Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic)
Chapter 33
(Nicoles POV)
I hear the doorbell. Omg who the hell could be here!! I look at the clock and its 10:00am. I walk downstairs and I open the front door. Its Eleanor. She pushes her self into the house and she kicks me against the wall. My head hits the wall and I pass out. Eleanor says: "That is what you get for stealing my man bitch." Mia comes down the steps and sees me passed out on the ground then she sees Eleanor. She says: "You son of a bitch." She then punches her in the face a few times, she grabs her head and smashes it against the wall. She then grabs her and throws her outside of the house. Mia picks me up and carries me to the car quickly. She drives me to the hospital quickly to make sure nothing else bad happens and she leaves Eleanor there all cut and scraped. Not giving a shit about her anymore. In fact she never did and never will.
(At The Hospital)
(Mias POV)
Mia says to the girl behind the counter: "I need this girl straight to the emergency room!" 2 guys come in with a hospital bed and I put her on it. I text Louis and the rest of the gang that Nicole is in the emergency room because Eleanor kicked her against the wall and she got knocked out. They text back that they are all coming. I wait in the waiting room for them. 20 minutes later they show up with flowers and cards. I smile at them and they smile back. We head for Nicoles emergency room, we see her and the doctor says that she will wake up in a hour or 2. Louis walks up to her and holds her hand. He starts crying. Harry comes up from behind him and pats his back. Every one starts crying. A few hours later.. she wakes up, every ones heads shoots up, she looks around and then she asks Louis: "Where am I??"
(To Be Continued..)
I hear the doorbell. Omg who the hell could be here!! I look at the clock and its 10:00am. I walk downstairs and I open the front door. Its Eleanor. She pushes her self into the house and she kicks me against the wall. My head hits the wall and I pass out. Eleanor says: "That is what you get for stealing my man bitch." Mia comes down the steps and sees me passed out on the ground then she sees Eleanor. She says: "You son of a bitch." She then punches her in the face a few times, she grabs her head and smashes it against the wall. She then grabs her and throws her outside of the house. Mia picks me up and carries me to the car quickly. She drives me to the hospital quickly to make sure nothing else bad happens and she leaves Eleanor there all cut and scraped. Not giving a shit about her anymore. In fact she never did and never will.
(At The Hospital)
(Mias POV)
Mia says to the girl behind the counter: "I need this girl straight to the emergency room!" 2 guys come in with a hospital bed and I put her on it. I text Louis and the rest of the gang that Nicole is in the emergency room because Eleanor kicked her against the wall and she got knocked out. They text back that they are all coming. I wait in the waiting room for them. 20 minutes later they show up with flowers and cards. I smile at them and they smile back. We head for Nicoles emergency room, we see her and the doctor says that she will wake up in a hour or 2. Louis walks up to her and holds her hand. He starts crying. Harry comes up from behind him and pats his back. Every one starts crying. A few hours later.. she wakes up, every ones heads shoots up, she looks around and then she asks Louis: "Where am I??"
(To Be Continued..)
i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY
1/24/16