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Perfect Act


Harry's PoV
"Well Bella, since we haven't been out much, do you know any good clubs?" I asked.

"Yeah there's actually a really good one thats like a thirty second drive away. You can literally walk there in heels." We all agreed to be ready in an hour. Everyone broke off into there separate rooms. Naturally El went into Louis room and Dani went into Liam's room. I had a feeling they would be doing more than just getting ready. Zayn and I both got ready within 5 minutes so he stayed in his room on his phone and I turned on the telly to watch something. The footy (AFL) was on and I decided to watch it. I have to admit, it was more interesting than our version of footy. After about another 40 minutes Bella emergerged from her room. Her hair was flowing around her shoulders and she had minimal makeup on yet she looked 100 times better than those cake face barbie type girls. She had on a short tight red strapless dress, but her hands were both behind her back.

"Can you zip me up Harry?" She asked sweetly. Was she fucking kidding? She was killing me looking like this and she wanted me to zip her up. Of course.

"Sure," I smiled and got up and stood behind her taking hold of the dress and the zip. When I took hold of the dress she let go. Wow she trusted me more than I would have. Then I realised. My hand were the only thing holding this dress up on her body. If I let go then..... Harry you perve! Do the dress up! I mentally scolded myself for thinking like that. I slid the zip up carefully so no material got caught then stepped back. She turned around and as much as I tryed to stop it I couldn't, my eyes flew open and I looked at her body. Quickly I shot my head back up to look at her face.

"You look great Bella," I smiled. She didnt seem fazed by how I was looking at her. She mustn't of noticed. Thank god.

"Thanks Harry," she smiled and stepped past me back into her bedroom. Once the door closed I collapsed back onto the couch with my head in my hands. I was falling for her. Hard. There was no stopping it.

Eleanor's PoV
Eventually, Louis and I got ready for going clubbing and headed downstairs to find Harry on the couch with his head in his hands. Louis quietly asked me if he could talk to Harry for a minute. I politely said yes but stood behind a wall so I could listen and see what was going on. Yeah yeah I know eavesdropping is rude blah blah blah but I can't help it. I watched as Louis sat down next to Harry and put a hand on his back.

"What do I do?" Harry asked. Wait, does Louis already know something.

"I'm guessing you've realised how hard your falling for her." Louis said. Ohh Harrys lady, i wonder who.

"I'm so screwed. She's fucking let us live with her and as repayment, I'm falling for her!" Wait, was he talking about Bella?

"You know my track record with girls. Me and Bella were just starting to get close and I'm gonna end up making a mess of everything!" Oh my god he was talking about Bella! How sweet they would be adorable together!

"Mate, I know your gonna wanna punch me for saying this, but I don't think you and Bella would be a good idea." WHAT! Why they would be perfect. I was about to barge in when Louis continued.
"Bella obviously doesn't like talking about herself and that means she's gone through something. She seems delicate." What the fuck? I had just spent three straight days with her she was anything but delicate.

"And like you said, your history with women isn't the greatest, I think it might be best for you and Bella to stay friends." Oh my god Louis what the hell! He just told his best friend to not go for the girl he liked because he had bad history with girls. Well maybe she would be the one that changed that! I was furious, but I knew Louis would get really mad if he found out i was eavesdropping, so I would save the conversation for another time.

Bellas PoV
At about 7:45 I left my room to find Louis and Harry whispering on the couch. They immediately stopped the second the saw me.

"Is everything ok?" I said slowly. Harry stood up.

"Yah everything's fine. Lets get going the others should all be ready by now." He was smiling but his voice was a little shaky. I figured I'd try to get more out of him later. Louis called everyone down and we headed to the club. We figured we may aswell walk since it was practically just down the road. Once we got there Niall went straight to the bar and got everyone drinks. After a few beers I decided I was loose enough and went to dance with El and Dani. Eventually Liam and Louis came to dance with their girls so I went back to sit down. Zayn was at the bar talking on his phone like he had been doing alot over the past few days and Niall was grinding with some girl who was even more drunk then he was. That left Harry who was sitting lonely at the table with a drink in his hand. He looked troubled. I went up to him.

"Harry are you ok," I put my hand on his shoulder and he jolted aways. Ummm........ok. I sat down next to him.

"Harry what's going on."

"Nothing," he mumbled unconvincingly.


"Just stop." He cut me off. "I'm fine just fucking piss of Bella. Go dance with some guy or whatever," he scanned my body, "Slut." He finished his drink and stood up, leaving me there, stunned and silent.

Harry's PoV
Fuck. That's all I could think as I looked at myself in the bathroom mirror. Fuck. Had I seriously just told Bella to fuck off and then called her a slut?! Shit Harry what is wrong with you!? I took a deep breath and walked back to our seats where Bella was sitting. Talking to some guy. I was about to turn around when I caught some of there conversation.

"No, I'm fine."

"C'mon babe it's just one dance." He slurred

"Look, fuck off. I don't know you, I don't want to know you and I will punch you if you don't leave." The guys didnt back off, he took a step closer though.

"Babe just dance with me." He went to grab her arm when I turned him around and punched him.

"She said fuck off." I growled in his face. He got the message and left. I turned back around to Bella who was looking at me. She averted her eyes quickly when I turned back around and mumbled a small thanks. I sighed.

"Bella I am so sorry." I sat down next to her and she shuffled away just a tiny bit.

"Bella please I shouldn't have said that to you and I didn't mean it I know I'm a dickhead I just have a lot on my mind. I know that's not an excuse but-"

"Harry, its ok." She cut me off. What? How was it ok? I had called her a slut.

"No it's not I shouldn't have said it and I didn't mean it. I actually think you look really beautiful. I'm so sorry Bella."

"Harry I'm saying I believe you and I accept your apology. It's ok. We're ok." She smiled at me softly.

"Thank you Bella." I leaned in and gave her a hug. She wrapped her arms around my waist and I wrapped mine around her shoulders. Louis was wrong. I was going to get Bella and for once I was going to not screw it up. Me and Bella stayed like that for a few minutes, just hugging each other. It felt amazing. It felt right.


Naww Harry's so falling for her. She is so clueless, how sweet.

Hey! As always lemme know what you think of this chapter and what you think might happen next. I know not much really happened in it but in two chapters time (I think it's two at least) something big happens so if this chapter isn't that good I hope the one coming up will be. I may update later tonight but if I don't I will update tomorrow.



Holy fuck I need to know what happens. Please just tell me Harry and Bella make it through everything and end up together because I might lose my mind if not. This is so good but holy shit my emotions

Just read this tonight. Please please do a sequel. Your writing is amazing.

I'm so ready for the sequel. I can't function until I know what happens. You are an awesome writer!

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This story is amazing I have read the whole thing in he past 48 hours and it's just amazing. You are great writer and I know it's been long but can you like write a sequel or something for closure... find out what happens with Bella and Harry? I need closure... Anyway your story is really good!!! =)

Please update! I just read this entire story today during classes! I REALLY need to know what happens to Harry and Bella! I need closure or else I go crazy! And I really want a sequel! Pretty pretty please! I'm even asking nicely, which is a surprise because, like you, I'm known to have a pretty fowl mouth although I'm American, so I don't have your excuse! ^_^