Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic)
Chapter 6
(Nicoles POV)
I'm still sleeping, I feel Harry get up quickly but quietly and I also hear him leave probably to get ready for our double date later on today. I don't blame him, Its going to be amazing!! I wake up, I walk into the kitchen and I pour myself a bowl of Special K and I eat it so I can fit in my dress I bought yesterday with Mia. I start eating then I get a text from Mia:
(Start Of Texting Conversation)
"Hey Nicole!"
"Hey Mia!!"
"Can I come over so we can get ready for the double date??"
"Yeah!!"
"Should I come over now??"
"Well Im eating cereal now."
"Oh okay Ill be over at 1:00 because its 12:00."
"Okay perfect!"
"Are you excited??"
"Yeah!! My first date with Harry!!"
"Ya!! Its also my first date with Niall!"
"Yupp Im also a little nervous."
"Who isn't?"
"I seriously dont know."
"Okay well Im gonna go finish my cereal now."
"Okay I'll be over soon."
"See ya later!"
"See you."
(End Of Texting Conversation)
I finish eating my cereal and I hear the doorbell ring. I look at the clock on my phone and I see thats it is already 12:55. "Wow I took a while to eat!" I say to myself. I walk over to the door and I answer it.
"Hey Mia!" I say to her
"Hey Nicole are you ready?" She asks me.
"Yeah come on in!" I say to her.
She says to me: "Thanks!"
"No problem, lets get started."
We both walk upstairs and we get our dresses out, we flat iron them so there are no wrinkles in them. We both do each others make up, nails and hair perfectly. We both wait till our nails are done before we get changed. Mia grabs her dress and walks into the bathroom to get changed. I grab my dress, I close the door and I get changed into my dress too. She walks out, when Im dressed, Shes dressed in the blue puffy dress that she bought with me and Im in my pink dress. We wait until the boys text us.
(Harrys POV)
Me and Niall both walk into my room. We get our tuxes out, we both spray wrinkle release on both of them. Who uses flat irons right?? We both fix our hair and we both make sure we have no pimples on our face. We spray on ax and we both get into our tuxes that we bought a while ago. We then put on the ax again just to make sure that we smell good for our double date. We then text the girls that we are coming to pick them up.
I'm still sleeping, I feel Harry get up quickly but quietly and I also hear him leave probably to get ready for our double date later on today. I don't blame him, Its going to be amazing!! I wake up, I walk into the kitchen and I pour myself a bowl of Special K and I eat it so I can fit in my dress I bought yesterday with Mia. I start eating then I get a text from Mia:
(Start Of Texting Conversation)
"Hey Nicole!"
"Hey Mia!!"
"Can I come over so we can get ready for the double date??"
"Yeah!!"
"Should I come over now??"
"Well Im eating cereal now."
"Oh okay Ill be over at 1:00 because its 12:00."
"Okay perfect!"
"Are you excited??"
"Yeah!! My first date with Harry!!"
"Ya!! Its also my first date with Niall!"
"Yupp Im also a little nervous."
"Who isn't?"
"I seriously dont know."
"Okay well Im gonna go finish my cereal now."
"Okay I'll be over soon."
"See ya later!"
"See you."
(End Of Texting Conversation)
I finish eating my cereal and I hear the doorbell ring. I look at the clock on my phone and I see thats it is already 12:55. "Wow I took a while to eat!" I say to myself. I walk over to the door and I answer it.
"Hey Mia!" I say to her
"Hey Nicole are you ready?" She asks me.
"Yeah come on in!" I say to her.
She says to me: "Thanks!"
"No problem, lets get started."
We both walk upstairs and we get our dresses out, we flat iron them so there are no wrinkles in them. We both do each others make up, nails and hair perfectly. We both wait till our nails are done before we get changed. Mia grabs her dress and walks into the bathroom to get changed. I grab my dress, I close the door and I get changed into my dress too. She walks out, when Im dressed, Shes dressed in the blue puffy dress that she bought with me and Im in my pink dress. We wait until the boys text us.
(Harrys POV)
Me and Niall both walk into my room. We get our tuxes out, we both spray wrinkle release on both of them. Who uses flat irons right?? We both fix our hair and we both make sure we have no pimples on our face. We spray on ax and we both get into our tuxes that we bought a while ago. We then put on the ax again just to make sure that we smell good for our double date. We then text the girls that we are coming to pick them up.
i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY
1/24/16