The Kidnapper - Comments

It's worth reading

@Mrs.Horan1237
I know you'll do great with your story. You can make it whatever you want it to be.
@KK_Styles
Your an amazing writer! Can't wait for the update!
~EquestrianViolinist434

thank you your's got me hooked on it by the summery. I think it is great.

@Mrs.Horan1256
It sounds very interesting

I'm not sure i am still trying to figure out what it should be about. I think about a kidnapping story. Zayn seems like the other one that would be a kidnapper.

@Mrs.Horan1256
Thank you for the support and reading my story, but I bet your story is briliam

@CAZI_STYLES
Thanks, you write this amazayn story. I love a lot and think you should be a writer even i'm not this good. Your story is awesome. You are Fabulouis.


@CAZI_STYLES

@Mrs.Horan1256
Thank you, trust me i'm not going to stop writing this story til the end. But I like what you did there, it was extraordinharry.

I think you should keep writing it is wonderful. Don't Stop doing what you are doing cause you are amazayn.

I really hope you do keep writing this story!!!

DONT!!!!! @KK_Styles

Thanks guys for the great comments❤️, but i'm thinking of discontinuing this story. Please comment if i should or shoulden't

love this

Love this st

Please update this is so good

DONT YOU DARE GET A LIFE AND STOP UP

Loving the story :-)
<3

awesome chapter please update!

Update please u cant just leave us like this please update. Idk maybe it could be like a chapter werw harry gets her again but she doesnt escape this time and like she starts falling for him and like then liam tells her how she feels but she doesnt really feel the same way about liam anymore so she tells him he's to late and that she's in love with harry now and that he should have said he loved her when he had the chance. And then harry and her end up getting married and they live in the cabin and she decides to join the gang and yeah. But u might want to put that in your own words though because it needs to have more of your flow. This is just a suggestion

Update please u cant just leave us like this please update. Idk maybe it could be like a chapter werw harry gets her again but she doesnt escape this time and like she starts falling for him and like then liam tells her how she feels but she doesnt really feel the same way about liam anymore so she tells him he's to late and that she's in love with harry now and that he should have said he loved her when he had the chance. And then harry and her end up getting married and they live in the cabin and she decides to join the gang and yeah. But u might want to put that in your own words though because it needs to have more of your flow. This is just a suggestion