Liquor Bitch - Comments

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
It was Jasper's idea :P she had it in the forum and I thought "why the Hell not?" And since I figured Harry's almost always the bad guy, this time he can be the pervy friend :D

@JasperRenee
Well thank you :3 I wasn't entirely sure (and I forgot to message you the chapter like o said I would....so call it a surprise? Lol) if I'd gotten Lanette right but at least this way, Harry gets a side plot. Now Niall needs one >.> hmmm

Thanks so much again!!! Loved the update, and you perfected Lanette as far as I'm concerned!!!

@Call_Me_Godot
Hodge-podge my ass. Whatever that means. Haha xD I actually like Harry the way he is and I love the way you incorporated a character from someone else's book. That's genius. Liam is perfect in this. Louis is perfect in this, and I will have to throw glitter at Louis and Lanette cos they're flawless and deserve to sparkle :p hahaha

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
Aw that made me feel so much better XD cos these last two feel like hodge-podge crap to me. I will say, initially Harry was my bad guy and that was something I had planned for him (but then I decided there are too many dark Harry's but not enough Liam's ;P). Just throw glitter at Louis until I get back to this XD

Ahh shit. I keep getting the feeling that Liam is gonna fall in love with fake Aphrodite but I don't want to get my hopes up. And Louis is just so fucking cute when it comes to fictional relationships and I just want to throw glitter at him. This is cute, this is my guilty pleasure cos I flip shit every time you update.

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
I'm excited too lol it's just a matter of getting there ;O like I can honestly say I'm fucking stoked about this idea, and I'm never fucking stoked about ideas.

@Call_Me_Godot
Well it's still yours haha X'D

Just go with what feels right because I honestly can't give you any advice on what is too soon is haha. I have trouble with that myself. I can't wait though, I'm so excited :p I'll enjoy what I have for now lol.

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
This isn't original :( I stole it....from myself lol this is a better version of a deleted BVB story I had called The Number Eight XD

My problem with Liam is I don't know how soon is too soon D: and what will happen immediately afterwards (I'm 75% confident with my idea as far as aftermath). But for now, we enjoy Friday Date Night with Lou :3

I love it! Love it! ♡♡ so glad it's original... haha xD I really like this story and you're still not giving me a lead up to Liam so... I'm on the edge of my seat here!

@Call_Me_Godot
Yay yaye! ♡

I've never been called a pet name, but for some reason it kind of throws me off. Like... snuggle bear... and cuteums... and no. I don't know why but they throw me off xD who knows. Maybe I'll like em when I actually get called one haha.

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
I can honestly say I got about halfway through it this morning ;D

Pet names are fun :P my boyfriend doesn't use them but I have a few for him. Nicknames and then things like doll, hun, and sweetie (sweetie is 99% of the time used during arguments though :X). I'm southern so pet names are just kind of part of my regular vocab lol

@Call_Me_Godot
Haha that's so cute. But the guy has only called me baby once. He calls me love now. It's hella cheesy, but I love it.

Yessss. Hell better freeze over tonight cos i'm dying to know what happens next. I'M SO EXCITED.

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
(I was not so good in high school) I hate being called baby >.> my ex boyfriend used to do it all the time and it grossed me out. I was like "bro I'm old enough to buy cigarettes so I don't really think I'm a baby." My boyfriend now (who I've had for two years :3) doesn't do pet names unless noob qualifies XD

I was actually working on the third bit before I left for work :P so if I can spend my weekend being productive (ha, Godot being productive, when Hell freezes over) it might be up soon. I can't tell you cos it'll ruin muh story D: just know this is the most important I've ever made Liam

@Call_Me_Godot
I'm still a virgin xD hahaha. I'll definitely say pussy before I'll say cunt because that word is so awful to me. Like, not the word is nasty but just the meaning of the word is gross. And the word penis is just weird to me. Even though it's scientifically correct, it's just a strange word to me. Honestly, I don't have a problem with the word moist. It's not weird to me like it is to others. I have only been called baby once in my lifetime by someone other than my parents. And it was actually last week. Scared the shit out of me. But I loved it. Idk why, but I did.

Thank you so much like... I have nothing to say but thank you haha.

I'm serious it's only the second chapter in and I'm just like the FUCK IS UP HIS ASS WHAT'S WRONG GODOT WHY WON'T YOU TELL ME. I'm so excited too.

And you need to update in the story I'm newly obsessed with. I'm dying.

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
I haven't been a virgin in like six years and I still hate the way I write it. This is probably my best one to date. I say vag all the time XD I'll be Facetiming a friend and go to sit down and when she asks what I'm doing I'll say "pulling my shorts out of my fucking vag." Honestly I'll call it a cunt before I say pussy. Pussy and cock are my weird genital words lol baby is another word. I react to baby the way a lot of people react to moist.

But write whatever makes you feel comfortable :D your writing is good enough with or without heavy smut ;P

and omiGod that makes me so fucking excited :D I keep thinking it's so clear and I hate it because it doesn't feel the way it should (then again I know what's happening and I'm 3850427 chapters ahead in my mind). So I'm glad Liam is like "the fuck is happening" :3 that's such a good thing to hear lol

@Call_Me_Godot
Hahaha probably.

I have a problem with writing smut anyways. Like, no word sounds right to me. But I think it's just because I'm young ^-^ I usually just say "space in between my legs" or other shit like that because I'm honestly too chicken to say anything else. I don't even say the word "vagina" for some reason. I actually use the word that you used here and I get ugly looks for it all of the time hahaha.

I've never written about that honestly. And I don't see myself writing about it in the future. So I'm just gonna stick to vanilla sex and be on my way haha. Ooh I'm excited for this. Like you don't even have a lead on to what the hell he could possibly know which makes me so freaking stoked ^-^

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
You just reminded me that I probably should've added a smut warning XD

O hate saying things like "my sex" or "my vagina"! Lol never do I say that in real life unless I'm joking and that's the only other time I hear other girls say it XD I've never heard a sex story where someone was like "stick it in my vagina." But shit's gonna get weird so if that's comic relief, so freaking be it >:D

But thank you :3 this is the first time I've written about face fucking and I was kinda wishy washy on the last part. And oh the plans I have for Liam ;D that boy knows some stuff

Fuck. I laughed a little in the middle of the chapter because I honestly wasn't expecting the word "vag" XD hahaha. But it was nice. Nicer than what I can write. This chapter was great, and I can't wait to see what the fuck is up with Liam.

@Call_Me_Godot
Same dude. And good i'M EXCITED.

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
Hell I'd even settle for a Liam that's not Mother Liam, let alone a Liam based story XD so I'm trying something different with him ;P