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Whoo!!! Great chapter! Happy to see that they're starting to get closer! x

I cry every time I read a chapter because she has gone through so much shit in her life because of him but she still loves him and cares about him but doesn't want to ruin his relationship. but at the same time he would risk his relationship for her to love him again.

this is a perfect story it's has the perfect amount of emotion and I can tell you put a lot of effort into this story and your work will pay of in unexplainable ways for others in multiple ways.

Holy shit. This chappy is fan fucking tastic. Love you!!!!! x

Just peace love and some other shit, thanks girl. jk ;)

Anyway I think this maybe one of my favorite chapters, even if you did only write it in thirty minutes. Question is what will Presley do next, I'm waiting for her freak out now... GIVE IT TO ME NOW PLEASE!?!?! Also a little shocked she didn't loose her cool and spill not even a little bit of her secret. Way to go Presley!

***Insert infinite amount of clapping emojis here*** love you and impressed with everything you wrote considering you weren't that motivated last night and you just wrote a freaking bomb chapter in thirty minutes. I'm so honored that I get to have your name written on my ring finger. :)

@mmcdade
I'm sorry I let you down. I've had a bit of a dry spell. I love you, though. I love you lots.
@Astyles
You're like really like... Can we hug? Let's just hug.
@ohhboybands
You my dear are going to be the reason my sotry gets an ending. (;

Also cheating on Harry?

Louis is treading thin on some very thin water here, if I may say so. Can't help but wonder how much longer Presley will keep her cool before starting to spill her little secret. Also can't help but wonder how Ben and El's conversation is going; he's gotta come back eventually for Presley. She needs him right now!

Ugghhhh. Love this story so much!!!! Extremely happy to see that you're doing it day by day, mainly bc I'm selfish and want more chapters. Love you! x

I love that you update so often! Keep it up!
the story is soooo good!!! So many things we need to find out!

Yes! I love this idea. So excited to read the next few chappys, darling! x

Oh shoot! I'm so excited for this next chapter or two or however long this deal goes until, but I have a feeling Ben isn't going to like this... Also will we ever find out what happened between Ben and Eleanor? Anyway I'm going back to bed. ;)

Celia!?!?! This is probably a first it's 4AM and I'm up, counted I fell asleep at 7PM, but still I'm up late and I'm saying late because I'll probably read this update and then go back to sleep. lol. Love you! Sorry I didn't message you today-- I just kind of needed to be by myself and try to ignore these feelings, which was such a stupid idea...

@ashwearschucks
You're story makes my heart soar! (\^.^/)
@ohhboybands
IMY /).^/)
@mmcdade
You're like really awesome, I'm jealous!
@A girl with a dream
You make me smile just as wide!!!! (\^.^/)

Oh Niall. Oh Niall, if only you knew...

"I'm just waiting to figure out who I am without Caleb and Louis. Waiting to see if I can be okay without Harry."-- loved this line.

Anyway can't wait for another update! And I'm sorry life is complicated and messy.

I love the frequency of the updates! Every time I see a notification I literally smile so wide!

@ohhboybands

I agree. And good for Ben for coming to her defesnse! Awesome writing all around.

Ohh shitttt. This can't be good. Love the story though!!! x

"I had succumbed to rock bottom, because the boy I had fallen in love with and my best friend had both left." This sentence was straight tears, and everything after it just even more tears!

I thought it was written very well-- and now I sound like a fucking critic so that's gonna stop. ;)

Anyway props for Presley for standing up for herself and finally calling Louis out on being a shitty friend.

@ashwearschucks
Do it Celia?!

Don't know if you can tell or recognize me, but I love your story! So seriously Celia go read it and give it a shot! :D

I absolutely love this story and the amount of detail put into every character. I get so excited when this story updates.

I would love for you to read my story 'Then you came along'