Cambridge (Part III) - Comments, page 3

@LizzyM101
I agree with you that Louis treats Rachel really well and I honestly have no doubt that he loveable here, but I think that if she’s loved him she would already be with him. He’s made it clear how he feels but I don’t think she’s over Ashton fully. If Ashton pulled himself together I’d like to see him make amends to het & maybe win her back. They are such an adorable couple and I know he really loveable her. But idk I wouldn’t mind Rachel and Louis being a couple, I’m just not sure if she feels the way he does. I wouldn’t mind if they were endgame, but I’m not sure if she want him like that. As for Skylar and Harry, I 100% agree, they’re adorable and should definitely be endgame.

@Mashton_Styles
Im not conflicted I definitely know I want Louis and Rachel to be together because he truly cares about her and respects her. He took care of bunch of times when she was sick or drunk in the first two stories. Louis also respected her relationship with Ashton when it was occuring he didn't even pursuer he knew she was happy and respected that. Plus they didn't even get a fair shake because of the minor mistake he made before they got together. I just Skyler and Harry should be also given a chance they as well weren't given a fair shake.

@Prinny1321
@LizzyM101
@RosewaterLily
@UnHombreAsi

Love reading through comments! A bit of disagreements on Whether Rachel should be with Louis or Ashton! And you guys seem conflicted about Skylar and Harry or Skylar and Luke! Why do you think these couples should/shouldn’t be together? :)

@RosewaterLily
Noo, definitely not. Ashton has honestly been such a dick to Rachel, I wouldn’t mind if she forgave him and they became friends again but she shouldn’t get back with him ever.

I do kind of agree with @prinny1321 on Harry and Skyla though, although I love both of them and I think they’d be adorable now together, Skylars spent the last couple of years leading him on. So idk if Harry deserves that kind of stress.

Yess! I’m totally with @LizzyM101 on this,Skylar and Harry would be so cute together, there’s definitely something there. And I know she’s messed up a bit but it’s clear she still care about him. Still lowkey want Rachel and Ashton to get back together.

I feel the opposite there is definitely something between Harry and Skyler that' s always been there but has been neglected for some important reason but I can't remember why. Yes Louis and Rachel need to happen eventually.

Ok I need more
I want Rachel and Louis together. I want Luke and Sky to break up I feel like their relationship has run its course but I also don't want Harry with Sky because I think she's messed up to much and Harry deserves someone amazing and unexpected. I want to know what's happening with Michael and Lizzie.

I love it...

ALSO want to see what Harry and skylar are up to!

I don’t know why but for some reason I low-key want Ashton and Rachel to get back together. I know he messed up but they were so cute together and I think he still loves her. I’d like to see him take full responsibility for what he did and earn back her trust. Although I do also love Louis so idk, maybe Rachel and Louis could hook up and then realise they’re better as friends.

I know I've said it before but I am totally for Rachel and Louis. Ashton doesn't deserve either girl, actually. He treated Delia bad by being with her when he was still with Rachel, and keeping Delia a secret. That shows a total lack of respect for both girls. Just my thoughts! Love that Rachel and Louis are being so cutely awkward around each other! :)

I think Rachel and Louis really need to just make out or something, even if Rachel doesn’t know exactly how she feels about him, there’s no denying she’s really attracted to him!
I’m so glad to see a Skylar chapter again! Wonder what’s going on with her and Luke? He seems a bit full on! Maybe now she’ll get with Harry now instead? Loving it!

@LizzyM101
@impostersyndrome5

Thank you both for commenting! I don’t think it’s so much that Louis is confused about his feelings for Rachel, I think he’s more confused about what they’re doing, and more particularly what he’s doing; whether he should pursue her or not after she’s already rejected him.

So glad you are liking the story!

@Mashton_Styles
I love that Delia is helping out, it shows she really is trying to be a friend to Rachel. I'm worried that Louis is telling her he is confused though. It seems like he should know for sure by now... Maybe him saying that is just a coverup so he doesn't get hurt cause he thinks Rachel might just be confused about Ashton? And I'm really glad Harry would be okay with it, even though he is probably right and he would find it weird for a while. Also, since Skylar is being so weird I hope she doesn't act irrationally and do something with Harry that would lead him on and hurt Luke.

@Mashton_Styles
I am Louis kicked the crap out of Ashton. Im glad Louis made Delia see the errors of her ways a bit. Im surprised Louis is confused about how he feels about Rachel and looks like Rachel is equally confused with the almost kiss. Harry giving his permission to be with Rachel was also a surpise. So it will be interesting who will rekindle the flame first Rachel or Louis. Im thinking Louis.

@LizzyM101
@UnHombreAsi
@impostersyndrome5
@LouisTomlinsonIsMyBabe

Thanks so much for the comments! We really appreciate the support! What do you guys think of our recent two chapters?

Ahh yes. They nearly kissed, I honestly can’t wait for more! Harry and Louis need to have a heart to heart about Rachel, Id love it so much!! Great update, can’t wait for more.

Omg yeah! Louis and Rachel definitely need to express their feelings for each other, but it also makes sense that Rachel is feeling confused and upset by Ashton.Also, Harry should want his best friend to date his sister. He loves them both and knows Louis could treat her right! Keep it up, love it!

Ooh Rachel was so close to kissing Louis! She’s still has feelings for him!! Can’t wait to read more!! And please have Louis and Harry talking about Rachel, and Skylar and Ashton too, I want to see his side of things.

@impostersyndrome5
Just posted a new chapter, let me know what you think of it! And yes Delia definitely does have a long way to go if she wants to win Rachel back, as does Ashton.

And yes, Harry‘s definitely a good brother but would he be okay with his best friend dating his little sister? Unfortunately we didn’t get to hear his answer yet.

Again, thanks so much for commenting love!

@ontheedge
Yeah that actually sounds like a good idea! I’ll post a chapter about it. Right now it’s just me and @Mashton_Styles writing for Rachel and Delia.