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surviving the bite

chapter 84

Louis p.o.v

“hey mum” I said giving her a hug at the door.

“what are you doing here?” she asked.

“I just came to see you guys before going back to work I have a lot of interviews coming up” I said.

I sat and looked at my mum and sisters as they all sat in the sitting room chatting mindlessly to one another, I plastered a big smile on my face as I watched them laughing and having fun.

Before I knew it, it started to get late and I decided I should head off.

“I love you all so much you know that right?” I said.

“of course darling, and you know how much I love you right” mum said.

“yeah I do, you do know if anything ever happens to me I don’t want you to be upset about it I just want you to be happy of the memories and the good things that have happened” I said.

“don’t say things like that nothing is going to happen to you until I am gone” mum said.

“I love all of you” I said hugging all of them, I kissed my mum’s forehead and headed back to the car where Zayn was sitting.

“come on they will be fine” Zayn said.

Niall’s p.o.v

“bye dad” I said hugging him.

“when will you next be coming back?” my dad asked.

“I’m not sure I mean I’m going to be very busy but I’ll visit soon” I said hugging him.

“love you dad” I said.

“love you too son” he said, I let go of the hug and walked away back to the car where Rachel sat.

“come on we should go he will be fine and so will Gregg” she said.

Louis p.o.v

“everything will be fine” I said hugging all the boys.

“the girls will be fine?” Liam asked.

“with Rachel in charge of course they will” Niall said.

“Perrie did you bring it?” Zayn asked.

“here take it at least five minutes before ok, love you” Perrie said kissing Zayn before she walked off and joined the girls in the other car.

“you guys ready” I asked.

“of course” Liam said. I started to drive the car on the motor way the girls car in front of ours.

“Zayn take it now” I said.

Five minutes later and the car in front of us flipped causing our car to drive straight into it flipping onto it’s side.

Third person’s point of view

The two cars flipped and both cars went up in flames, the emergency services arrived shortly after, looking in one car there was no one in, but in the other the five boys lay there with no pulse, the ambulances arrived and they took them away in attempt to find some life in them but none were successful, within the next our the five boys Louis Tomlinson, Harry Styles, Liam Payne, Zayn Malik and Niall Horan were pronounced dead.

The news soon spread, and the Directioners, Twitter, Facebook, Tumblr blew up everyone was in histerics and the press soon grabbed the news and it was all over the TV.

Breaking news a car crash on the A1 has resulted in 5 deaths the Black range rover crashed when the car in front flipped on the road blocking the lane where the black range rover crashed also flipping, the bodies inside were identified as Harry Styles, Liam Payne, Louis Tomlinson, Niall Horan and Zayn Malik also known as the boys from One Direction, it is sad to say that there were no survivors in the crash, when emergency services arrived they checked both cars whilst the first car was empty the others in the second car were already gone it was said to be that the boys died during the impact, everyone here at BBC 1 wish the best to their families and may the five boys rest in peace.



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Hello1Dkitty Hello1Dkitty

@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Emmaaaa Emmaaaa

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3