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My incomplete story

Chapter 5

~Ellie’s pov~
When I woke up again I rubbed my eyes and was glad to see Marcel was human.
“Oh my god! Marcel! I had the scariest dream ever, you were a wolf and then I said I loved you ah!” I rambled on when suddenly Marcel shook his head.
“Sorry to disappoint, but that’s all true.” He laughed and I shoved closer to him. I gently whacked him on the arm before smiling and tilting my head to the side. Marcel’s curls had gone wild and my heart melted.
“Hi,” I whispered.
“Hello,” he responded before moving closer. Our lips crashed into each other and my fingers tangled through his hair. He licked my bottom lip, asking permission for entrance, so I allowed him in. Marcel’s hand covered my hips but I pulled back.
“Take, it, slow,” I gasped, gaining oxygen, Marcel smirked and I got lost in his emerald orbs. I took the time to notice him now that he wasn’t geeky any more.
Marcel had a navy blue T-Shirt and black slim fitted jeans. He was wearing some kind of blue converse and had an ocean colored beanie on. I rested my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around my waist. Marcel what stupidly hot (in both ways) and his extra muscle made him comfy.
“Have you ever thought, about making someone else a wolf? Can you do that?” I asked, hope in my voice.
“How about I’ll call Harry over ‘cos I have loads of questions?” Marcel replied, brining out his phone.
Marcel
Hey come meet up with us (in human form) ‘cos we have loads of questions for you. You can bring the others too.
Harry
K, Sure, thanks
Within a couple minutes Harry and the others came and sat in the circle with me and Marcel.
“Why are we here?” Liam asked.
“I just wanted to ask some questions and have Harry or whatever explain some more.”
“More what?” Zayn question, puffing through the air with his cancer stick.
“Okay so like you don’t have to pretend anymore!” Marcel exclaimed and just as he finished Zayn got a text. I sighed and he grinned.
“Just teasing, wolf,” Marcel shook my head and began demanding answers.
“So Ellie and I were talking earlier and she asked me a couple questions which I am now going to ask you. So err the first one is ehm and I actually in a pack?” Marcel knew that he was going to get a bad answer with this one.
“Bro, you’re related to me so you have to be in this pack,” Harry replied like it was obvious.
“Calm down, this is all new to me!” Marcel threw his hands in the air and raised his eyebrows.
“Can I make other people wolves? Ellie wants to know.” I blushed furiously and smiled in embarrassment.
“Yeah but I wouldn’t recommend it,” Niall answered, “People are lucky to survive becoming a wolf like that. It’s deathly.” That answers that then; I was hoping he could make me a wolf. Marcel defiantly wouldn’t do that to me now. I guess I’ll have to be forever aging.
“Do wolves age?” I asked and Louis shook his head. I sighed and my heart sank. Marcel’s already two years older and now he never ages at all.
~Rhydian’s pov~ (pronounce Ri-Dee-An)
My throat burned for the taste of blood. That warm gooey mixture to slide down my throat. I ran at the speed of lighting across the field of the dead. Jumping over the dead bodies for they just got in my way. I was chasing a human who had earlier seen me feed. I wiped my mouth for the blood was drying. I caught up with the male within seconds.
“Help, Help!” he yelped for safety but his cries where but off but my teeth, literally. They sank straight through his muscle and through his wind pipe. The blood gushed out of his neck and into my mouth. The soft liquid trickled down my throat and soothed the pain. I drained his body after a couple of minutes and felt fairly satisfied. Although, satisfaction comes with hyper so I had to murder that energy as well. I ran 56 laps of the field before feeling normal again.
I ran back to where I last fed to dispose of the body. With ease I placed it upon my shoulder and began walking to find a clear tree. When I reached one I dumped it underneath and ran to find another meal. I could hear a heart beat near here. It was a females and she seemed relaxed. I knew my veins were bulging and if I was going to subtly approach her then I would have to look normal. I calmed myself before neatening my hair and clothes. I made the decision to come and ask for some help then when they were distracted I would take the girl and feed. As I got closer to the heart beat I could make out seven figures, all boys except one girl. Five of them were a familiar pack that I had come across. This was going to be tricky.
I took a deep breath and entered the circle of trees. All of their heads snapped to look at me. “Um, hello, can I have some help?” I asked and the boy with the curliest hair yelped.
“Everyone, back away! Now! That’s an order!” he hollered and they stood and ran a couple miles back, all except the blonde one and that other person. They were a familiar gang that I’d come across and the ending was nasty.
“I just need some help, please!” I pleaded but they weren’t having none of it.
“Get away!”
“Wait,” that girl with the heart spoke, her voice harmonious. Her delicate hand reached out to me before being smacked away but someone. “Don’t,” she whispered, “how is this boy a danger to us? To me?” she asked.
“You know earlier I said that you don’t live in the world you think you do, well he’s another beast. He’s a vampire, a blood sucker.” The person who seemed to be her mate replied.
“Well, he doesn’t look evil and I know a thing or two for remember what I said earlier,” she insisted before turning her head to me, “Stay where you are or else.” I automatically froze and I knew my thirst had gone. I didn’t wish to kill this beautiful soul, I couldn’t do that. She came closer and her heart got faster. Her hand reached out to my neck and when she came her hot fingers burned. I shivered as she traced the crescent from where I’d been changed. Her mixed colored eyes burned a hole into mine. Our eyes never left each other’s except from the part where she traced my bulging veins.
“You are a vampire, are you not?” why didn’t she call me a blood sucker?
“Yes,” I hissed before continuing, “The name is Rhydian. You must be a human then, you have a nice heart beat, almost dance rhythm,” she shivered when I said dance, her past amused me. All of her childhood memories where now mine. I turned my head to the boy that was now Ellie’s mate, what a wonderful name. “I see you have joined the pack. Well I see we shall not get along. Oh and Ellie, what a beautiful name,” I smirked and pulled her closer to me. Her heart began to sound like the salsa as I grabbed her hand.
“Oh no,” that boy, Marcel, gasped.
“Stay calm; I have no intention of hurting her, just teasing you. Here I’ll let her go, but Ellie, keep this.” I placed a piece of paper which had my address and phone number on down her top and winked before turning around, “Just in case you want me,” I said before running with a grin on my face.
I waited at home for her call and eventually it came.
~Marcel’s pov~
Okay sorry ‘bout this but here is where it get’s just a bit dirty, OK just a caution!
“Urgh, that twat has seriously got some nerves! Treating you like that!” I was in a foul mood but I had to calm down before I end up changed.
“Babe, calm down its okay. I’m here now and safe.” Ellie assured but that made it worse.
“How can we know you’re safe? That blood sucker bloody read your mind I mean he could be stalking us now!” I exclaimed and then felt bad as a tear slithered down Ellie’s cheek.
“I’m sorry,” she muttered before opening her eyes and wiping them furiously.
“No I’m sorry it’s just that no one treats you like some kind of toy Ellie, I love you but we need to keep an eye on you.” I replied feeling genuinely guilty. We were back at her house by now and I was lying on her bed while she sat at her desk.
“How can I show you I’m yours?” she asked and one thing went straight into my mind. Sex, call me rude or dirty minded but that’s the truth. She read my face and said the least expected thing ever. “Okay, show me what you’ve got,”
Ellie came over and began to kiss me. Overjoyed I kissed her back and nibbled at her bottom lip, she gave me entrance and our tongues where battling. My hands slid all over her body as her fingers tangled through her hair. Her hands moved down toward my top and I ripped it off with ease. She pulled back for breath and took this time to ask her something. “Are you sure you wish to do this?” she nodded in reply and pushed me back. Ellie was now hovering above me and she pushed herself closer to my body. We both were virgins so this was our first time. I let out a moan as her crotch touched my groin. I couldn’t control my hands as they ripped off her shirt which left her in her bra. She gasped as a cold breeze entered the room so I wrapped myself around her body to keep her warm. Ellie’s hands traced my abs getting lower and lower until she reached my trousers. I slid them off within a second and was left in my boxer shorts. She bit her lip and stared at me.
“I love you Marcel but please quit teasing me.” She pleaded before slipping out of her fabric shorts. Her matching lace bra and briefs made her blush but I didn’t care. I crawled closer and licked my lips, hungry for Ellie. When I was close enough to kiss her I took off her bra and she clutched to duvet cover. I pressed her breast against my chest and she let out a moan. She mumbled something likes ‘stop teasing me!’ and I chuckled. I ripped off my boxer shorts and did the same with her underwear. She gasped at my bulge but at least I had something. I kissed her before slowly placing one of my fingers in her. She gasped in shock and then moaned. Her head was tilted back and her breast with pushed up. Ellie regained calmness and sat up. I lifted her thigh and placed another finger in. She winced at the pain,
“I know baby and I’m sorry it’s hurting you.” I felt guilty yet I knew that she loved it. When I agreed that she was ready I took my fingers out and wiped them on a bit on tissue. “You’re ready,” I sat back and kissed her roughly, one hand placing my bulge in her and the other tangling through her hair. Ellie’s nails clawed at my back but it left no mark for my skin was like rubber. I knew when the pain returned for she winced and closed her eyes tighter. I pulled in and out, now that my bulge was in her, she relaxed and moaned. Ellie rocked her hips and I grinned at her trying to help. We kissed and when she pulled back she was gasping,
“This feels so good,” she moaned and begged, “faster, Marcel, please faster!” I did as commanded and sped up.
“I-I-I-I close,” I cautioned and seconds later I leaked. I blushed when she gasped but then she smirked and I knew she was okay. She grinded our hips together before pulling my bulge out and continuing our kissing. After a while Ellie pulled away and smiled.
“I love you Marcel but I seriously need a shower now!” we both laughed and she stood up. I didn’t want to push it so I nodded.
“I’m going to go home and shower before we have a pack meeting.”
“Oh err, can I come?” she asked and I felt extremely bad telling her the answer.
“I’m so sorry Ellie but pack only. I didn’t know that was the rules.”
“No problem, if I loved you I wouldn’t be upset and I’m honestly not! Okay you go have a nice time and besides I could do with a night alone,” she smiled her heart warming smile before I turned and left.
~Ellie’s pov~
I couldn’t handle it anymore. The curiosity was killing me. I raided my draws trying to find that piece of paper. I was bored and desperate for some company. Besides, Rhydian interested me. He was different and new, my two most favorite things ever. I’m not going to lie; I would’ve kissed Rhydian there and then. He was, as my mum would say, ‘sex on legs.’ His beautiful brown hair which had a luscious wave in it matched his eyes that were brown with a hint of red. Rhydian smooth and pale skin makes my skin crawl and his idea of leather makes him stand out. The name Rhydian is a perfect match for his look. I could just get lost in those orbs of his. First werewolves and now vampires, this makes me question, is everything real? All those myths about minotaurus and phoenix, can they be real too?
I eventually found what I was looking for and rang the number.
“Hello?” Rhydian replied, I knew his voice.
“Hey, this is Ellie.”
“Ah hello, did you get bored?”
“Yeah, can I come over? You interest me.”
“Yes, now.” I hung up and got into my car. His house was easy to find. It was in an empty estate which only druggies come to for sex or whatever. His house was number 2019, weird for that’s the year now. I knocked on the door and Rhydian opened it.
“Home alone?” I commented, an obvious rhetorical question. He looked at me and I noticed that his eyes were browner. “You’re eyes, they more brown than before.”
“Yes that’s because I’ve decided to live a healthier way. On animal blood, not human.” That fact shocked me, how could someone like him change so suddenly? “I can still read your thoughts, thanks for not calling me a bloodsucker and it’s ‘cos of you. Never mind now anyway. What do you wish to do?”
“I want to get to know you. You are something new, something different.” I replied and sat down on the leather sofa.
“So what do you wish to know?” he asked an obvious wish in his voice.
“How did you get bitten?” he smiled and began talking.
“I was eighteen, having the time of my life. We went mountain climbing for my birthday and decided to stay at the forest at the bottom of the mountain the day before. It was the middle of the night when I got awoken by someone rattling about outside. Curiosity over took fear and before I knew it I was outside. A man was standing with blood dribbling down his mouth. I froze in fright but he was next to me in a second. His mouth on my neck but it was only a second’s pain. ‘You’re a keeper.’ He muttered before running back away and I ran too. In time I learned about myself and what I was and it’s been two-hundred and thirty four years since that happened.” he finished and I knew my mouth was agape.
“Oh my god, I’m so sorry.” I whispered my eyes tearing.
“I haven’t loved since that but now I’ve found you I know what it feels like. Ellie I’m in love with you. I was planning on killing you earlier but I didn’t ‘cos my heart felt something and I changed to animal blood to prove that I wouldn’t kill anyone close to your heart. I’ll even make a peace offering with the wolves. Ellie, just be mine!” I gasped in shock and froze. I so badly wanted to say yes but I was in a happy relationship with Marcel.
“I-I-I-I’m sorry but I’m in a relationship with that werewolf. You know that. I love him; I had sex with him earlier! If I wasn’t with him I’d say yes but I am.” I sighed and wiped the tear from Rhydian’s cheek. “I’m sorry, maybe we could be best friends, then if me and Marcel break-up, I’d be with you.
“Okay,” he smiled and I kissed him on the cheek before hugging him and leaving.

Comments

Cool! I love them too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omg I love the twilight references!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for late update but I am going to now!!!
Omg. You are like...................... Amazayn. Literally. Gawd. Lol. I need you to update ;o! NOW
The boys should be involoved by chapter 3 or 4!!!