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Hate Breaks Us Apart

Broken Hearted

Louis's POV

The girl with me wasnt Amanda. I don't know why I thought it was. Amanda was in another state. It wasnt some random girl ethier. Nope that would have been better. The girl beside me was Riley. And to make matters worse. Er nethier of us had clothes on.

I suddenly got a text from Amanda that she wanted to call and hear my voice. Befor I could text her no, the phone started to ring, waking Riley. She was shifting around. "This isn't a good time." I whispered into the phone.

"Good morning." Mumbled Riley, snuggling her face into the pillow. My heart stopped. Had Amanda heard. The silence of an ended call confirmed it. CRAP!!

Riley rolled over, and looked up at me. She saw me, and screamed, causing me to scream. "What the. How the. Did we?" She stuttered, holding the blanket around her. I shook my head and said "I don't know but..." I didnt have to finish. She got what I meant.

She groaned, and flopped back. "I can't believe this! It's gonna kill Amanda! We can't tell her!" I looked down at my phone and said,"im pretty sure she knows." Riley looked t my confused, and I explained.

"oh no! I have to go call her!" She exclaimed, hopping from bed, and throwing on her clothes that lay in a heap. I got dressed too. Riley came in a few minutes later to report she wasnt answering her phone. I can't believe I hurt her again.

Amandas POV:

After crying for awhile, I knew I had to get out of here. I couldn't take it anymore. Still a bit sore from the lightning, I got up, and snuck through the buildings, i managed to duck out of a back exit which was propped open.

I rushed through the busy streets still crying. I ran so far. I didnt know where I was going. I didnt know the city. That's when I noticed I was on a bridge. I crawled over the short railing, and looked down at the water. I was high up. I could just jump.

Louis's POV:

My phone rang. I answered it and had an unfamiliar voice ask,"are you the husband of Amanda Lee Tomlinson?

Notes

A cliff hanger! What will happen? Thank you for all the comments!!!! I love feedback!! Thank you thank you:) please comment rate and subscribe:)

Comments

Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Aw thank you so much(:

FoodAddict!! FoodAddict!!
6/16/14

I'm soooo happy you are going to start updating again!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site!! :) :D

luv u so much as an author.
OMG!!!!!! Update please!!!!!