Baby I Loved You First! (Harry Styles and Niall Horan Fanfic)
Chapter 13
(Nialls POV)
I wake up with Mia beside me, cuddling into me. I smile. I couldn't fall asleep last night very well because I heard noises, I wonder if Harry and Nicole fell asleep fast last night, I doubt it. I walk outside of my hotel room and I knock on Harry and Nicoles hotel door. A few minutes later, Harry answers it stark naked, Oh so no wonder why I heard noises yesterday. I look at his face, no other places. and I say to him:
"Did you fall asleep last night fast?"
"Yeah Me and Nicole were exhausted." He says.
"And why is that?" I ask him.
"Oh well you know..." He says.
"Ohh so those were the noises I heard last night." I say to him wiggling my eyebrows.
He blushes and asks: " You heard us??"
"Yeah but you guys weren't that loud." I say to him.
"Okay good." He says.
"So how was she?" I ask him.
"She was fantastic." He says to me, smiling.
"Oh that's great!" I say.
"Yeah so you and Mia?" He asks me.
"Yeah, what about her??" I ask him.
"Did you.." He asks.
"My god no!" I tell him.
"Oh okay. Well im going back to sleep because its 9:00am. He says to me.
"Okay see ya later." I tell him.
He closes his door and I open my door to walk in and I see Mia awake doing her make up. Omg she doesn't need make up, shes very pretty without it. I smile at her. She smiles back. I feel like asking her if she slept well but If she didn't then she would just tell me. I sit on the bed admiring her doing her make up. Shes done and she walks up to me, hugs me and kisses me on the cheek. I hug her back and smile. She asks me:
"Did you check your twitter yet today?"
"No why??" I ask her.
"Just check." She tells me.
I check Twitter, I scroll through my tweets, most of them are from my fans. Then I see a tweet from Louis saying: Eleanor just broke up with me. :'( Im heart broken. My eyes go wide and I look up at Mia and I see tears forming in her eyes. I tweet back: "@Louis_Tomlinson: Im sorry! I wish I could be there to help you out. I walk up to Mia again and I wipe her tears away. I then hug her and she hugs me back, still crying. I rub her back and I ask her: "Wanna go shopping with Harry and Nicole today?"
Her eyes go wide and she says: "Oh my god, yes! I always wanted to."
"Yay! Lets see if they are awake." I say to her.
We both walk outside of our hotel room and I knock on Harry and Nicoles door again. A few minutes later again, Harry answers it again stark naked. I block Mias eyes and I glare at him, he understands and he walks into his room again, he puts boxers and jogging pants on then walks out again. I uncover Mias eyes and I ask him:
"Do you and Nicole want to go shopping with me and Mia today?"
"Uhh well Im very tired and so is Nicole." He says to me.
"Oh I understand." He says then winks at me.
Harry closes the door and me and Mia walk back into our hotel room. We pick out the outfits that we wanna wear today and we ask each other which outfits should we wear. Hmm I point to the one that is a light blue crop top and dark blue skinny jeans. She smiles and puts it on, I try not to look but shes soo pretty! She points to the one that is a white shirt and black skinny jeans. I put them on and then she smiles. She grabs her purse and we walk out of the hotel room and the hotel. We get a cab to the Paris Mall. We get out of the cab and we walk into the mall.
I wake up with Mia beside me, cuddling into me. I smile. I couldn't fall asleep last night very well because I heard noises, I wonder if Harry and Nicole fell asleep fast last night, I doubt it. I walk outside of my hotel room and I knock on Harry and Nicoles hotel door. A few minutes later, Harry answers it stark naked, Oh so no wonder why I heard noises yesterday. I look at his face, no other places. and I say to him:
"Did you fall asleep last night fast?"
"Yeah Me and Nicole were exhausted." He says.
"And why is that?" I ask him.
"Oh well you know..." He says.
"Ohh so those were the noises I heard last night." I say to him wiggling my eyebrows.
He blushes and asks: " You heard us??"
"Yeah but you guys weren't that loud." I say to him.
"Okay good." He says.
"So how was she?" I ask him.
"She was fantastic." He says to me, smiling.
"Oh that's great!" I say.
"Yeah so you and Mia?" He asks me.
"Yeah, what about her??" I ask him.
"Did you.." He asks.
"My god no!" I tell him.
"Oh okay. Well im going back to sleep because its 9:00am. He says to me.
"Okay see ya later." I tell him.
He closes his door and I open my door to walk in and I see Mia awake doing her make up. Omg she doesn't need make up, shes very pretty without it. I smile at her. She smiles back. I feel like asking her if she slept well but If she didn't then she would just tell me. I sit on the bed admiring her doing her make up. Shes done and she walks up to me, hugs me and kisses me on the cheek. I hug her back and smile. She asks me:
"Did you check your twitter yet today?"
"No why??" I ask her.
"Just check." She tells me.
I check Twitter, I scroll through my tweets, most of them are from my fans. Then I see a tweet from Louis saying: Eleanor just broke up with me. :'( Im heart broken. My eyes go wide and I look up at Mia and I see tears forming in her eyes. I tweet back: "@Louis_Tomlinson: Im sorry! I wish I could be there to help you out. I walk up to Mia again and I wipe her tears away. I then hug her and she hugs me back, still crying. I rub her back and I ask her: "Wanna go shopping with Harry and Nicole today?"
Her eyes go wide and she says: "Oh my god, yes! I always wanted to."
"Yay! Lets see if they are awake." I say to her.
We both walk outside of our hotel room and I knock on Harry and Nicoles door again. A few minutes later again, Harry answers it again stark naked. I block Mias eyes and I glare at him, he understands and he walks into his room again, he puts boxers and jogging pants on then walks out again. I uncover Mias eyes and I ask him:
"Do you and Nicole want to go shopping with me and Mia today?"
"Uhh well Im very tired and so is Nicole." He says to me.
"Oh I understand." He says then winks at me.
Harry closes the door and me and Mia walk back into our hotel room. We pick out the outfits that we wanna wear today and we ask each other which outfits should we wear. Hmm I point to the one that is a light blue crop top and dark blue skinny jeans. She smiles and puts it on, I try not to look but shes soo pretty! She points to the one that is a white shirt and black skinny jeans. I put them on and then she smiles. She grabs her purse and we walk out of the hotel room and the hotel. We get a cab to the Paris Mall. We get out of the cab and we walk into the mall.
i love the story but things unnecessary happen too quickly and when the people talk you make them say 'omg' and 'lol' and stuff, thats really more for texting. BUT YEA DONT GET ME WRONG I LOVE THE STORY
1/24/16