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Perfect Act

I don't know

Harry's PoV
I pushed past Paul into Bellas room and froze. She was lying alone on the bed. Her face was chalk white, she was sweating and shivering, her breathing was short, raspy and uneven and she was clutching her stomach. I ran to her bed and crouched down, taking her hand in mine.

"Bella, Bella look at me," She did and her eyes were watery, I knew mine were to.

"Bella were gonna take care of you ok? We'll call a doctor and it'll all be fine, don't worry." I knew I was trying to convince her as much as I was myself. They boys all piled into the room and crowded around Bella. Louis was next to me.

"Bella-" he placed his hand on her side stomach and she yelped in pain.

"Fuck Bella I'm sorry," I shoved Louis away and shot him a look. He held his arms in surrender. I turned back to Bella as she brought her hand to her mouth. I quickly lifted the bin under the chin. She practically doubled over and started spewing blood. My eyes widened.

"Shit shit shit!!!!" I yelled at the boys to get help and sat down behind her and held her while she cried. Louis wiped the blood from her chin with a tissue while Niall whipped put his phone.

"What's the Australian ambulance number?" He asked. Jesus you'd think he would know that.

"Tipple zero," Liam answered. Niall left the room for a minute then came back.

"Ambulance are on there way, they said if possible bring her down to the ground level." I got off the bed and crouched in front of Bella.

"Bella, the paramedics are coming, but we need to get you into the foyer of the building, I'm gonna carry you down ok." She gave me a weak nod. I placed my arms underneath her and lifted her into my arms, she felt so small and fragile. I started walking and she gasped, once again clutching her stomach. I bit my lip.

"I'm sorry Bella," I continued walking while she cried out in pain and tears rushed down her cheeks. I was on the verge of tears seeing her in this much pain.

"I'm sorry Bella, I'm so sorry, please be ok, I'm sorry, stop crying please, Bella I'm so sorry," I murmerd into her ear whilst in the elevator. When we stepped out I saw the ambulance parking outside the building and paramedics bringing out a stretcher.

"Sir we're taking her to the hospital we need you to go to the hospital to the waiting room as soon as posible and a doctor will ask you some questions about Bella so we can figure out what's going on." They took her from my arms and drove of to the hospital, leaving me and the others standing there, helplessly.

"C'mon mate," Zayn pulled me towards the car, past all the paperazzi snapping pictures.


"How long have we been here for," I sighed exasperated.

"It's only been like five minutes. It'll be fine Haz." I stood up and turned to Zayn with a scowl on my face.

"How the bloody hell can you say it'll all be fine? Did you not see her or something!!! She was fucking spewing blood! DONT TELL ME IT WILL BE FINE!" People were starting to stare and Zayn pulled me back down.

"Stop attracting attention" he hissed. "We don't know what's going on so until we do just try to be positive." I didnt answer and just looked away, still fighting back tears. A nurse came into the waiting room.

"Who's here with Bella Ramos?" The boys and I stood up and she came over to us.

"I need to ask you some questions about Bella." We all nodded.

"Whats her birth date?" Niall answered that question.

"What are her male and female guardians names?"

"Uhhh-" we couldn't answer. She sighed.

"Parents?" We all hesitantly shrugged.

"Does she have any family that live close by?"


"Does she have diabetes, asthma, any allergies." We all looked at the floor and the nurse took a deep breath.

"Is there a chance she could be pregnant." I thought about it. If she was, wouldnt she be showing by now? What do I know though. No. She couldn't be pregnant. No way was Ky's baby growing in her. Ew.

"I don't think so." I replied.

"Are you sure," she raised her eyebrows. My shoulders slumped and I shrugged again.

"Alright, moving on. Do you know her emergency contacts?" We shook our heads.

"Does Bella have any disorders." We all cocked our heads to the side, probably looking like idiots. The nurse rolled her eyes.

"Bulimia, depression, bipola, anxiety, anorexia. Things like that." I looked at the boys who were looking as lost as I was. The nurse sighed.

"Do you boys know anything about Ms. Ramos? Anything that would be useful? At all?" My shoulders slumped.

"No," I mumbled.

"Is there someone I can call will be helpful?" I nodded.

"Yeah, Luke. I called him, he should be here soon." As if on cue he came running through the door.

"Where is she? Is she ok? What happened?" I was shocked at how panicked and vulnerable Luke seemed.

"Sir I need you to calm down and answer a few questions for me. After I have these answers I'll go get an update of Ms. Ramos. " he nodded.

"Male and Female guardians," his face hardened

"Why don't I write that down, so its spelt right," He gave her a sweet smile while we all frowned in confusion. The nurse seemed skeptical but handed him the chart anyways. She seemed to understand once he had written it, but I still was clueless as he was holding the chart away from me. He continued to write down on the chart muttering what he was writing under his breath, although I couldn't here it. I did however catch 5 words.

"No way is she pregnant."

"Wait what?" He looked up, startled. "How can you know she's not pregnant?" I pressed. He had a hint of guilt in his eyes.

"After living with two girls who had synced period cycles for a while it got fucking annoying. So me and Jamie got a friend of ours and....well long story short both Bella and Eliza are unknowingly entering there period data on to mine and Jamie's phone every time they put it on there own phones. Everything's been......normal since--" he tailed off and looked down. I knew what he meant. Since that fucking bastard Ky raped Bella. The next words I said made me feel sick inside.

"What if she's had sex since then?" Luke shook his head.

"She's had sex once in her life," he said.

"How do you know that?" I asked, curious. He rolled his eyes.

"Are you going to ask me how I know everything?" I held my hands up in surrender. Then I fully processed what he had said a moment ago.

"Wait. When---he....uh," Luke cut me off.

"When Ky raped her he was taking her virginity, yes." His face had a deathly glare on it as he went back to the paper work. I shakily sat back down. Son of a fucking bitch. Not only had Ky beat and raped her. He had stolen her virginity. And there was no taking that back.


An hour passed since the nurse had left. In that time Jamie had come to the hospital, but there was no sign of Eliza. Someone in scrubs came back into the waiting room. He looked around, then once he saw us came over us. We all shot off our seats.

"You boys are here with Ms. Ramos?" We nodded. He sighed.

"What is it? Just say it." Niall practically begged.

"It's not looking good. Bella had some internal bleeding. From what we've been told we are suspecting it was caused a few weeks ago when she was punched in the stomach. Some information we have received and what we found once inside Bella has led us to believe that a certain area of her abdomen was damaged in the past and this blow to her stomach was the final thread for what her body could handle.

"The bleeding was very small, almost non-existent at first, but gradually it became worse and that's what caused Bellas pain and sickness. The fact that her injuries where undetected at first has made this situation much more difficult to deal with. Right now Ms. Ramos is in surgery and is in a fatal condition. They surgery is estimated to last for another 6-8 hours. But, as one of her doctors i should tell you, even if all goes well there is still a good chance she won't wake up. I'm sorry, I'll have someone update you hourly."

I fell to the floor. head in my hands, and I felt one of the boys, most likely Louis, put his arms around me. I finally let go of all the tears I had been holding back and sobbed uncontrollably. I heard Niall ask the doctor one last thing.

"I know it might not be your place to say, but personally, do you think she'll be ok?" He sounded hopeless and desperate. I faintly heard the doctors answer.

"I don't know."


Hey. Sorry its been a while. I was away for a couple of days with no wifi, I planned to update when I came back yesterday but suddenly got sick. Isn't it funny how I wrote that Bella got sick, then I get sick. Ahh irony, a heartless bitch.

Anyway here is the chapter, I hope it's good, lemme know what you think. I may update later today if I can.
ahhh I'm seeing 1D next Wednesday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T FRICKEN WAIT.

Do you think Eliza will show up?

will Bella be okay?

what will happen next?


Holy fuck I need to know what happens. Please just tell me Harry and Bella make it through everything and end up together because I might lose my mind if not. This is so good but holy shit my emotions

Just read this tonight. Please please do a sequel. Your writing is amazing.

I'm so ready for the sequel. I can't function until I know what happens. You are an awesome writer!

Akrakl101 Akrakl101

This story is amazing I have read the whole thing in he past 48 hours and it's just amazing. You are great writer and I know it's been long but can you like write a sequel or something for closure... find out what happens with Bella and Harry? I need closure... Anyway your story is really good!!! =)

Please update! I just read this entire story today during classes! I REALLY need to know what happens to Harry and Bella! I need closure or else I go crazy! And I really want a sequel! Pretty pretty please! I'm even asking nicely, which is a surprise because, like you, I'm known to have a pretty fowl mouth although I'm American, so I don't have your excuse! ^_^