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Always There (Frat Boy Niall FF) - Comments
@xXFluffy_GruXx
I know I keep trying to fix it, but the site won't let me edit it. I'll try again, but if not. I'll delelte and reupload
Thank you for the Chapter 16 update it was we'll worth the wait and I love your story and the time it takes you to make it. I'm pretty picky about which story I read. :)
I hope you don't think I'm rude, since this is the first comment I have done, but I noticed that in every chapter except the last chapter that you have broken it up into different paragraphs, but Chapter 16 is just one big paragraph. I have done this exact same thing before, and I have noticed that breaking it up into different paragraphs helps it flow better and is a lot easier for your readers to read.
I hope you don't think that I hate this story or that I am just a rude hater, because I absolutely love this story. It's a different take on the whole "childhood best friends" stories, which I love.
@xXFluffy_GruXx
Thanks :D
4/25/17