Broken Love - Comments, page 3

@Lee_Loves_Looouiiss

Yeah but ii was trying to say that He broke up with her on that night before He found her in the Allie. sorry that I was worded funny. I thought that I made it clear sorry

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO
In the chapter it says "I came here exactly 7 months ago.and on that night when you brought me to your house that was when you broke up with her. Oh and I'm pretty damn sure you guys had sex that night"

@Lee_Loves_Looouiiss

Well the broke up before he found Egypt in the ally

@Mashton_Styles
I agree, feel pretty bad for Rachel :( Egypt pretty much stole Louis.. hadn't even realised until this chapter

@Mashton_Styles

Yeah I see where you are coming form but it was not of they first night that they meet that they had sex it was a long time after like 3 mouths after they meet. and Plus when they had sex Louis lied and said that he had sex with no one but her. But I understand and that's what I wanted some of the readers to feel. I wanted there to be a conflict of who should be angery at who so that shows me that I was successful so thank you so much I really appreaciate you oppinon

Wow.. O.o
I feel for Egypt cause of course it'd be difficult knowing that your best friend and boyfriend have had sex before but really she's being unfair.
I mean to be honest they haven't done anything wrong. They were in a relationship and they slept together. There's nothing wrong with that.
If anything Rachel should be mad at Egypt, she is after all the one who stole her boyfriend. Like you said, Egypt slept with him the first time she met him and that was the day he dumped Rachel so she has no right to be calling Rachel a slut. Rachel has no obligation whatsoever to tell Egypt (Louis new girlfriend who he left her for) about the relationship she and Louis had.
Egypt is the one who split up their relationship. It's a wonder Rachel even wants anything to do with her.
Realistically what did Egypt expect? It's not like Rachel and Louis cheated on her..

Sorry, haha its just a story I just get very invested in characters. It just seems like everyone is sticking up for Egypt and I needed to voice my opinion. Haha love this story though, update soon please!

@Liam's Polka Dot

Ok love! more coming up

@jimmy_stylinson

I agree

Calums totally into Rachel :p They're so cute :') Haha, loving it so far, can't wait for more :D

I feel bad for Egypt. I get that Louis and Rachel once dated and had a "fling" but still. :(

@jimmy_stylinson: We will as soon as possible!

please update soon :) i wanna see how things go

please update soon :) i wanna see how things go

please update soon :) i wanna see how things go

Update soon :) Wanna see how Emily and Luke get on and what everyone thinks if Rachel & C alum :"

Update soon :) Wanna see how Emily and Luke get on and what everyone thinks if Rachel & C alum :"

@Niall's_Strawberry_Red

I'm trying love

Update soo :D :))

@Harrys_Mockingbird

GREAT! It'll be up tomorrow

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO
Oh cool :) So you're updating next then? :p I'm really excited for another chapter :D

@Harrys_Mockingbird

Yep I was wedding planning today so I have not done it yet