The Silence That Surrounds - Comments, page 2

omg i missed you!!!! i've been reading this since like chapter 4 and i've been so obsessed. i was seriously checking like almost every day to see if you'd updated and i was so excited to see that you did. i absolutely love your writing style, don't ever stop please bc then i might cry and i don't want to show 'weakness'. [you know you're in too deep when you make references]

okay, yeah, that's it lol. have a nice life=)

@bonnebell

Thank you that's very nice of you :) and don't worry about it, you didn't. I promise. I'm gonna move - I need my own place anyhow so it will all work out

@VanitySorrowHeart
i'm sorry if i brought anything up i shouldn't have.
if you ever need someone to talk to and just vent, i'm all ears.
xx

@bonnebell

I couldn't agree with you more. When you write and create - you create from your soul and when someone comments just to be spiteful or cruel, it truly hits home but I got myself straightened and will have chapter 33 soon - at least the next few days and not 3 weeks. As for my brother and I - oh no lol were far from cool. I'm done with him for right now, he got me kicked out of my house I have to be out in 60 days so right now my mind switches from ways to cover up murder to look like an accident to wishing he knocks himself unconscious for peace and quiet...so far accident/murder concept no ideas come to mind and I should only be so lucky if he rams his head into a wall and save me the trouble. lol

@VanitySorrowHeart
I'm so sorry to hear that :( I wish I could say something like 'don't pay attention to those people' or 'they say things like that because they're jealous' but i know it won't help because with someone who's a writer/artist/creator - things often hit a little closer to home than others believe/know.

ps: i hope you and your brother are cool x

@bonnebell

Hey Bonnebell! I actually got a slew of really bad comments on another site and I nearly scrapped the story. It took me 21 days and a really horrible fight with my brother to be able to write. Thank you so much for such a kind comment and I am really happy you're enjoying the story :-)

I was so excited when i got a notifcation for an update.
I can't believe you held off writing for so long - the story is absolutely wonderful.

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

I agree, Dylan is getting the shorter end of the stick here. Harry has a heart - it just tends to beat a little slower lol but he does have one! I agree and it is going to get back to that :)

I kinda feel bad for Dylan actually. I have some kind of respect for harry for saving the cat. Looks like he has a heart after all. I think it should be silent like it was throughout the story

@diamonds!

Hi Diamonds! Aw, I'm glad it made you reboot your story! I'm glad you like it! I should have chapter 30 done sometime tonight! I'll go and check yours out, I look forward to it!

Not going to lie; reading this made me reboot my own drama/thriller story. This is unbelievable x

@VanitySorrowHeart
Im sure I will. I can't wait!

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

Oh wow - that's so truly nice and kind of you to say! I always have tried to bring a story to life and I am so truly thankful of such kind words, Lizz, thank you honestly. I never knew Damien could get evil and he def has a few more things planned out before he leaves but next chapter is focusing on a much softer view so for me its a way to unwind I should have that today, maybe tonight as I am still working on chapter 29. I hope you like what's to come!

@VanitySorrowHeart
Even though the last few chapters have been emotional and very intense, it was written beautifully. It's absolutely great that you put what you're feelings into your writing. That's what makes a story more real. Honestly, I think that you actually have to put the rape part in the story because we ALL have to face reality. Everyday in this world, someone is getting raped, and putting that in the story made it even the more real. That fact that you manage to put real, actual situations and one direction and let your actual emotions to be put in one story is truly and utterly amazing! Wow. Every time you write a new chapter, you manage to surprise me with everysentence put into this writing. Not even some professionals know how to keep a reader's eyes locked and feel every single emotion into a piece of writing. Incredible! You never fail to amaze me. You capture me in every word you write. Even though I feel pain and guilt and pitty and everything else, this story still captures me making me love it more and more by each word. Words can not explain how real, powerful, and beautiful this story is. You are actually the first -and maybe the only- author to actually make me feel all these emotions at once. You always manage to take my breathe away. Just wow.

Also, im terribly sorry that you had a bad day that day, but your emotions only makes your story the more stonger and seem more real. I'm pretty sure you will get through all your bad days and have better ones. Have a good day/evening/night depending on where you are. Xx

@LIZZY THAT GIRL

Holy crap, hey Liz - wow that was an emotional review, I'm really sorry about that it was just so crucial to the story but chapter 29 eases back into some sort of humanity and I hope you stick around for that and I can promise you - damien will eventually die but he is being kept in for the 2nd story for a reason and I can promise you after the next 2 to 3 chapters you won't see him until the next story because he is a really emotionally draining person person to write - like, you can only imagine I'm sure! He will come into the ending briefly but wont appear until the next story. I'll be honest, I need to not write when I feel the way I do because I end up making it way too emotional and I totally am sorry about that, Liz. I was having a bad day...my writing can get a little but out there but Damien is Saatans long lost brother because he is a character who has no rules he has no soul...he's...demonic in the deepest way possible. I promise next chapter will be way calmer and no rape. Christian is in the next one and Niall/Harry. It's going to unwind from those scenes but Sophia is strong but everyone has a breaking point and it's going to be a rough story because so many changes are coming and I hope you'll stick around for it because in the 2nd story I can promise you an ending that will be satisfying and the right one that most if not all readers will like. Like I said I am so sorry for making you feel like that :-(

I just can't anymore. I felt all her pain. I feel like I just lost my innocents. I feel so bad and at this point, I want her to die because I don't want her to suffer anymore. I don't want her to live in the sick world. I can't imagine how she is feeling. I can't imagine how much pain she's going through physically, emotionally and mentally. I can't imagine someone going through all of this. I know I said no one deserves to die because everyone's lives are precious, but Damian needs to die. People like him don't deserve to live in this world. I have so much hatred for him, words can't explain how I feel right now. Sophie doesn't deserve to be treated like some sort of creature. She is a human being and she needs to be treated like a human. Damian is not a human nor creature, he is worst than the devil himself. I really want Sophie to be killed just to end her suffering. Her pain. The torture. Damian is such a sick, twist person that I don't even know why he himself is even living.

The best chapter, yet! Thumbs up for the apposite title! :)

@Cathy Linson

Aw, thanks so much Cathy, glad you liked it! Chapter 28 will be written in a few and posted!

@tuflove98

it's finally here!

I Love It!