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Fitting Together Again - Comments, page 6
@LivinLikeLarry
The song is called "I hate you, I love you" and in the text she quoted "I watch you watching her all the time. It's like she's the only girl you've ever seen. You don't care, you don't give a damn about me". Nicola said it in the text
Yaay you updated! I loved the chapter, it was really good, more drama ahead I expect?
Also liked that you quoted a bit from the song I hate you , I love you song! Really good! :)
OMG I LOOOOVE THIS!!!! Finally Nicola showed her true colors, bye bitch bye. And when Harry broke down :(((( this story is so amazing I can't wait for more! Hoping that Thalia soon will tell how she really feels :)
Great chapter! I'm REALLY glad I got to see that side of Nicola. Man she's kind of a fucked up bitch, just saying. As soon as she revealed she used him and Harry said "that's fucked up" I was like AMEN. What the hell? I mean I thought she was gonna turn into a bit of a bitch but I didn't think she was that cold hearted. Damn. I'm super stoked to see how Thalia and Marco hash this out.
@SJay
Welcome!! Though I feel I should warn you - fanfiction is a slippery slope! It's so addicting to imagine your favorite guys in all these different senarios. I'm glad you like the stories though! It's always slightly nerve-wracking to post a new chapter for the world of Directioners to see so your kind words mean the world! Let me know what you think of this newest chapter!
@Dreamurdreams
Aww thank you! That warms my heart! I never imagined ever actually posting these stories. I just started writing things down after imaging so many of these little scenes. They cluttered my brain and made it nearly impossible to focus on anything else! Though the trouble is more scenes keep popping up so I don't suppose I'll ever really stop writing. It's too therapeutic (and fun!).
@leah94rose
Niall is a goof, but he's also a fiercely loyal friend. And with her sisters gone, Niall's the closest thing Thalia has to family (because, despite Tilly's persistance in Operation TAHU, Thalia really doesn't want her involved). I'm glad you can appreciate it in it's rarity :) And I knooow, writing about Harry watching Thalia kills me every time. Let me know what you think of this newest chapter...it's a bit rough given the hectic schedule of the past few weeks...
@LivinLikeLarry
Yay! Glad you're getting notifications (now that I'll actually be updating again - sorry about that). Stay tuned for the next chapter...Thalia will really get to see how psychotic Marco can be...in the mean time, let me know what you think of this one!
As with Dreamurdreams, it has taken me forever to figure out how to write a comment. Alas I have succeeded! I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story. I just started checking out this fanfiction stuff and you write impeccably! I am constantly checking up just so I don't miss an update! Thanks for being awesome, and for being an amazing writer!
so it took me a while to find out how to write a comment (about a month) but i finally found out!! I just had to let you know how in love i am with your story and you characters, ecer since i started reading l couldn't stop, and now i get so excited every time i see you uploaded a new chapter. I love it SO SO SO MUCH you're the best writer ever :) thank you so much for writing and please never ever quit writing. (Btw: thaila and harry are the best)
Great chapter! very insightful! I like the different side you showed of Niall. Too often he's written by people as a goof who isn't super deep and I like how you set up his character through the series as someone whose character could be expanded upon. Wonderful. I'm already pumped for the next update. By the way, the way you describe Harry when he laughs or grins just melts my heart. I think we all wish Harry would smile at us the way he smiles at Thalia. :)
I can't wait for more! I'm finally caught up and gahh can't believe she wants to go away with the boys5
5/24/16