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Josh (Josh Devine/ Niall Horan)

Chapter 14 Pt. 1

When I finished unpacking I put on my pajamas and walked out into the lounge where Louis and Eleanor sat. Eleanor was cuddled into Louis chest and they were both smiling crazily.

"Hey Lou." I said, waving my hand slightly.

"You wanna watch a movie with us?" Eleanor giggled as Louis left multiple kisses on her neck.

"Oh nah. You guys can be alone." I winked, putting some butter on a slice of bread.

"No stay! It will be fun!" Eleanor beamed.

"Alright fine!" I huffed.

Louis sighed and gave me a jokey glare, I knew he wanted to be alone with Eleanor, but I couldn't help it. "Lou... Your digging into me..." Eleanor said, awkwardly and wriggled in Louis lap. Louis' face went bright red. Eleanor giggled and placed a pillow over his hard crotch before laying back down on him.

"Comfortable?" Louis asked, clearly amused by Eleanor's actions.

"Yes thank you." She stated simply.

I carried on watching the movie until I heard something vibrate. Louis took his phone out of his pocket. "Niall wants to know; how's your face?" Louis read from his phone.

"I don't want to talk about it." I heard my voice quaver on the subject.

"How hard did he hit you?" Louis question poured out freely like a waterfall. I couldn't handle it

I buried my face in my hands and ran to my bedroom, crying. I heard Eleanor's footsteps following mine after hitting Louis and scolding him. "Natalie wait!" She called after me. I jumped on my bed and cried into the pillow. I was only alone for a few seconds before I felt the weight on the bottom of the bed go down. It was Eleanor. She rubbed my back and I could tell she was telling Louis to leave the room in a hushed tone. "Do you wanna talk about it?" She asked softly.

I shook my head into the pillow. Then had second thoughts. "I just can't believe Niall would do that!" I cried in exasperation.

"Neither can I..." El replied. "Hey... I'm going to a party tomorrow night, with Lou. Wanna come? It'll take your mind off things." She asked.

"Will the boys be there?" I asked suspiciously.

"Well yeah... But there will be a lot of other attractive boys there!" She nudged my shoulder.

"Ok then." I giggled.

"Goodnight." She stated, hugging me.

"Night." You replied back


There is still more to Chapter 14, I have been busy and thought I should at least update part of the next chapter. This part is mostly filler, and I'm sorry.

I will try and post the rest of Chapter 14 on Wednesday, when I have more time.

What do you think will happen next? Will Natalie forgive Niall and go back to him? Or will she stay away from him for a while?


I liked this story but it was rushed. But yours was different you rushed it but still made me intrigued. Also not a fan of them having sex every time they get back together. Other than that I think you should do a squel.

omgeez thank you!!!!!!

i havent been on for a while and when i came back i had tons of alerts and after i finished reading this i started to cry and im probably sounding like a baby but i love this fanfic and a lot of others too and i come back on and so many stories have ended but dont end this one, make a sequel to it like you said, thank you for this book

OMG you should make another story when you can xxx

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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