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@Mrs.Calum Horan
Aww, thanks!! I'm so glad you like it!! I just updated--let me know what you think! :)
when i saw you were the author i just knew this was going to be great. i read every word and was not at all dissapointed.
@CiaoNiccie
Hey lady, miss you too!!! My computer has been broken but I FINALLY got it back and can update. Writing with pen and paper has been no fun. This story came out of nowhere--I should have been working on Blue, but then I come up with this one. Kind of a different angle, but I think Laney and Kenzie would be awesome friends.
If anything, I wish I got more comments. I like hearing what people think!!
@stylesgirl41
That's awesome!!! Blue is my favorite, but I'm loving this one too. My computer has been broken but I am finally able to update now that it's fixed. I hope you like the next chapters!
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You made Harry out to be someone he is NOT! He definitely would not objectify a woman like that, and he would not say fuck and baby girl as much as he does in your story. And you made Kenzie call him Hazza WAY too much. Like, once in a while is fine but it seemed like every other word that she said was Hazza. You also wrote that they had a lot of good times other than just sex, why did you write about sex so much and not about the fun they had together. Yes, at first the sex scenes were pretty good but then they just got super boring. I am positive almost no one can see Harry doing and saying the things he does in this story because it is just so unrealistic. To be honest you made this story seem like a way worse version of 50 Shades of Grey.
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