Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic)
Chapter 21
(Harrys POV)
Me, the gang and 2 friends of Mias walk into my house. We see Louis and Nicole. His arm is around her and she is leaned in on him. I get so mad I crack my fingers. They see us and they stop what they are doing. I calm down a bit. I call out Nicoles name and she comes up to me. I carry her into the bed room. I take a minute or 2 to figure out what Im going to say. I reach into my back pocket and I pull out a ring box. I open it up and theres a promise ring in the box. (Not an engagement ring.) I say to her:
"Will you take this promise ring Nicole?"
"Omg yes Harry!" She says.
She hugs me and starts crying. I put the ring on her finger. She starts to kiss me. I carry her to the door and I close the door. I carry her to the bed. I place her down and I take off her shirt. She takes my shirt off too. We start to make out now. I take her pants off and she takes my pants off too. Things were about to get hot but then I hear a knock on the door. I get my clothes back on and Nicole gets under the covers. I open the door and we see Anthony just standing there. He says:
"We were wondering if you guys wanted anything from McDonalds?"
"Uh no thanks." Nicole says.
Anthony just walks away and I turn around to see Nicole getting dressed again. She mouths to me: "Maybe another time" I nod my head and then I frown. She sees that I frown, she walks up to me and kisses me. I kiss back and then she walks away. I walk down the steps and I see Nicole talking to Perrie and Danielle. I walk up to Louis, Liam and Zayn. I then hear Nicole squeal. I laugh then smile. They are probably talking about the promise ring that I gave her. We keep on talking then Louis says:
"Any one wanna play Twister?"
"Ya!!" Nicole shouts out.
Then we start to get ready for the game Twister. Louis spins and Me and Nicole are playing. I am under her in a bridge form, facing upwards. She is on top of me in a bridge form, she is facing my direction. This looks so weird. Every one else is laughing. Then we both start to laugh. I then fall with the next move that Louis makes. Nicole gets off the mat and she screams:
"Haha sucker I won!" Im starting to think that he did that on purpose but you never know. Nicole walks up to Louis and kisses him on the cheek. Then she walks over to me she picks me up and hugs me. She whispers in my ear: "Are you okay?" I nod and I answer back: "Now that your here with me." We start to play the game again till Niall, Mia, Anthony and Isaiah get back from McDonalds.
Me, the gang and 2 friends of Mias walk into my house. We see Louis and Nicole. His arm is around her and she is leaned in on him. I get so mad I crack my fingers. They see us and they stop what they are doing. I calm down a bit. I call out Nicoles name and she comes up to me. I carry her into the bed room. I take a minute or 2 to figure out what Im going to say. I reach into my back pocket and I pull out a ring box. I open it up and theres a promise ring in the box. (Not an engagement ring.) I say to her:
"Will you take this promise ring Nicole?"
"Omg yes Harry!" She says.
She hugs me and starts crying. I put the ring on her finger. She starts to kiss me. I carry her to the door and I close the door. I carry her to the bed. I place her down and I take off her shirt. She takes my shirt off too. We start to make out now. I take her pants off and she takes my pants off too. Things were about to get hot but then I hear a knock on the door. I get my clothes back on and Nicole gets under the covers. I open the door and we see Anthony just standing there. He says:
"We were wondering if you guys wanted anything from McDonalds?"
"Uh no thanks." Nicole says.
Anthony just walks away and I turn around to see Nicole getting dressed again. She mouths to me: "Maybe another time" I nod my head and then I frown. She sees that I frown, she walks up to me and kisses me. I kiss back and then she walks away. I walk down the steps and I see Nicole talking to Perrie and Danielle. I walk up to Louis, Liam and Zayn. I then hear Nicole squeal. I laugh then smile. They are probably talking about the promise ring that I gave her. We keep on talking then Louis says:
"Any one wanna play Twister?"
"Ya!!" Nicole shouts out.
Then we start to get ready for the game Twister. Louis spins and Me and Nicole are playing. I am under her in a bridge form, facing upwards. She is on top of me in a bridge form, she is facing my direction. This looks so weird. Every one else is laughing. Then we both start to laugh. I then fall with the next move that Louis makes. Nicole gets off the mat and she screams:
"Haha sucker I won!" Im starting to think that he did that on purpose but you never know. Nicole walks up to Louis and kisses him on the cheek. Then she walks over to me she picks me up and hugs me. She whispers in my ear: "Are you okay?" I nod and I answer back: "Now that your here with me." We start to play the game again till Niall, Mia, Anthony and Isaiah get back from McDonalds.
i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY
1/24/16