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surviving the bite

Chapter 54

Harry’s p.o.v
“How many times do I have to tell you concentrate?” Rachel yelled at me for the hundredth time.
“I don’t know you tell me” I said with a smirk.
“Harry stop being cocky do you want to learn how to use your powers?” Rachel said.
I groaned “ can we just stop we have been doing this since I woke up” I said pouting.
“no Harry please just try to make Louis blind, Death or take away his smell or his touch maybe even his taste I’ll grab a blood bag and we can try it” Rachel said walking to the house, we were currently in Niall’s back garden at his house since his house is isolated and no one is around and since his home is owned by himself he is a vampire and we don’t need to be invited in and well when I think about it Louis and I’s house is owned by two vampires meaning any vampire can get in great note to self get Liam or Zayn’s name on the ownership deal so no vampires can get in without being invited in by them maybe we should get a cabin in the woods so we can have a house we can go to whenever we want and it could be a safe house.
“Earth to Harry” Rachel said.
“what?” I asked.
“I asked you are you ready” she said.
“no please can we stop this” I said.
“for a minute” Niall said.
“you know I can tell that your heart isn’t in it or with it” I said.
“stop it both of you” Rachel said.
“come on Harry just get this over with the sooner you do it the sooner we can all go inside and relax” Louis said.
“since when are you the serious one” I said.
“since when are you the sassy one” Louis said.
“you didn’t answer my question” I said.
“and you didn’t answer mine” Louis said.
“well if you answer mine I’ll answer yours” I said.
“no I won’t answer yours until you answer mine” Louis said.
“both of you shut up and get on with this before I rip your heads off” Rachel said.
“ok well what am I meant to do” I said.
“take Louis sight away” Rachel said.
“how do I do that the last time was a freak accident I didn’t mean for it to happen” I said.
“well it saved your life now how did you take away Louis hearing last night?” she asked.
“I thought of him being deaf and it turned him death” I said.
“ok well think of Louis being blind and Louis tell me if you are blind ok?” she said.
“ok “ Louis and I said I looked at Louis and thought of him being blind.
“ok I’m blind now give me my sight back” Louis said I thought of him being able to see and he blinked a few times.
“I can see “ Louis said.
“try taking his hearing” Rachel said I did the same thing as before but thought of him being deaf.
“ok I can’t hear” Louis said I thought of him being able to hear and he said he could hear.
“ok so now what try doing both at the same time” Rachel said I concentrated on making him blind and deaf.
“well I can’t see but I can still hear” Louis said.
“fuck sake Rach I can’t do that” I said.
“you can come on just concentrate “Rachel said I tried again.
“nope I can still hear now give me my sight back” Louis demanded.
“Lou hold on a minute” Rachel said I concentrated again.
“ok now I can’t hear but can see maybe your powers don’t allow you to take two senses at a time” Louis said.
“ok can we try that later please Rach” I said.
“yeah but I want you Louis to drink this blood bag and Harry I want you to try and take either his taste away or his smell away or his touch” Rachel said handing Louis the blood bag Louis started to sip on the bag I focused again and Louis face twisted.
“it’s bland” he said.
“ok now try taking his smell” Rachel said I focused again and his fangs went back into his gum.
“why did his fangs go away?” Niall asked.
“because Harry took your smell away” Rachel said.
“I still don’t get how our fangs can grow when we are suavely angry or when we are craving blood/ smell blood but as soon as we can’t smell the blood or calm down they go away” Niall said.
“well the blood thing it’s because you’re hungry and it’s just part of your vampire side but when you’re angry your heart races basically it awakes your vampire side which is shown when you’re hungry and it just provokes it to let your fangs out and obviously when you calm down your heart rate drops and basically your vampire side goes back to sleep” Rachel said.
“ok I get it” Niall said.
“any way Harry one more thing I want you to try, I want you to try to take Louis touch away” Rachel said.
“ok” I said I focused on taking his touch away and soon enough Louis looked really confused.
“this is so weird I can see the bag in my hand but I can’t feel it it’s basically like it doesn’t exist” Louis said I then focused on giving him it back and he could feel it again. “having your senses being taken away is mental it truly messes with your brain”
“well it will do I mean it will make you confused and that” I said.
“so Harry can control the five senses?” Niall said.
“yeah at least if you find it hard to control your thirst Harry can take your smell away and you won’t be able to smell all the blood around you” Rachel said.
“wait wasn’t it the full moon last night?” Louis said.
“yeah it was why?” I asked.
“Zayn didn’t shift” Louis said.
“he didn’t?” Rachel asked confused.
“not whilst we took on the vampire I mean I was watching at the end until I collapsed and he was there the whole time fighting with you guys” Louis said.
“Zayn get out here!” Rachel shouted into the house, Zayn peered his head out of one of the windows on the second floor.
“what Rach?” Zayn said.
“get down here now!” Rachel shouted.
“why can’t you tell me now” Zayn said.
“just come down” Rachel said Zayn jumped down from the window and landed in front of Rachel.
“you’re so lucky I don’t have neighbours” Niall said.
“Rach what did you want?” Zayn asked.
“you didn’t shift last night” Rachel said.
“not whilst we were out” Zayn said.
“what do you mean?” Rachel said.
“we came back and I went into my room and I got the same burning sensation over my body and I once again found myself in the bathroom like the first night I changed but this time I didn’t break the sink but I did change but as soon as I changed I managed to bring myself straight back so I kind of changed” Zayn said.
“how does it feel?” Niall asked.
“how does what feel?” Zayn asked.
“Changing” Niall said.
“it’s weird man like one minute your sitting there doing something normal then your body burns all over and then your nails get longer and change into claws, your ears get a bit more pointy and I guess a bit wolf like in a way then you get hair growing around your chin like a beard but it connects with your sideburns then your eyes change colour your bag pops a bit during it and your senses get way better but you lose your human part you feel your inner wolf taking over and next thing you know you’re running through the woods ready to attack someone or something” Zayn said.
“wow” we all said.
“it is painful I mean you just get pains all over your body along with the burning all because of the moon” Zayn said.
“at least it’s only once a month for a few minutes” Louis said.
“the thing Is on the full moon when I go from being normal to a wolf it’s a real pain like I described and when I go from wolf to human it’s the exact same but if I change when there isn’t a full moon it doesn’t hurt at all it is actually really weird” Zayn said shaking his head.


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@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

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I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

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Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3