Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic)
Chapter 3
(Harrys POV)
I wake up, I yawn and I stretch wait a sec.... This is not my house!! I try to remember what happened and I finally remember, I stayed over Nicoles House last night!! I look down and I see Nicole, Shes sleeping peacefully on my lap, probally dreaming about something. I get up slowly and quietly so I dont wake her up. I finally get up and I smile, I lean in and kiss her on the cheeks slowly. I walk into the kitchen about to make pancakes then my phone rings, It plays: Forever Young. I knew it right then and there that it was Niall because he made that his ringtone whenever he called my phone because me and him are the youngest in the group. I pick up my phone and I answer it:
(Start Of The Phone Conversation)
"Hey Niall, whats up?"
"Dude where are you?"
"What do you mean?"
"You are not at your place."
"Oh yeah I stayed at Nicoles House, sorry mate."
"Its fine."
"So do you like Mia?"
"Maybe..... Fine yes I do."
"Awhh my little Nialler is growing up!!"
"So are you and Nicole an item now or no?"
"Sadly but no"
"But you want to be."
"Yeah I do."
"Good luck mate and i gtg."
"Thanks and okay see you later."
"Your welcome and byee."
"Bye!!"
(End Of The Phone Conversation)
(Nicoles POV)
Im having the dream about me and Harry having 2 kids!! Best Dream Ever till I hear some one talking, It sounds like Harry. Wait a sec..... how is he here? Oh yeah!!! He slept over my house yesterday night!! I start to listen to their conversation. I hear that Niall likes Mia. Omg Mia is going to freak out when I tell her that Niall Horan likes her. Okay well Now I hear my name, Wait A Sec. The One And Only Harry Styles likes me! I dont believe it until I hear him say that he does. Then he says it. Okay now I believe it. Harry gets off the phone and I start to fall back asleep dreaming about the dream that I was dreaming about before. and then I wake up an hour later......
I wake up, I yawn and I stretch wait a sec.... This is not my house!! I try to remember what happened and I finally remember, I stayed over Nicoles House last night!! I look down and I see Nicole, Shes sleeping peacefully on my lap, probally dreaming about something. I get up slowly and quietly so I dont wake her up. I finally get up and I smile, I lean in and kiss her on the cheeks slowly. I walk into the kitchen about to make pancakes then my phone rings, It plays: Forever Young. I knew it right then and there that it was Niall because he made that his ringtone whenever he called my phone because me and him are the youngest in the group. I pick up my phone and I answer it:
(Start Of The Phone Conversation)
"Hey Niall, whats up?"
"Dude where are you?"
"What do you mean?"
"You are not at your place."
"Oh yeah I stayed at Nicoles House, sorry mate."
"Its fine."
"So do you like Mia?"
"Maybe..... Fine yes I do."
"Awhh my little Nialler is growing up!!"
"So are you and Nicole an item now or no?"
"Sadly but no"
"But you want to be."
"Yeah I do."
"Good luck mate and i gtg."
"Thanks and okay see you later."
"Your welcome and byee."
"Bye!!"
(End Of The Phone Conversation)
(Nicoles POV)
Im having the dream about me and Harry having 2 kids!! Best Dream Ever till I hear some one talking, It sounds like Harry. Wait a sec..... how is he here? Oh yeah!!! He slept over my house yesterday night!! I start to listen to their conversation. I hear that Niall likes Mia. Omg Mia is going to freak out when I tell her that Niall Horan likes her. Okay well Now I hear my name, Wait A Sec. The One And Only Harry Styles likes me! I dont believe it until I hear him say that he does. Then he says it. Okay now I believe it. Harry gets off the phone and I start to fall back asleep dreaming about the dream that I was dreaming about before. and then I wake up an hour later......
i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY
1/24/16