Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic)
Chapter 60
(Mias POV)
I hate thunderstorms so much. I don't know why though. When I was with my parents still, they used to come and comfort me. Only Nicole and Niall know that Im afraid of thunderstorms. I usually go to Nialls room when there is a thunderstorm but not anymore. I always jump when there is a thunderstorm. Hopefully there will be no more big booms.
CRACK
I jump up and the bed creaks. God damn. I lay back down in my bed and I go under the covers. Theres a knock at the door and I jump a little. It sounds like Niall and he says: "Mia are you okay?" I sniff and I say: "Im fine." I move a little on the bed and it creaks. Niall comes in slowly and he closes the door.
CRACK
I look through the hole I made through the covers. I see Nialls face. It looks so sad. He walks over to me and kneels down next to me. He wraps his arms around me and I start to cry again. He wipes my tears and he sits next to me on the bed. I sit on his lap because he makes me not scared. He rubs my back and I calm down a little bit.
CRACK
He jumps and I jump with him a little. I hug him tightly and he hugs back. He lays down on the bed and I lay on top of him. He wraps his arms around me again and I wrap my arms around him. My stomach starts bothering me but I ignore it. A few minutes later there is no more thunder and I fall asleep on top of Niall.
(In The Morning)
I hear some giggles and awws. I wake up and I look at Niall. He is sleeping so peacefully. I kiss his nose and he moans a little bit. I smile then he wakes up. "Are you guys done yet?" Liam asks. I turn around and I see Nicole and Harry smiling. Zayn is next to Nicole, trying not to laugh and Louis is next to Liam, smirking. I blush.
Oh yeah the covers are off because I probably pushed them off. Now I see why they are trying not to laugh. Me and his arms are around each other. Our crotches are pushed against each other and our legs are crossed with each others. I get up and I lose balance, falling on the ground. Louis comes up to me and helps me up. Niall says:
"Nice one babe." I smile and I look at Nicole. Zayn is so close to her. I look at her confused like and she mouths: "I'll talk about it later on." I nod and Niall gets up. Liam says: "What ya guys wanna do?" Zayn says: "Maybe all of us should go to a carnival?" Every one else agrees and we all get dressed to go to the carnival.
I hate thunderstorms so much. I don't know why though. When I was with my parents still, they used to come and comfort me. Only Nicole and Niall know that Im afraid of thunderstorms. I usually go to Nialls room when there is a thunderstorm but not anymore. I always jump when there is a thunderstorm. Hopefully there will be no more big booms.
CRACK
I jump up and the bed creaks. God damn. I lay back down in my bed and I go under the covers. Theres a knock at the door and I jump a little. It sounds like Niall and he says: "Mia are you okay?" I sniff and I say: "Im fine." I move a little on the bed and it creaks. Niall comes in slowly and he closes the door.
CRACK
I look through the hole I made through the covers. I see Nialls face. It looks so sad. He walks over to me and kneels down next to me. He wraps his arms around me and I start to cry again. He wipes my tears and he sits next to me on the bed. I sit on his lap because he makes me not scared. He rubs my back and I calm down a little bit.
CRACK
He jumps and I jump with him a little. I hug him tightly and he hugs back. He lays down on the bed and I lay on top of him. He wraps his arms around me again and I wrap my arms around him. My stomach starts bothering me but I ignore it. A few minutes later there is no more thunder and I fall asleep on top of Niall.
(In The Morning)
I hear some giggles and awws. I wake up and I look at Niall. He is sleeping so peacefully. I kiss his nose and he moans a little bit. I smile then he wakes up. "Are you guys done yet?" Liam asks. I turn around and I see Nicole and Harry smiling. Zayn is next to Nicole, trying not to laugh and Louis is next to Liam, smirking. I blush.
Oh yeah the covers are off because I probably pushed them off. Now I see why they are trying not to laugh. Me and his arms are around each other. Our crotches are pushed against each other and our legs are crossed with each others. I get up and I lose balance, falling on the ground. Louis comes up to me and helps me up. Niall says:
"Nice one babe." I smile and I look at Nicole. Zayn is so close to her. I look at her confused like and she mouths: "I'll talk about it later on." I nod and Niall gets up. Liam says: "What ya guys wanna do?" Zayn says: "Maybe all of us should go to a carnival?" Every one else agrees and we all get dressed to go to the carnival.
i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY
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