Story Reviews - Comments, page 2

Thank you so much for the review! You are so sweet! :D

@MelissaStylesInStyle
It was no problem, in my eyes, you are one of the better writers here on 1dfanfic.org

Thanks so much for the review! You were so kind with my story. :)

@moikel.clifford
Aww thanks!

@brianna.smith
I'm fangirling rn you have no idea how much I love you <3 Review will be up soon :)

Name: Brianna
Age: 19
Name of Fanfic: Beating Heart
Main characters: Harry, Julianne
Plot summary: honestly its entirely too much to put!! And plus I dont wanna ruin it for you :)
Link to story: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/87633/Beating-Heart

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I don't check the 1d site often but I got your message :-] Thanks for letting me know that you sent me a message

I messaged you but I don’t know if you’ll get the notification since I am on 1D site and you are 5SOS. :)

@TessLove
I never update my fanfics because of that too :) I love critisizing people anyways so you're welcome for the review!

Thank you so much, I'm glad you're liking it! I will try to get an update out soon but I'm busy (and lazy) so idk. It's great to get feedback though (:

Name: Noah
Age: 20
Name of Fanfic: Amber Alert
Main characters: Jack, Luke, Liz, Harley
Description: His father left. His mother drank. His brother disappeared.
http://www.5secondsofsummerfanfiction.com/Story/87868/Amber-Alert/

I very much welcome respectful criticism! This story is from the POV of Jack (Luke's brother). Make sure to pay attention to the dates.

Thank you! :D

Tess

17 (almost 18 xD)

Creep

Parker Jane and Harry Styles

Parker and Harry have known each other for awhile. As they got older they grew apart. Parker leaves to live in France for a year and when she returns she's....different. Harry seems to be the only one to notice. Through her abusive boyfriend, lack of social skills, and family secrets, Parker doesn't open up to anyone. That is until Harry is reintroduced in her life.

Link (: