How I met Louis Tomlinson

Strangers POV
i was taking a stroll around London in the heat of a major traffic jam when I saw it. A flame- haired girls car being hit by someone's car. She swerved to the bridge and crashed over the railing. I stared wide eyed at the scene I ran to the crash and checked on the man first. He seemed fine just shaken up. I then went to go check on the girl. The car was fully enclosed in the water as I saw a flame of hair emerging from the water.
seconds went by as I felt relief wash over me, only to have fear wash over me again. She couldn't swim, she was probably too injured to carry on. I had to act quick I took off my jacket and dropped it. There were people already looking.
"call 911" I said to a girl with a phone. "Now!" I yelled. I climbed over the railing onto the edge. Cool wind whipped my face sending chills through my body. I took a few deep breathes trying to calm my nerves. And I jumped. I heard screams coming from the top but it was too late now. I plunged into the freezing water and I felt paralyzed. Only for a second until I saw red. I began to swim down towards this girls limp body. She was losing blood, quick. I swam as fast as I could and grabbed the girl. I swam with her weight to the top rather slowly.
my chest began to hurt from lack of oxygen. I emerged from the water and heard the whining sound of blaring sirens. I kicked my feet to stay floating so then we both wouldn't drown. Soon the firefighters arrived and I latter was being brought down. I firefighter clambered down the latter and I helped to lift the girl up. We tried to get her up as fast as we could without causing too much injury. I helped to get her to a gurney and she was immediately rushed to hospital. I was taken to hospital too, for reason I have no clue why. I was shaking on the ride there.
once I got to the hospital I knew they were treating me for hypothermia.
i didn't care if they treated me, I just wanted to make sure the girl was alright.

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