Mr. Malik - Comments

@impostersyndrome5

Yeah. I was super stressed that I wasn't going to come up with something. It had been sitting for four months without an idea. And then I decided to just start writing and it only took me a couple of hours to write and edit. I'm very glad I could finish it and I'm pleased with the ending. Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!

Thank you for finishing it! I know you said you had writer's block a little bit ago for this story, and I'm so glad you finished it. I loved it, and the ending!

@lilhedgehog74

Thank you for reading it!!! I'm really glad you like it! :)

I loved this story. Thank you for writing it!

I KNEW HE SENT BATES TO DROP HER OFF FOR A REASON!!! I’m so glad she looked for him after all. It must have took a lot for him to confess everything about him to her. In the epilogue I would love to know what their relationship evolved to orrr maybe WHY Katherine decided to give him another chance.

@lisavslisa
Haha! I'm glad I caught onto where you were going with all this. One last way maybe you could connect them is with the way the prologue ends. It seems like a transition takes place from his rough side to a more nurturing side. Maybe you could show that side of him in the aftermath, and use that as a way to launch into her reasoning for coming back. Like, she knew all along he could be both for her or something and he's proven himself to be that way in certain ways? Idk. Anyway, I'm glad despite your writer's block you still want to finish it. I just really love this story (and all your writing) and would hate to see it go unfinished. I'll be waiting for it whenever you're ready! :)

@impostersyndrome5

Omg, did you read my mind or something!? I've been planning for YEARS to connect the prologue to the epilogue... somehow, some way. :) Thank you for all your suggestions! It really helps! And don't get discouraged if it takes me longer than usual to get the epilogue out... it all depends on my writer's block. Ugh. I will try my best though. Just know I haven't forgot about it. I haven't forgot about any of my stories, even though it might seem like I have sometimes. :)

Maybe you could tie the end to the beginning. You didn't do much of a timeline except for in the prologue, and the way I read all the other chapters it seemed like the action in the prologue would've happened after the rest. Maybe also you could explain her rational for coming back. I mean he apologized and let her in, but there could be more to it than that. Maybe bring the stuff happening in the prologue to the present and use a flashback or something as an explainer for why she moved back to the apartment. Just a thought. I hope you do finish it though so we can see that they are headed in a hopefully, positive direction.

Please update soon! It's too good to not! :)

:( At first when he asked the cab to be dismissed I was like YESSSS. Then he asked him to just usevthe SUV I was like ughhhh. BUT THEN I thought how convenient because if his employee takes her then he can just ask him where she went. Hmmm lol

@lisavslisa
I hope he can for the romance factor, but if he can't at least she is standing up for herself and not allowing him to mistreat her anymore! Like I said, can't wait to read it from his POV.

@impostersyndrome5

Haha totally. He's pretty much dug himself into a hole! Hopefully he can crawl out of it. ;)

OMG! I love this story, I love your writing! And I'm so excited about your little teaser in the notes. It'll be so interesting to read it from his perspective too, especially cause it all needs to be explained for him to be suitable for Katherine at this point.

I love this story so much...I'm gonna die when its over

I kind of knew that what happened to her was a miscarriage but it was still very sad. I was NOT expecting Zayn to react that way. If anything, I thought this situation would soften him up a bit. I would not have accepted to be treated the way he treated her accusing her of purposely getting pregnant. That would have been it for me, I wouldn’t even have returned from the hospital back to that place. So I am very glad she is standing up for herself and hopefully this is a wake up call flr Zayn... he just lost a baby and he’s abou to lose Katherine!

@lisavslisa
I did! It was incredibly sad, but well done to you for making it feel so sad. I think they are both just trying to protect themselves, and Zayn needs to get his act together if he cares about her at all! I canNOT wait for you to update again!!! :)

I’m so happy she’s standing up for herself but this was a sad chapter. I feel like she still needs time to grieve and process what just happened. And maybe that’s what he’s doing too. Everyone grieves differently.

@impostersyndrome5

I updated!!! I did. Have you read it? ;)

@lisavslisa
Ahaha! You tease! With the ending of this chapter and the "very soon" promise of an update!

@impostersyndrome5

There are only, I think, four more chapters left. I have three of them completely written, and the last chapter is pretty much still in the blueprint stage...
I'm so glad you like it. I will do my best to get an update out very SOON. (Like maybe this weekend - possibly tomorrow)
Thank you! :) xo