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Hate Breaks Us Apart

My Nightmare

Amanda's POV:

I saw things. I knew they weren't real. It felt like a dream.

I was in a flower meadow. I wasnt wearing my normal clothes. I was dressed in a white flowy dress, and my hair was down blowing in the wind. Suddenly I saw a lake. I felt compelled to go to it. My legs felt funny. I had no control of them.

I saw a boat in the lake, driving away. In it was Riley, Macey, and the boys. "wait!" I called, but they just waved. "It's too late. You're already gone." Called Louis. "Please!" I screamed, trying to jump into the water, but my legs wouldn't budge.

The boat dissappeared, and I screamed. Suddenly I was being pupulled towards the sky. Wake up! Wake up! I screamed, but it was no use. I was stuck in my own nightmare.

Louis's POV:

When I woke up, I found myself in a hostpital bed. I sat up straight. I saw Niall sittin at te foot watching me. Harry and Riley were asleep on the couch leaning against one another.

"When did they stop killing each other?" I asked, and he shrugged. "I guess the figured they had more in common." Said Niall. I smiled, and suddenly remembered why I had passed out.

"Any word on Amanda?" I asked anxiously. Niall shook his head and said,"nothing besides what you heard. The others are in there with her." I got up from the bed. I was fine. I needed to see Amanda.

When I walked in, I paused in the doorway. Macey was sitting on the end of the bed staring at Amanda. "I love you Mommy." She whispered, before crawling over and kissing her hand. I smiled, my eyes watering.

Zayn, Liam, and Amanda's brother were silently watching. I slipped into the room, and Macey turned. She held out her arms, and I scooped her up an hugged her. "Nice butt Lou!" Said Zayn.

I suddenly realized the hostpital gown I had been changed into had no back. I did have underwear on thankfully. If the mood hadnt been so serious I would have played along. But not now. I just have Zayn a weak smile.

Suddenly Amanda gave a huge flinch. All eyes shot to her hoping for another movement. Nothing came. "What just happened?" Asked her brother.

Then the heart monitor let out a long beep. My head tuned in horror to see the flat line.

Notes

Gasp! What did Amanda's "dream" mean? Is she dead? What will happen? I hope you all like this story. Thank you for all the views (over 1,800) and comments an votes:). Please continue to comment rate and subscribe:).

Comments

Update? Like now? I neeeeeed to know what happens next!! I neeeeeed too!

@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Aw thank you so much(:

FoodAddict!! FoodAddict!!
6/16/14

I'm soooo happy you are going to start updating again!! This is absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site!! :) :D

luv u so much as an author.
OMG!!!!!! Update please!!!!!