You Are My Eyes (Haven't been edited) - Comments, page 3

@PS2Live the dream
Great!!

@Anwyn

Hahahha.....sorry....Ivy can sense movements remember? While.....welll Harry on the other hand is drunk.....pretty drunk :D Hahha I am sorry for being cruel......after every storm....there would always be a rainbow right???.....Then again.....I won't want you guys to able to guess the ending.....I like things that are unexpected :D

@PS2Live the dream

well, just finished the chapter.. and I'm speechless.. If something I was expecting Ivy to be hit by a car.. I'm glad he at least told her about his feelings and I hope he will have a speedy recovery.. and by the way, don't be cruel anymore! :)

@nata

Awww you are a sweet person love......also thank you and I am really happy that you do <3

@Anwyn
Yeah I know......Ivy has a tough life.....I would hate to be in her place really....aww thank you.....I was really dying at school :D You too.....good luck with all your studies ^_^


@BloojayLove
Awww don't cry love.....we fall seven times but we stand up eight, right? <3

*bitterly sobs*

@PS2Live the dream
well, you see I just trust you.. I know you have your writer's deeper intentions otherwise, you wouldn't screw up their relationship.. :) Poor Ivy though.. her whole world just collapsed.. Zayn, Harry,and Tom (even though I don't care for him).. she thinks that she can't trust anyone..
Enjoy your first day at school after the winter break :)

I am so worried for Ivy i just wanna run to her and give her a huge hug i dunno, i really like this story.

@Anwyn

Hahhaha I know....I was thinking about how you would feel the whole time I wrote it......I know you hate the back and forth relationship.....but I can assure you that......this is the answer to their individual feeling :D you will see <3 :P

Well, that was a back-stabbing.. just when I thought they might be finally happy together and overcoming obstacles side by side.. you came up with this?! Wow.. that was meanie :D

@Anwyn
Couldn't have said it any better ♥♥ p.s. I hate those types of stories lolol Too....much..drama...not...enough....TIME....

@PS2Live the dream
No problem sweet stuff!!! I love your work! Can't wait for he next update :)

@Jty06

Awww anytime my dear :D I am glad I've made your day ^_^ <3 xxx

Thnks for the update... u made my day <3 <3

Thnks for the update... u made my day <3 <3

@Anwyn

Awww thank you love :D your words literally want to make me cry with happiness <3 You girls are way too nice honestly .....I will try and keep that up....you know update more regularly.....that's why I've only been updating 'You Are My Eyes' and not touched the others.....I want to get one finished at a time. Thanks again love.....much appreciated of your support :D xxx

@BloojayLove

I agree with you.. of course it depens on everyone's preferences.. but I don't think that this story is going to fast.. Personally, I don't like way to many "ups and downs" in the relationship.. you know what I mean.. in one chapter you have a happy couple crazy in love and in the next one they are broken up forever.. well, of course till the next chapter because they get back together so they can break up in a different way again.. It gets dull and boring..

@PS2Live the dream

So don't worry.. You're doing great.. You had an unique idea for a plot (even though I really hope Ivy would be able to see) and your story is witty and compelling.. Keep on doing what you've been doing so far :)
by the way, thanks for your frequency of updating.. that is also very much appreciated!

@BloojayLove

Hahhaa yeah.....that's what I was scared about.....being too slow as well as not wanting to go too fast you know?.....Thank you for your opinion lovely <3.....Also....just finished writing the next chapter....will update tomorrow.....I will assure you.....it's CRAZY.....^_^

@Brianna.Horan
@PS2Live the dream

It all depends on what your idea of "going too fast" is honestly. We are on Chapter 27. Usually the characters open up to each other in chapter 15 after they've slept together in ch. 10. So it's all different opinions.

I personally am finding it more realistic to timing in reality. But that's why we all have different opinions :-)

@Brianna.Horan
@PS2Live the dream

It all depends on what your idea of "going too fast" is honestly. We are on Chapter 27. Usually the characters open up to each other in chapter 15 after they've slept together in ch. 10. So it's all different opinions.

I personally am finding it more realistic to timing in reality. But that's why we all have different opinions :-)

@Brianna.Horan
@PS2Live the dream

It all depends on what your idea of "going too fast" is honestly. We are on Chapter 27. Usually the characters open up to each other in chapter 15 after they've slept together in ch. 10. So it's all different opinions.

I personally am finding it more realistic to timing in reality. But that's why we all have different opinions :-)

@Brianna.Horan

Hahaha....it's all G :D I love receiving feedbacks and I am glad you are being honest dear :D.....oh.....don't worry, I have more things that will pop up.....more....I know it seems fast....I was thinking the same thing.....but I was scared that you guys think I am going too slow with this story :D Thanks for the feedback.....much appreciated lovely <3