What Makes You Beautiful - Comments, page 3

LoVE the update!!! Please say there is a sequel

@dukecrazie
It was fun to write this chapter, I love writing a scene/chapter when all the boys are together! I'm...alright. Still terrified about my father's violence and my injuries are healing but other than that, I feel OK. Thanks for asking, your comment really shines a light in my dark world and I appreciate that :) xx

Loved this chapter! Hope all is going well for you, it just takes time- hang in there.

@MelissaStylesInStyle
He is amazing!!

Thank you, means a lot to me :)) xx

@blankspace1
Aww so sweet! Harry is an amazing guy so I understand.

I'm sorry about your dad. If you ever need to talk, I'm here. :)

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I struggle too because all the boys are beautiful human beings and I'd gladly date any of them. But if I had to choose, it would be Harry because, as you said, he doesn't need a description, lol! To me, he's just perfect in every way and he's the reason I wake up with a smile on my face every day, even though my father ruins my life by hurting me and my mother but Harry, and all the other boys, make me strong! xx

@blankspace1
It's a daily struggle, really. lol I mean, Harry is... well, I don't think he's needing of a description. He's a freakin walking masterpiece. Niall, on the other hand, is so amazing. I feel like he's my spirit animal. :D In the end, I'd more than likely choose Niall. I need that burnt piece of toast in my life. hehehe

@MelissaStylesInStyle
Me too! Hmmm, either Harry or Niall for you, don't know which of the two!

@blankspace1
Oh my my 1D can fight over me any day but I already have my pick. Lol (can you guess who? :p)

@MelissaStylesInStyle
Yes, only 2 more!! Cute and funny? That's exactly what I wanted people to think of this chapter! :)) Good, because the idea of a Bachelorette story just came to me last night and I thought it would fun for all the boys to fight over the same woman! xx

@LivinLikeLarry
Sadly, it is coming to an end! I don't want it to either but all good stories must end! I just wanted Harry to have a fun night with his friends, I'm happy you liked it! :) Thanks for reading, girl! xx

Only two more chapters?? Aww :( Loved this chapter though, it was cute and funny. I would love to read a bachelorette story!

Yes, totes would read anything you write, you are an amazing writer!!! And this chapter was too funny, I was actually loling when I got to the part where harry called bella....
ps...nooooooo it cant end :,(

@Kath0183
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm better than I was a week ago, thanks for asking xx

Such a cute update! Hope you are doing well!

@MelissaStylesInStyle
Me too! And that is a habit of mine, I'll fix it now :)

@blankspace1
I hope to one day be like those old couples holding hands. <3

Also, maybe it's habit of writing it in, but Harry didn't need to wear a condom. :p Forgot to mention that. :)

@MelissaStylesInStyle
I'm sorry for your loss. Now when I see elderly couples out and about, holding hands and smiling, I find it so cute and get sad when I remember when my grandparents used to be like that. Thank you and don't worry, I have more ideas for stories! I will be here on this site for a long time, I know it :) xx

@blankspace1
I totally understand you with your grandpa. I loved mine very much, too. He was so loving towards me. He passed a long time ago but I still get teary eyed when I remember him. :( Stay strong and follow his advice of writing. :)

@Allie Miller
Yeah, he probably is, isn't he? :P I would give anything to meet him and thank him for being the reason why I smile every day :) xx