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Perfect Act

I'm a Likeable guy

Louis pov
I sat down to eat my breakfast while Bella was in the bathroom. Then I heard a thud.

A loud thud.

I sprung up from my seat and sprinted to the bathroom door. I knocked. Silence.

"Bella? Bella!" No answer. I checked the door handle. Unlocked? Bella always remembers to lock it. I opened the door and was instantly surrounded by steam. I quickly leant into the shower and turned the water off. Then I saw Bella. She was on the floor in the corner, eyes closed, face white, lips pale. I rushed to her side and lifted her head up on to my lap.

"Bella, Bella can you hear me?" She didnt respond. I leaned my head down to hers, she was still breathing. I lightly shook her.

"Shit Bella c'mon wake up. Wake Up!" I reached my hand up to the sink and splashed some cold water onto her face. She still didnt move.

"Fuck," I cursed under my breath. I looked to the door and opened my mouth, about to yell out to one of the boys for help, but a hand clamped over my mouth stopping me. My eyes widened and I whipped my head down to look at Bella. She was still paler than usual but some colour had returned to her face.

"Don't yell out Louis," she asked with a pleading look in her eyes. She slowly removed her hand and I just sat there with my mouth opening and closing...like a fish.

"Uh-I-wha-uh," I chocked on my half words. Bella tryed to sit up but I immediately pushed her head back down into my lap.

"No. You're not getting up," Bella sighed.

"Lou please don't make a big deal out of this. I went on a run with no food or water in my body, then when I came back I had no food or water either. So I passed out. It used to happen when I didn't have any water and went for a long run. It's honestly not a big deal. I just need some water and I'll be fine." She went to sit up again, but again, I pushed her back down.

"Why don't I believe you," I said with narrow eyes.

"Because I've hidden a lot of things from you guys and still you don't know everything about me." She spoked boldly.

"It was a rhetorical question.." I mumbled feeling guilty. When I looked back to Bella she smiled softly.

"Ok, I get why you don't believe me, but I can prove it. Pass me my phone." I eyed her suspiciously but she seemed genuine. I leant across her and gave her phone. She unlocked it and scrolled down her contacts till she got to Eliza. How was Eliza going help? She'll freak out when she finds out Bella passed out. Bella put the phone on speaker. After two rings Eliza answered.

"Hey bub," Eliza's voice was happy and bubbly, two things I've never heard in her voice when she's around me...

"Hey." Bella spoke, still lying on my lap as I refused to let her move.

"So I went for a run before breakfast, without water...." Bella trailed off and I heard Eliza let out a whiny noise.

"You passed out didnt you? Please tell me when you started getting the symptoms you had water and sat down. Of course you didnt you never do. Lemme guess you were about to get in the shower? And now your probably lying on the bathroom floor because if you try to get up without getting water you'll pass out again." Wow. Was not expecting that. I guess Bella was right.

"Exactly, except I'm actually lying on Louis' lap because he came in after I passed out and won't let me move," Bella rolled her eyes at me when she said this.

"Louis." Eliza spoke to me. "Get Bella drink of water, make her drink it all. Then, slowly, help her stand up and take her to either her bed or the couch. She knows how to take care of herself in this sort of situation. I'm coming over later anyway, but until then just keep a bit of an eye on her for me, please." I was surprised that for once she was speaking to me like an equal, not like a dickhead and an idiot, although I guess when I'm around her Im both of those things.

"Yeah sure. I'll take care of her. I promise." My words were directed at both Bella and Eliza, but mainly Eliza.

"Thanks Louis, I'll see you both later I guess, take it easy Bella, love you."

"Love you too, see ya!" The call was ended and I looked down to Bella.

"Are you gonna let me get up," she asked hopefully.

"First your having a drink of water." I said, remembering what Eliza had said. I leant up to the sink again, grabbing a cup and filled it will water, then made Bella drink it all.

"Okay, she said to get you up slowly," I muttered under my breath. Bella sighed.

"Louis this has happened to me before I know how quickly I'm allowed to get up, you don't even need to help me, I'll be fine." I laughed.

"Yeah, like Im just gonna leave and risk you fainting and Eliza killing me for not being there to catch you," Now Bella laughed. Though Im not sure why.

"Oh my god your actually scared of her aren't you," I thought about it and shrugged, she could get pretty scary.

"Why is that so funny? You've seen her when she gets mad."

"I'm sorry I just can't imagine someone being scared of Eliza. She's...well...Eliza. She's like the sweetest girl ever." I scoffed.

"Sweet? Your kidding right?" Bella shook her head.

"No, she's lovely. If you weren't such a jerk when you met her you would know that. But she doesn't like you, so she doesn't bother being nice to you." I frowned. Yeah I've wasnt exactly warm and cuddly when I met her, but neither was she, and I was just joking around. Does she honestly not like me? Maybe I should have let her get to know me before going all Doncaster sass master on her.

"Does Eliza seriously not like me?" I asked Bella. She shook her head.

"She doesn't like you. And honestly why would she, you've been an ass ever since you met her. You havnt exactly given her any reason to like you." I scrunched my eyebrows.

"But you like me. Shouldn't the fact that you like me make her give me a chance?" Isn't that how girls work?

"She did give you a chance, meeting her was your chance to show her your not a rude stuck up celebrity, but you sorts blew it. The other guys on the other hand were nice. She like them, just not you." I frowned again, looking away. No one that's actually met me doesnt like me. I'm a likeable person. Bella noticed my disappointment.

"Lou just be a little nicer, maybe tone down the sass and sarcasm for a while." She smiled softly and I nodded.

"Ok. But first lets get off this floor because my arse is going numb," I smiled. She nodded. I slowly lifted her up into a sitting position.

"Any dizziness?" She shook her head. I stood up and put my arm around her waist, helping her stand up.

"You alright," I asked her when she stumbled a bit.

"Yeah yeah, just a little bit of a head rush," I looked at her uncertainly. "I'm fine Louis." I nodded and slowly walked her to her room, supporting almost all of her weight, despite her constantly telling me she can walk. Once I was certain she wasn't going to jump out of bed the minute I left, I went and made her some toast and got her more water, then hopped into bed with her while she ate. It took a while for me to let her get up again and have a shower, but I stayed near the door the whole time ready to run in again if I heard a thud. When she emerged from the bathroom after 20 minutes she gave me an 'I told you so' look.

Harry slept in till like 1 o'clock. When he finally got up he was really tired. He went to sleep the same time as the rest of us, why was he so sleepy? Oh well. Him and Zayn went out somewhere and Liam went over to speant some time with Dani. The two had seemed to patch things just fine. I don't know how, if El had cheated on me.....I'm not even gonna go there. I heard a know at the door. Oh right, Eliza's coming over. Time to start Mission get Eliza to not completely hate me. Yeah I know, I need a better name for the mission.

"Hey Eliza, how are you?" I asked smiling when I open. She seemed surpised at my nice greeting. Was I really that bad that it was surprising I am capable of being nice? I called out to Bella and she came out of her room, she looked completely normal again, but I was still keeping a close eye on her.

"Hey Bella, how ya feelin?" Eliza went over and gave her a hug.

"I'm fine, Louis hasn't bloody left my side all day," Bella rolled her eyes at me. She had continually tried to make me leave her alone but I wanted to keep an eye in her.

"Well thank you Louis," Eliza smiled at me sincerely.

"No problem," I smiled back at her. Eliza and Bella disappeared upstairs for an hour before coming back downstairs declaring they wanted to watch a movie.

"Hunger games?"

"Seen it too many times."


"Nah, not in the mood." I suggested about 10 other movies, all of which were shot down.

"What do you want to watch," I finally gave up.

"Lets just watch old episodes of Big Bang Theory or something," Eliza said. Bella agreed and I shrugged so we turned on the tv and started watching it. I think getting Eliza to like me was working, she had been nice and so had I.

After a few episodes Bella got up to go to the toilet. I got out my phone and started scrolling though twitter. I rolled my eyes when I saw that #BerryStymos was trending. I looked up from my phone, about to say something to Eliza, but stopped when I saw her face. She suddenly looked really panicked and tears were forming in her eyes.

"Eliza.." I spoke hesitantly, "Are you ok," she started to nod her head but changed her mind and started staking it quickly. She was obviously having a lot of trouble breathing, and was starting to shake.

"Oh god.. Um what do I do," I mumbled. A tear slipped down her cheek as she continued to gasp for air.

"Uh um breath. Yeah breath, just keep breathing, ok, try to breath," I said in a rush, now kneeling beside her. She wasn't getting any better, in fact, she was getting worse. Seriously what's going on with people today, is it like national have some sort of physical break down in front on Louis day or someone?

"Crap..c'mon just keep breathing Eliza." I rubbed her back attempting to be soothing. "BELLA!" I shouted out. She came into the room and her eyes widened when she saw Eliza, but immediately regained her composure. She calmly walked over to Eliza and sat down beside her.

"Louis move back a little," How was Bella being so calm? I did what she told and Bella turned back to Eliza. "Eliza, babe look at me," Eliza shakily tuned her head to Bella. "Okay, just focus on your breathing with me, breath in....breath out," Bella continued to say that while doing it, encouraging Eliza to do the same. "Lou go open the window," she instructed. I did what she told. After a few minutes Eliza was breathing normally and had stopped crying and shaking.

"You okay love?" I asked, hesitantly. Eliza nodded at me.

"Yeah, thanks." I nodded back at her.

"Okay, if your alright now, may I ask what just happened?"

"Panic attack," Bella stated simply. I scrunched my eyebrows.

"You get panic attacks?" Eliza nodded.

"Yeah, I havnt had one for ages though."

"Ok, why did you have one?" They looked at me, confused.

"What do you mean,"

"Like, why was she panicked?" How was my question confusing.

"She wasn't panicked," Bella told me.

"What? She had a panic attack." I said, emphasising the word panic.

"Panick attacks don't usually have to happen when your panicked ((A/N this is true)), they just....happen." Bella shrugged. I started at her, dumbfounded.

"They why the hell are they called panick attacks?" I whined. "That's confusing!" Bella laughed and put an arm around my shoulder.

"I guess we'll never know!"

Harry's PoV
Me and Zayn got back to the apartment as Eliza was leaving. Then the weirdest thing happened.

"Bye Bella, by Lou," Eliza smiled at both of them before walking out the door. Did she just say goodbye to Louis? Like actually goodbye? Not in a bitchy way? Damn what the hell happened while we were gone.

"Uh Louis-," Zayn started, "Since when does Eliza not hate you?" Louis smiled proudly.

"I'm being nice to her now." I laughed, I couldn't help myself. Zayn did to. Louis looked offended and Bella was giving him a fake sympathy hug.

"You know what just for that I get to choose the movie we watch tonight," he spoke cockily.

"Fine by me," I shrugged. "If I don't want to watch it I'll just watch a movie in my room." Louis huffed. After we had dinner (a very late dinner I might add) Louis picked out a movie, a really shit movie.

"C'mon Louis I don't wanna watch this!" Bella whined.

"Well Niall Zayn and Liam are fine with it, majority rules." Bella mumbled something under her breath, I think she said 'ass'.

"Whatever, I'll watch something in Harry's room,"

"I will to," I chimed in.

"Oh guys wait a second," Zayn called us back. "Little Mix are touring Australia in like a week and they're spending a few weeks in Sydney, just thought I'd let you know." Bella instantly smiled.

"Yay! I havnt seen them in person for a while," Zayn snapped his had back up.

"What do you mean in person," Bella smiled.

"I Skype with them all the time, mainly Perrie though."

"What? You Skype with my girlfriend" This was obviously news to Zayn.

"Yep," Bella said popping the 'p' before walking upstairs to my bedroom. I put in the Avengers and sat down on the bed, motioning for her to join me. She came and sat between my legs, leaning on my chest. I sighed, resting my head in the crook of her neck. I loved when we got to sit in 'coupley' positions, as cheesy as it is. Actually I love just being with her in general. I love her. About half way through the movie Bella had fallen asleep leaning on me. About ten minutes later the door opened, Niall. I rolled my eyes, he'd been a real ass the past few days.

"Yes?" I asked. He smirked when he saw Bella asleep on me. Seriously, what's with him.

"I just wanted ask Bella something, but it can wait till morning." He went to close the door but I called him back.

"Wait Niall," He looked back at me. "Why have you been acting so different lately." He just shrugged and walked out before I could say anything else. Whatever.

Once the movie finished I turned off the tv, just as Niall came in again.

"Hey mate, do you need any help taking Bella back downstairs?" He asked.

"Nah I don't wanna risk waking her up, she can just stay here for the night." Also, Bellas as light a feather, why would I need help?

"Ok, thought so." He smirked and left the room. I'll never understand that Irish psychopath. Carefully, I layed down, Bella still in my arms. After a while I sighed, looking at her beautiful features while she slept. I kissed her lightly on the cheek.

"I love you Bella."


Depending on how long it takes to do my homework, the next chapter might be up sometime this weekend (keeping in mind this weekend is lasting till tuesday)

cant think of any questions! Just let me know your thoughts, thanks

ps. I'm uploading a new story 'crown of thorns' its not my story, its one from another site, but its brilliantly written and planned out, so please all read it, it's practically my favourite fic of all times! That's why I'm uploading it, so people on this site can share my love for the story!


Holy fuck I need to know what happens. Please just tell me Harry and Bella make it through everything and end up together because I might lose my mind if not. This is so good but holy shit my emotions

Just read this tonight. Please please do a sequel. Your writing is amazing.

I'm so ready for the sequel. I can't function until I know what happens. You are an awesome writer!

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This story is amazing I have read the whole thing in he past 48 hours and it's just amazing. You are great writer and I know it's been long but can you like write a sequel or something for closure... find out what happens with Bella and Harry? I need closure... Anyway your story is really good!!! =)

Please update! I just read this entire story today during classes! I REALLY need to know what happens to Harry and Bella! I need closure or else I go crazy! And I really want a sequel! Pretty pretty please! I'm even asking nicely, which is a surprise because, like you, I'm known to have a pretty fowl mouth although I'm American, so I don't have your excuse! ^_^