whiplash - Comments, page 5

OH MY GOD! YOU'RE REALLY GONNA DO US LIKE THAT?

I love this so much.
Can't wait for the next. ♡

AHHH! Awesommmeee!!!! Damn this story is so good!! Keep it up!!

Omg...this is seriously hands down one of the best stories I've ever read. I've never been into Niall fanfictions but this one totally has me hooked. I've spent the last few days just binge reading this story because it's SO FREAKIN GOOD. Can't wait for the next update x

Yay!! Please don't make me wait another month for the next chapter haha z

Cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope its ready soon! :) x

Yay!!! That has seriously made my day haha I can't wait to see what happens! You should try and do a chapter a week haha ;) xx

@shelbytch @NHfan

I promise I am working on the next chapter right now! Hopefully it will be done by next week!! Glad you like the story though! That makes me extremely happy!

*Christina

I am in love with this story, I read it over and over :) Please update, the wait is killing me!!! I have rated it 10/10 and have subscribed x

Oh my gosh! Please update soon! I'm dyyyyyying to know what happens!!!!

This was so interesting! So much going on! So we skipped 6 months in the middle of a chapter, right?
Harps has had a job with that guitar pick, haha :). Can't believe how many times you've meantioned her moving it :P
I'm so excited to hear what Niall has to say. Maybe he is calling because he realised she is the love of his life and he can't live without her anymore ;) but I'm sure we'll have to wait a while for the happy ending, we have only 12 chapters. My prediction is just the end of a nice romantic movie, but we're just starting with a book right here :P

P.S. Has anyone (better said everybody) seen picture of Niall's hairly right leg he posted on his instagram. I mean, why would he do this (to us)? :P

"Complete with bad punctuation" xD I almost died of laughter! Great chapter! I hope she sends Niall to hell, but at the same time I want her to face him again :)

This chapter was by far my favorite out of all that you've posted! I just love the way everything has led up to this point and that it's pure amazing <3 I've honestly spent the last 3 hours reading everything x You've scored yourself another subscriber and a perfect 10!

@lovetodance95

i know right! ugh! she was pisssssed! and of course had every right to be.

Oh, silly Niall! Was he really joking? If so, it turned out to be a really bad one :/

@Kitten2014
Thank you!! I'm happy you like it so far!!

This story is fantastic!!!!

@not_any_maryjane

gah! i know right! chapter 11 kiiiiiiillled me! at first i thought maybe he had amnesia and this was turning into a weird sci-fi fic. lol.

Omg! It changed so quickly my mind is barely catching up! Omg! :O

@lovetodance95
Thank you so much for reading! This is such a lovely little review too! I'm seriously so happy to hear that you are enjoying it! I'm currently working on the next chapter too so I hope you keep reading.

You just got a new subscriber :)
@not_any_maryjane told me to read this, and I must say I am impressed. I totally love the concept, a great story, for grown up fans, for sure, and different from the others in good meaning, free of worn out themes.
Keep up the good work! Hope to read more of this two soon :D