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surviving the bite

Chapter 53

Louis p.o.v
“Louis!” El screamed I lost my balance and fell to the ground, but I was getting weaker El ran over to me and she put my head on her lap.
“Louis you can’t hold the field your going to have to drop it” El said.
“I can’t otherwise he will get away” I whispered weakly.
“Louis your going to kill yourself” El cried.
“I’ll be fine” I said my voice cracking.
“no, Louis please, Louis you need blood” El said.
“no I don’t I’m fine” I whispered.
“Louis drop the field” Rachel yelled.
Harry’s p.o.v
I stood there trying to fight the vampire with Rach and Niall but he was too fast I heard El yell Louis and I turned around to see what was going on but it was a big mistake the vampire grabbed me into a head lock.
“now your going to get your little friend over there to drop the force field or I kill you” the vampire said I faced over to Louis who was now on the floor with his head on El’s lap.
“Louis drop the field!” Rachel yelled I faintly saw him shake his head and I guess the vampire did too.
“looks like your going to die Styles” the vampire grined he applied the pressure on my neck and I could feel imense pain run down my neck as it started to crack until something weird happened.
“what the fuck I can’t see” the vampire shouted and he dropped me to the floor I quickly backed away.
“why can’t I see” Rachel came over to me.
“you know your doing that” she said.
“what how?” I asked scared.
“your powers coming through.” She said the next thing I know is I’m thinking of something else.
“why can’t I hear?” he shouted.
“Rach, Ni kill him now!” I shouted and with a swift movement Niall is over by him and he rips his neck off and Rachel pulls his heart out.
“Louis you can drop the field!” I shouted I ran over to the end of the alley seeing if he dropped it which he did and El was crying I quickly ran over to her and she hugged me tightly.
“El what’s wrong?” I asked and she pointed to Louis.
“what happened?” I asked.
“I don’t know if he’s ok when he was holding the field up he was really weak and he dropped the field a while ago and I’m not sure if he has passed out or not” El cried.
“he should be passed out don’t worry we are going back and we will give him some blood and he will be fine I mean he always manages to cheat death I laughed.
“ok.” She said wiping her tears away I turned around to see Rachel thrwing some liquid over the vampires body and Zayn chucked a match down on him creating a fire which soon died down and all it left was ashes, Niall and Rachel walked away hand in hand and Zayn walked over to Perrie and gave her a hug and El was still leaning over Louis whilst Emma knelt down to my level and gave me a hug from behind.
“who’s carrying him back?” Niall asked.
“you are” I said.
“what why?” he complained.
“other wise I will take away your sight” I threatend and he mumbled something under his breath and picked Louis up and we headed back to the hotel where we all literally passed out on the settees.
“someone give Louis some blood” Rachel said.
“I will where are the blood bags?” El said.
“left draw in the fridge” I said she walked away and when she returned she had a blood bag in her hands and she put it to his mouth and as soon as the liquid hit his mouth his fangs came out and he drank it down and his eyes shot open and they were bright red but he blinked and they turned back blue.
“what happened?” Louis asked.
“you passed out because of the force field.” Rachel said.
“again I really need to sort that out wait did the vampire get away?!” Louis shouted.
“no we killed him” I said.
“how didn’t he get away because the last time I checked you were in a head lock in the vampires arms and he was trying to kill you” Louis said.
“well you see my vampire abilities came through at the perfect time right when I needed them the most “ I said.
“wait you got them what did you get is it cooler than mine or are they shit” Louis rambled.
“well so far I can take peoples sight away” I said.
“no you also made him deaf ” Liam said.
“oh and I can do that but I don’t know what else I can do” I said.
“wait you get two that’s not fair” Louis said.
“you get force fields that’s cool since you can do awesome pranks and leave people so confussed.” I said.
“I guess so” he said.
“well we need to work on your powers Harry because we don’t know what else you can do you can already take peoples sight and hearing so I wonder what else you can do maybe you can control the five sense” Rachel said.
I smirked for a moment and thought about Louis not being able to hear and all of a sudden his eyes widened.
“why can’t I hear” he shouted.
“it’s payback” I laughed.
“what?” Louis said I thought about him being able to hear and he gave me a glare.
“do not do that again!” Louis demanded.
“it’s payback for the times you have annoyed me with your power” I laughed.
“fuck sake” Louis mumbled.
“karma’s a bitch isn’t it” I laughed.


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Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

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@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

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Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3