Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic) - Comments

i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY

The first chapter is really good but i feel like Harry escalated way to quickly. lol

OMG GUYS!! I FOUND OUT NICOLES TWITTER!! @5SOS_4Aussies. Follow her and tweet her to make a new chapter!! :D

@A.Rizzy

Your welcome. :)

@Nicoleluvsuxoxo
Thanks for letting me know:)

@A.Rizzy

There is a sequel. :)

Love this!!!!! It's really good:)

@KacieStyles
Opps let me go check it out, thanks! I might of mistyped a word or something.

oh and btw not trying to be mean or anything but the WMYB lyrics are wrong in chapter 11

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

I'm going to make the sequel now, I was wondering something, I'm going to message you.

@Mrs.Harry Styles1

I just did, sorry that you had to wait so long. I'm going to make the sequel now! :)

Update!!!!!!

@OneDirectionlover!
Okay

@OneDirectionlover!
Yes yes it is

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

Okay thanks. I might take Mrs.Harry Styles1 idea. Hehe

@OneDirectionlover!
I do too and it's safe to have sex when your pregnant just not all the time, when she's like 7-9 months pregnant she could have sex

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

Thanks. I love it, I want it to be mine when I get married.


@Mrs.Harry Styles1

Haha I know what your saying but is it okay to have sex when your pregnant?

Harry and Nicole should have another "fun" moment if you know what I'm saying

The dress is beautiful!!

Woop XD This story might have 100 chapters!! :D