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Fitting Together Again - Comments, page 8
@OutofStyles
I know. I'm messing with my own head. I have a love hate relationship with the drama of stories...it's so hard to read but it makes it sooo much better. Here's your update! Let me know what you think!
OH my gosh you left us on a damn cliffhanger! GAH. I love Thalia's character but sometimes she really pisses me off with her pride haha. She's a wonderful character!
Omg no! If something bad happens to Thalia then Harry will feel responsible forever! Cant wait for the next update.
I don't believe in God but I'm praying for an update soon because you're messing with my head. Love you though :D
@Ransom girl
Yes. I agree 100%. Thalia and Harry are both to empathetic for their own good, always worried about others needs rather than their own. It's both their greatest strength and their biggest weakness. It doesn't help that neither have been in a serious relationship like this before and are learning as they go.
@msjagger
Thanks babe. The breakup was actually one of the first chapters that I wrote and so I have taken a lot of time to go through it and develop it. I wish I could spend that much time on all of them! I'm so glad you liked it!!
@LivinLikeLarry
Ahhhh I'm sorry! No gonna lie...I cried while writing it. And again while editing it. But it was a necessary pain. I'm glad you loved it - let me know how you feel about this next one. It's a bit of a twist...
@leah94rose
YAY! I LOVE hearing that! Misfits was a lot of fun to write and it all came so naturally. I really tired to deepen the characters with the sequel and that has definitely been a greater challenge than anticipated. But thanks!! I was terrified to write from Harry's point of view but now I've grown to like him quite a bit! :)
I love your writing so much (: I finished The Misfits SOOOO fast. I can't wait for you to update more! You write Harry very well (:
Omg! So that's the backstory we have all been waiting for. Beautifully written as always and well worth the wait. Poor Harry and Thal maybe if the were not so concerned over the other they would have talked their problems out or at least why they were being distant....
@Ransom girl
Agreed! She's just starting to see that side of him come out. But remember, she hasn't been clued in yet as to just how intense he has been to Harry. Right now she only sees a jealous but loving boyfriend.
@OutofStyles
Yes. Yes. Yes. Similar themes in this latest upload...#sorrynotsorry. HANG IN THERE.
@LivinLikeLarry
I know. These past few chapters have been killing me. They're so hard to write and it breaks my heart imagining it!
@foreverlove
Thank you SO much! That means more than you know. Let me know what you think of this newest update! It still has all the feels.
This was such a powerful chapter!!! Having both Thalia and Harry break in this chapter had me like 'nope, nope,nope not gonna cry oh here comes the tears'. I can not wait for the next chapter, you're killing me :D
@Ransom girl
Harry totally feels guilty for anything bad that has ever happened in Thalia's life since they met. And your right, if something were to happen now, Harry would completely blame himself. But that's just who he is! Check out the new chapter to find out what happened to Thalia!
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