Critiques - Comments, page 2

@abygail.bauman
omg thank you so much!!!!

@cheskastyles
After I finish @Allie Miller's I shall do yous!

Title: Intoxicated
-Author: cheskastyles
-Number of chapters: 12 (not complete)
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): One Direction particularly Harry and Louis
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): NC-17
-Link:http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90751/Intoxicated/
-Genre(s): Romance, Drama, Tragedy

@Allie Miller
I shall begin my reading ((:

-Title: Payne of the Past
-Author: Allie Miller
-Number of chapters: 55
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): One Direction
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): R
-Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/85711/Payne-of-the-Past/
-Genre(s): Romance Drama Teen

@JasperRenee
You SERIOUSLY need to start writing again- I'm absolutely IN LOVE WITH YOUR TALENT

Thank you so much for the reviews!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Liam's Sex Slave was also literally the first fanfic I ever read, and I totally agree that it's amazing. I know some of my grammar is shit in The Arranged Wedding, I started writing it years ago and came back to it when I waa older. Thank you so much, that really gave my the inspiration I needed to start writing again!!!

@abygail.bauman

thanks so much honey!

@abygail.bauman
thanks love!

@JasperRenee
I will get on it love (:

I've got two story's if you could review them.
-Title: Alcoholics Anonymous
-Author: JasperRenee
-Number of chapters: Four
-Band: One Direction
-Content rating: R
-Link: Alcoholics Anonymous
-Genre(s): Drama, Tragedy, Thriller

-Title: The Arranged Wedding
-Author: JasperRenee
-Number of chapters: Twenty-Two
-Band: One Direction
-Content rating: NC-17
-Link: The Arranged Wedding
-Genre(s): Romance, Drama, Tragedy

@AmandaEmileee
I tend to read fast; so here is your update, love. Hope my review made sense.

@abygail.bauman
Thanks so much :) <3

@AmandaEmileee
I'll get on to it, love

• Cambridge (the second is Year Two - it’s seems to be more popular than the first one)
• Niall’s_Strawberry_Red (others vary from book to book)
• In the first story there’s 70 but I think there’s 100 in the second. I’ve noticed though in the first one some chapters are quite short.
• Both
• R
• Link
• Drama, Romance

Hey girl! So theres a story I started reading which was Cambridge part III and it seemed super interesting but there’s two stories before it so I started reading the first on a bit but there both very long so idk if you do reviews that don’t come from the author or not but if you do, could you please ready through them, or even one of them to give me a general idea of weather the stories aren’t worth reading. I’m a huge one direction fan but it’s a crossover story so I’m not too sure about it. Would really appreciate it, I’ll fill out a form now!