Best Friend - Comments

Ok, so, I'll try to be constructive here, you have some potential, but you need to work on some stuff. Descriptions is a big one - basically put more words in there. Don't make them long and purple, but just use words. Dialogue... it's very unrealistic, honestly. People don't jump from one thing to another that fast, and umm it's just normal to go around announcing your sexuality to people like that, even if they were your childhood friends/crushes. I think you can really benefit from a beta. Also, just so I know I'm not being too hard on you, can I ask how old you are (or more so: how old you were when you wrote this?)

You should so turn it into a fanfic

u should turn itbijto a tory

Yes :D

YESSS PLEASEEE

Omg I love this! Totally make it into a fanfic!

@WontStopTill1DStops
Thank you. I will study up on it. (:

@ZaynandLouis1128
British money is pounds! Just for future reference, because you said you didn't know... So yeah! There you go!

@ZaynandLouis1128
Don't thank me for reading ur stories! I thank you bc u r an phenomiNIALL writer!!! But ur welcome, I guess!! Yeah, if you can't think of another imagine like this and you finish your other fanfic, than this one would be a great one to turn into a fanfic. But please continue the other one!

@WontStopTill1DStops
Yeah, not right now. But, I am still deciding how I could make this into a fanfiction. Thank you for reading both my stories, it means so much! And, thank you. (;

Omgeez!! That was so awesome and just wow. You are an amazing writer. This was great! I'm not sure if you should make it into a fanfic... I mean its awesome, but... Idk... Maybe you should! I mean seeing your other fanfic. Irdk. Just please make another one!! This was so awesome!!!

@ZaynandLouis1128
thanks

@QuinnIrons
Sure, I'll read yours. (:

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@ZaynandLouis1128
Can u give me advice on how to make mine better?

@QuinnIrons
Thanks you guys for commenting. I will start planning soon.

yes yes yes

yes def fanfic material