You + Me + Him - Comments, page 6

@YouLoveWhoYouLove

Thank you! Yeah, Zayn's not exactly pleasant in this one. It's kind of a theme. :/

Omg I'm so glad you're posting all your stories on here. I just want to read all of them. This is adorable and heartbreaking at the same time. Harry is precious and Zayn is.. well he's not so precious lol I hope she opens her eyes, but I wonder what harry is going to do when they meet again... hmmm

@CrumpetsAndTea

Yes. It's a terrible pattern she is stuck in and you'll see it a lot throughout the story. :/

@lisavslisa
Don't worry about the paragraphs, they're fine now.

I keep seeing the pattern of Zayn bailing out on Alyssa/treating her like shit and putting his selfish wants before hers leaving Harry to pick up the pieces. It was so sweet of him to to her to the prom. Too bad she couldn't properly enjoy it because she's too hung up on Zayn. I'm afraid it's always going to be like that, Alyssa being hung up on Zayn while Harry is right in front of her. Hopefully she'll come to her senses soon.

Thanks for the update!

@CrumpetsAndTea

Well, I sort of fixed it. I used the paragraph tool in editing and it kind of spaced the paragraphs apart, but not much. I'll try to remember to do it in the future chapters. Hopefully that helps! :)

@CrumpetsAndTea

Thanks. To be honest, I used to have all my paragraphs spaced out and hated how it looked. But for some reason on this site, it doesn't allow me to format how I want to, which makes it all a jumbled mess. I have my stories all spread out over different fanfiction websites and this one is not very compatible. *Sigh* But, I'm glad you like the story so far! Thank you for the review. :)

I remember seeing your stories around 1dff.com but never got a chance to read any of them. I'm really glad I stumbled upon this one though! It's really interesting to see the relationship dynamic between Alyssa and Zayn and how it affects them those around them particularly Harry. Just a quick constructive suggestion, it might be a good idea to space your paragraphs. It makes it a bit easier on the eyes I'm really looking forward to reading more!