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Always - Comments, page 9
@Marian.Styles
Thanks for your opinion, love! I am trying to write the next chapter of Always, I just need to figure out where the story's going at this point. Thank you!! xx
I think sometimes is better focus on one thing, and once that's finished, move on to another story...
that's why I think you should keep focusing on Always, and then write another story, about anything that you like!! you're a very good writer so you can pull off any plot that you want...
Sending my love!! ;)
I'm sorry I didn't complete the challenge. I'm just now catching up to that part. I'm loving the story. :)
These bloody notifications are non existent to me! I'm so sorry lovely but I've just realised you updated this beautiful chapter!
Anyway, I loved the conversation between Kaylie, Vanessa and Marcus! I smiled when I read their reactions to Kaylie's love for Harry - you keep it so realistic! Great chapter my friend, well worth the challenge xx
@MelissaStylesInStyle
You read faster than I thought you would, that's all. Hope you're liking it! xx
@blankspace1
I actually felt like I went slow. The first day I read half and haven't been able to pick it up again until today. Currently middle of 40. :D
@Revealthebox
No worries, girl :) I will check out the songs you mentioned, see if they match. Might help me write better! I'm so glad you're still enjoying this, means a lot to me :) xx
I am so sorry I didn't complete the challenge!! I'll do it now then :) soo:
fav moment = the lunch with Harry and all the contestants in his group at the beginning of the story
and a song that reminds me of Haylie, uhmm
"still falling for you", but you know that one already,
so also "Jealousy" by Tom Odell, you kind of have to use your fantasy and mix up the lyrics, but if you give your own interpretation to it it matches them well. It doesn't really fit their style and image tho, so if you look at it that way it's not too great for them, not as matching as still falling for you. Also "light me up" by Birdy, great song, again doesn't really match their style. Damnn this is hard! I keep saying things that don't match haha i'm sorry!
Oh! Got it: "see through heart" by SEBELL really matches Harry i think, cause he is so easy to read lol. And "follow me" by Oliver Charles, makes me think about what's going to happen if the x-factor ends and Harry's break ends too..
i think that's it for now, I'll let you know if i come across new ones! I'm sorry i'm so late oops..:)
+ thanks for updatingggg i loved itt xx
@Kimmie1311
Thanks for your comment, love! Don't worry, this story isn't ending for a while. There's still a fair way for Kaylie and Harry to go! xx
the 'challenge' is done but since i read it i have to do it..
1) Favourite moment of Always so far?
Chapter 30, Together Again, when Harry is at her house.
2) What songs reminds me of Haylie?
I have to say 'Little Things' and 'I Want To Write You A Song'
Just want to say that i don't comment much but i really like the way you write.
Fav part is Harry POV. Well done!
This story doesn't need an end soon! Keep it going!
I just started reading this story and it's AMAZING!
11/29/16