger, and began to pump faster curling his fingers.
"Damn, you're so tight, Harry!" Louis groaned.
"Jesus Christ, Louis fuck me!" Harry screamed.
Louis pulled his fingers from Harry, amd licken his hand, covering his cock, and getting some of his pre-cum along with it.
"Gonna make you feel so good" He whispered, lightly sucking on Harry's neck as he pushed his tip, and slowly all of himself in.
He gave Harry some time to adjust.
"Alright, move" Harry demanded.
Louis pulled himslef out, and slammed back in, making Harry scream.
He began to rock his hips, reating a rythym.
"God, faster Louis!" Harry moaned. Louis rocked faster, without pulling himslef out.
"Baby, you're so tight and hot. You feels so good around my cock!" Louis groaned, and noticed Harry's legs begin to quiver.
Louis took Harry's cock in his hands, amd began to pump and rock faster.
"Cum for me, Harry. Cum all over, baby!"
Harry screamed, and clamped his eyes shut as white spirts came shooting out of him.
Feeling Harry clamp around him, sent Louis over the edge. He moaned Harry's name while cumming deep inside of him.
He pulled out of him, amd cuddled next to him.
"Harry?" Louis asked,nuzziling his head into Harry's neck. "Yes?" Harry replied. "I really... want... us... together" He said, wanting to get to the point.
Harry kissed Louis cheek.
"I'd love that" He said. And with one last tender kiss, they fell asleep in eachothers arms.
"Hey, Louis!" Harry called back, equally enthusiastic.
Louis came up to engulf Harry into a hug, to which Harry hugged back.
"I missed you" Louis spoke, a bit of sadness in his voice. Harry let out a small chuckle.
"Lou, I was just with my Gram for the weekend."
"Well, just know that I'll be coming over more than usual this week!"
Harry laughed that laugh that Louis loved so much.
"It wasn't that funny" Louis said, looking up at him since Harry was just a tad bit taller than him.
"Guess, I missed you too, Lou" Harry said, and draped his arm across Louis shoulder walking down the street to school.
///
It was Friday night and the home phone began to ring loudly. Harry looked over at the clock on his nightstand with read 10:15.
"Who's be calling this late?" Harry thought out loud.
"Harry, it's Louis!" His mum called from downstairs. Harry put down his crossword puzzle he was working on, and sat up from his bed, walking downstairs where his mom was holding out the phone for him.
"Thanks" He said, taking the phone from her hand and pressing it against his ear.
"Hey, Lou" Harry spoke into the reciever.
"Harold-" His voice was cut off by his loud sobs. "I-I.. we n-need to t-t-talk face t-to -f-face" Louis managed to speak out between sobs.
Harry hated seeing Louis cry, he wished he could jump through the phone and hug his usually chirpy bestfriend.
"Okay, Lou. I'll go ask my mum."
"Ok" He heard Louis' soft voice say before hanging up.
Harry walked into the kitchen, seeing him mum making some tea.
"Mum, Louis needs to come over" He spoke. Harry's mum sighed. "Harold, it's almost 10:30, he can come over tomorrow." She said, adding some sugar.
"No mum, it's urgent. He was sobbing on the phone. Please? We'll be quiet... if I can make him stop crying"
Harry's mum knew how Harry felt about people he loved crying, and she knew it had to be pretty darn important for Louis to cry. He was usually an entergetic, happy kid.
"Alright, Harry. He can come."
Harry smiled, "Thanks mum!"
He ran to the phone and dialed Louis' number.
"Hello?" Louis' weak voice answered.
"Hey, Lou. You can come on over" He spoke as soothingly at possible. "Okay, see you in a bit"
Harry ran to the window to see Louis walking out of his door of few houses down.
He opened the door before Louis could knock.
When he saw Louis' appearence. His puffy, blooshot eyes. His lips were swollen, and his feathery hair was a wreck.
Harry immediatly pulled him in for a hug.
He felt Louis began to cry, again.
"Shh, Louis. It's okay" He soothed, taking his hand and leading him up the stairs to his bedroom.
Once in his room, and Louis sat on his bed, the covers wrapped around him, Harry finally asked, "What's wrong?"
Louis tool a deep breath, letting it out slowly. "My mum said we're moving" Harry sighed, relieved he wasn't hurt or anything.
"It's okay. I'm sure we can still go to school together.. and meet up at the usual sp-" "No, Harry, we're moving to Doncaster... on Monday" Louis interrupted.
Harry went stiff.
"Oh"
He soon felt the tears begin to pour when realization hit that his bestfriend was moving so far away.
His cried became sobs, apparently loud enough for his mum to hear because she came barging in worried.
She gasped at the sight of the two boys hugging and crying into eachothers arms.
"What's wrong?" She asked, walking over to hug them both. Louis was just like another son.
"L-louis is m-moving to D-doncaster!" Harry choked out. His mum hugged them tighter, feeling sorry for them both, for she knew how hard this was gonna be.
///
It had been five years later, and Harry was still working in the bakery he started when he was sixteen, and going to university.
He eventually got over Louis' move, but still missed him. He wished they could still somehow meet up.
Harry was in the back, baking more bread when he heard the bell ring, signalling a new customer.
He walked to the front, his head hung down while he was wiping the hand sanitizer on his large hands.
"Hello, what would you like today?" He asked, still not looking up.
"Hi, and just two choclate chip cookies, thanks"
Harry reached down, unlocking the cabinet and grabbing the cookies, putting them in a small sack.
"That'll be 2.95-(Sorry, don't know British money..) He stopped dead in his tracks when he seemed to reconize the face.
Those eyes and cheekbones he could remember anywhere.
"Lou?" He asked in disbelief.
Louis seemed to remeber him instantly by the way his eyes lighted up.
"Curly?" He asked in the same tone.
"Yeah, it's me!" He laughed, overjoyed.
"Wos, you've changed. That haircut.. well, damn, it looks good!" Louis exclaimed.
"Look at you! You're so grown up!" Harry said, squishing his cheeks gently. Harry loved how they were acting as if they never seperated.
"You know I'm older, I should be squishing your cheeks like an old granny, not the other way around!"
Harry laughed at his joke, and handed him his cookies, and Louis handed him the money.
"We need to meet up" Louis said, "When's your shift over?" He asked. Harry glanced at the clock.. "Ohh, around 15 minutes, actually. Lucky you"
Louis rolled his eyes, "Same old Harry"
He went to sit down at one one of the small tables, and took the cookie out, eating it slowly.
The minutes seems like hours, and he just wanted to see Harry really badly! "What's up, buttercup?" Harry said, walking towards the table.
"Well, hello, curly." Louis smiled.
"I don't really want to stay here, let's go to my place, shall we?" Harry asked, taking a bit from one of the cookies.
Louis nodded, "We shall"
///
They got to Harry's small flat, and walked straight into the bedroom, from old habit when Louis came over.
"I missed you, curly. A lot. I still consider you my bestfriend" Harry smiled, pullimg Louis in for a hug, and smiled even bigger when he noticed he was still shorter than him.
"I missed you a lot, also. And, simce I still count you as my bestfriend, also. I am going to announce to you that.. I'm gay"
Louis sighed, and hugged Harry tighter.
"That's honestly fantastic, because I'm gay, too" Harry smiled, and nuzzled into him.
"You know you were my first boy crush?"Harry asked Louis. Louis' heart swelled , warmth filling his stomach.
"Can I kiss you?"
Louis went rigid, was he gonna let his bestfriend kiss him?
Harry snuggled out from Louis, "Uhh, sorry, I probabaly shouldn't have asked that so early" Harry couphed nervesously.
Louis smiled, and pulled his chim down to smash their lips together, Louis' arms wrapped around Harry's waist, pushing him down further into his body. Harry bit down softly on Louis bottom lip, and louis opened his lips . Their toungues fought for dominance.
Louis could feel Harry's growing erection, and was sure Harry could feel his. Harry rocked his hips, frinding their erections together.
"Hmm" They both moaned into the kiss. After a few more moments of grinding and kissing, they needed air.
Harry began gringing harder, his eyes clamped shut and biting his lip. Louis grew harder by just the sight of Harry's face.
"Damn, you're so sexy!" He groaned, bucking his hips up into Harry's . That sent Harry wild.
He tore off both of their shirts and jeans, leaving them only in boxers with obvious tents in them.
Harry gave small kisses down Louis' torso, coming eye level with Louis' clothed cock.
He gave it a kiss and sucked on the thin fabric. Louis moaned, "Harry.. please!" He begged.
Harry smiled, and pulled his boxers down, taking ahold of Louis' thick cock and pumping it slowly.
Louis' head rolled back, moans and pants coming from his mouth. Harry planted a small kiss on the tip, and began to lightly suck, while pumping him. Louis bucked his hips up once again, wanting more of Harry's warm, wet mouth.
Harry licked a stripe across it, amd finally took it in his mouth, swirling his tongue against the flesh. He slowly began to bob his head, and felt one of Louis' hands pull his curls.
"Fuck, Harry, stop or I'm gonna cum" Louis panted.
Harry stopped, not wanting him to cum like this. He crawled beside Louis.
"Lou, I want you to fuck me into this matress where I can't walk for days. I know your big cock can do it. Fuck me, Louis!"
Louis nodded, and pulled Harry's boxers down. He sucked two fingers, and had Harry lay on his back, his legs in the air.
"Look at you" Louis whispered, pushing one finger in, "All open and spread out for my cock" He slowly began to pump, and Harry let out a loud groan.
"Fuck, Louis!"
Louis added another finger, and began to pump faster curling his fingers.
"Damn, you're so tight, Harry!" Louis groaned.
"Jesus Christ, Louis fuck me!" Harry screamed.
Louis pulled his fingers from Harry, amd licken his hand, covering his cock, and getting some of his pre-cum along with it.
"Gonna make you feel so good" He whispered, lightly sucking on Harry's neck as he pushed his tip, and slowly all of himself in.
He gave Harry some time to adjust.
"Alright, move" Harry demanded.
Louis pulled himslef out, and slammed back in, making Harry scream.
He began to rock his hips, reating a rythym.
"God, faster Louis!" Harry moaned. Louis rocked faster, without pulling himslef out.
"Baby, you're so tight and hot. You feels so good around my cock!" Louis groaned, and noticed Harry's legs begin to quiver.
Louis took Harry's cock in his hands, amd began to pump and rock faster.
"Cum for me, Harry. Cum all over, baby!"
Harry screamed, and clamped his eyes shut as white spirts came shooting out of him.
Feeling Harry clamp around him, sent Louis over the edge. He moaned Harry's name while cumming deep inside of him.
He pulled out of him, amd cuddled next to him.
"Harry?" Louis asked,nuzziling his head into Harry's neck. "Yes?" Harry replied. "I really... want... us... together" He said, wanting to get to the point.
Harry kissed Louis cheek.
"I'd love that" He said. And with one last tender kiss, they fell asleep in eachothers arms.
Ok, so, I'll try to be constructive here, you have some potential, but you need to work on some stuff. Descriptions is a big one - basically put more words in there. Don't make them long and purple, but just use words. Dialogue... it's very unrealistic, honestly. People don't jump from one thing to another that fast, and umm it's just normal to go around announcing your sexuality to people like that, even if they were your childhood friends/crushes. I think you can really benefit from a beta. Also, just so I know I'm not being too hard on you, can I ask how old you are (or more so: how old you were when you wrote this?)
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