Fool's Gold - Comments, page 5

@mumblings

thanks boo. "for the better kinda"? hahaha

great chapter! loved the protectiveness of Katy. I can see her and harry having a brother/sister teasing relationship. and then i was like, aww man, they're fighting (Harry and Enola). but then it got turned around for the better, kinda. but I'm with noli, let the 2 issues be done with, and then go live happily ever after. haha.

@thelemonandthelime
I'm really trying very hard! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

So excited for more updates!

@mumblings
That's what friends are for. :) to tell you you're being a dumbass without any reservations

I love the bestie. she's close enough of a friend that she doesn't sugar coat anything. but also happy for her friend and intrigued on it all.

@mumblings
Ha! Didn't actually register in my brain when I did that.

her name is Katy. hahaah

@mumblings
I'm glad I'm here and you're there. Lol. Love ya doll. :)

@morrison_hotel
holy shit! I could kiss you right now! thank you!!!

@mumblings

are you telling me you don't want the fourth one that I planned for the night? :P

omg 3 updates! girl you're killing me!

omg thank you for another update! and the special pov... genius! time to go read...

@mumblings
Thanks boo! Didn't think it was too much too soon?

great character description of Charles. I really got a visual. but ugh. asshat. and poor Enola :( not wanting to answer her phone.

@mumblings
I love the shit out of you too babe!

you are an amazing writer and such a fun friend! I love the shit out of you!! xoxo

@thelemonandthelime
Awe thank you. I try to stay true to the freaking sweetheart he acts like the rest of the time.

@mumblings
Thanks. It was kind of rough to find a way to introduce Charles to the boys without him knowing anything. And I hope that you start to see a change in the rest of the boys.

I really love the way you portray Harry. He's so thoughtfull and kind and gentle, but not at all boring. You've done an amazing job. The way you write is so fluid. Not at all choppy. I really love this book, and hope you write more.