Story Reviews - Comments, page 2

Can I get a review of my story? It's called "Have you forgotten?" thanks a lot I hope you got time for it :)

You didn't have to write up another one. Lol

But in all seriousness, thank you. I did intentionally make it confusing in the beginning. You're right, but I also tried to give answers throughout the rest of the story. That way it wasn't a large sum of information at once.

More information will be added for her parents in the sequel. The little you got was so you weren't left with nothing.

My problem with writing up the sequel isn't narrative, but motivation. Inspiration is a key part of it too.

Thanks again for the review and I'll keep it in, mind when I start writing the sequel.

Hi!

First off, I'd like to say thanks so much for my review! At the rate you were taking them I wasn't sure if I'd ever get one. Especially since the newer additions seemed to pass me up.

I'd also like to say that this was a first draft. I'm still struggling in the process of writing the sequence because I'm unsure if I should clean up the first one. But I'm also a bit confused. Did you mean to write that you don't like the back story with the parents? If that's the case I'd like to know why.

As the author I thought I nailed that backstory. It was Scarlet's and Luke's I thought needed tweeking.

I also want more explanation on what made the story confusing. Because if you read it all a lot of the little things got explained toward the end. I made sure of that because I knew readers were confused.

Anyway, thanks again and good luck on future reviews!

@Rocker5sos
Yay thank you :)

@Jessica Olson
sure :)

@Minnie Mouse
sure :)

@Lukeifer
Done x

@starship
Done x

@Rocker5sos
Hey you reviewed my story War a while ago, but that story didn't really work out :( from difficulties and such I'm trying to stick with this story I'm writing now and I'm really excited over it please check it out :) Right now it's a fetus of a book only about 3 or 4 chapters but please check it out. It's called And what was I to you? Thank you so much

Last First Kiss? Please...

Please review 'It's 9:24' when you have the time? :) Thanks, love <3

Woah! The waiting list is sooo long. But can I reserve a place for my story 'Saviour'? It only has two chapters, but I'm sure it will be a little bit longer when you get around to reviewing it :) Thank you! xx

Thank you for the review love :))

Updated Waiting list:
Secrets
Headmaster styles
Believe
Keep your secrets
Prodigal
Hooch
In the dark
Payne of the past
Sinister world

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
doing :)

@Minnie Mouse
Aw x sorry for the very late reply so glad it helped x i will be happy to review again

@Sophalicious
Doing soon x

@XKALEIGHSTYLES57X
Sure :)

@LukeLover2317
I will add you to my list :)

@springfield.
done x