Sweet Desire - Comments, page 5

So good!!! x

@xRockMex
I just don't want her to do anything drastic to herself! I'm glad she's finally getting away from a lunatic!

@not_any_maryjane
This happens often in many relationships, people suffer in silence and they try to find escape routes. The way Emily involved Louis was wrong, but we still have to learn about her. She's dangerous because of Max, she can't breathe without him as he feels he's that important.
She should have acted sooner, but she is in fear herself. It's scary that someone can be so powerful and can make you feel so worthless.

Max just wants to feel powerful, he feeds off fear and hasn't exactly got a life worth sorting his act out for. He has nothing to lose. Unfortunately there are some people in the world too who think this way. They don't worry about their behaviour and how affects others.

Thank you, such a strong comment but so much sense you make :) xx

@KAOT
I think it was time to show that Emily hasn't got things easy and she's been suffering in silence for quite sometime. We'll learn more about her and Max. I'm glad you liked it, thank you :) xx

As I don't believe a person could be absolute evil, and I know you don't believe either because you are a realistic person, I imagined something like this could be happening to Emily. She has an abusive boyfriend, so idealised in fanfictional paradise. But this is the proper face of dark people. But even though I feel sorry for her, after almost having a guy killed she should have switched tactics sooner. Now everyone is in danger, and somehow I really, really fear for their lives. So I'm pretty worried right now.

There's nothing romantic about violence. Violence is never a way to show love or caring. If we'd get to stop idealising such behaviours maybe we could live in a better world. Thank you, babe, because you are an exceptional person and writer :) xx

Ohhhh what is Emily doing?! I'm glad she's getting away, max doesn't seem like a good guy!! I'm anxious for what's to come! Fantastic update, a treat for two updates today!!

@not_any_maryjane

Very, very true my friend! Always lovely to hear youre enjoying it :) xx

@KAOT

It's always good to be wary :) Thank you my friend, means alot that you like it! xx

I'm with KAOT here, trust no ne. The mess is getting bigger and I'm starting to distress! But I love it xD xx

Something about Holly that I still don't trust...loved this update!! Happy Friday!

@softballchick79
I know :/ xx

Flowers ((sighs))

Harry is about to get them into trouble .....

@not_any_maryjane
I'm glad you felt it too :) and you're right, she needs to stay strong and make him work for her. Honoured you love this story my friend xx

@KAOT
Totally, it won't hurt Louis to prove his feelings for her. Thank you ;) xx

Oh, the flowers! He melt me too... But she has to stay strong! And Harry is so thoughtful... I love this story so much! Xx

Yes Bella! Make him wait it out!! Prefect chapter!!

@not_any_maryjane
He's definitely just switched quickly and has just rushed into his developed feelings for Bella. I don't think he's as bad deep down, it's just realising how he's treated people and how he needs to change his ways.

Thank you my friend :) xx

@not_any_maryjane
He's definitely just switched quickly and has just rushed into his developed feelings for Bella. I don't think he's as bad deep down, it's just realising how he's treated people and how he needs to change his ways.

Thank you my friend :) xx

@mmcdade
I know it's good that Bella is protecting her heart and she's bound to be a little wary of Louis. Maybe Louis rushed into it? We'll see how this works out. Thanks my friend, love to you too! Xx

Softballchick is totally right here. No wonder Bella can't take Louis seriously. I mean, I get him, but I think he doesn't really know his heart at this particular moment. Bella is right to stay away. She has to protect herself from further disappointments.

I know mess is far from over and I'm super excited about it! xx