Fifteen - Comments, page 2

i've given you a ten and i dont want to sound terrible but you have a really nice mature concept going on here; don't ruin it with petty grammar mistakes and rushed sentences.

@BloojayLove
I don't want to go to fast with it to though.....

But yes Harry is naughty isn't he?

P.S. OOOOOHHHHHH HARRY!!! You perverted naughty guy you ;) I LOVE it!

@icedtea.
Todayy!!! Like...ummm...right now xD duhhhhh

@Angelic Aria

I will soon, today or tomorrow? What do you think

This is good so far...plz update :-)

@BloojayLove
I'm only joking! It 2 I'll be up tomorrow, I promise.

Message me! :)

@icedtea.
Oh no! Please dpn't feel rushed xD

@BloojayLove
Well....... I guess I could stay up working on it.

But I'm so bored. Someone map essay me to keep me company lol.

I should update in a bit..... unless i fall asleep

I feel like this story will be my new guilty pleasure xD hahaha I am in LOVE!! More to indulge in pleaassseee *angel face*

@Jasyjas18
Thank you so much! I think it will too.it will only be me writing it from now on by the way, me and sugarcube. Have decided to put our heads together for a different story, when should I update?

Feel free to message me by the way!

I really like the story!! I think this will go far, can't wait for the next update!!!

@icedtea.
Yes the point is the best XD
and yes it did come off rlly exciting!!!!
thats why I'm rlly curious of what happens next and like rlly excited XD

@High_on_love
The point is the best part!

I just wanted to make sure it would come off as exciting! I think the idea of a fifteen year old and a 30 year old kissing is kinda interesting, in a non perverted way of course, more in stories than reality.

@High_on_love
The point is the best part!

I just wanted to make sure it would come off as exciting! I think the idea of a fifteen year old and a 30 year old kissing is kinda interesting, in a non perverted way of course, more in stories than reality.

Damn got to the point fast
great chapter
update soon

@xAmethyst-Stylesx
Yay!

Jules (sugercube.) Will update when she finishes home work as far as I know! Message me :)

Update. Update. Update. *runs around chanting with a poster*