Sweet Desire - Comments, page 6

Awww. :'( poor Lou.

Bella's doing what's right, though, as much as I want them together. A grand gesture on Louis's part, perhaps? Love you!!! x

@KAOT
Couldn't agree more, she needs Louis to realise that she is in control too. Just because he's started to see her in a different light doesn't mean she'll bow down to him. I've actually got a Harry's pov coming up ;)

Thank you :) xx

Two updates today!! Love it! I'm glad Bella is being level headed and not just giving in when Louis wants her. As much as I want them to be together, the last thing I want is for Bella to get hurt. And where is Harry? I hope he's not doing something dumb...

Fantastic update as usual!!

@janelane
Ah thank you so much, lovely to hear!! X

@softballchick79
Aww, well that's fair enough! :) xx

@not_any_maryjane
I know he's frustrating but he's mentally not in the right place at the moment. Hopefully Louis can turn things around and I hope you like the other chapter I've just posted my friend!

You're welcome for the shout out :) xx

THIS IS SO SO SO FREAKING GOOD! UGH, I CAN'T GET ENOUGH. MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASEEEE! X

No, he doesn't deserve her .... Fickle pickle

God, Louis' attitude is a bit frustrating. This is not the time to act like a gentleman, especially with no lady. He should be more aware about Bella's perception, but I guess he's still so smitten. He'll lose her to Harry if he doesn't react in time. It wouldn't bother me much though. He has done nothing to deserve her caring :/

Hope Harry doesn't get into trouble. Fantastic update, and thank you for the shout out, babe :) xx

@KAOT
Yeah Emily's arrogance is really off putting and she seems to carry trouble round with her. I'm glad too that Bella stuck up for herself :)

No problem at all, you all deserved the shout outs xx

@mmcdade
Glad you like it ;) xx

@softballchick79
Haha I know, I felt the same when I was writing it. But Bella is more of a softer touch so had to soften it up a little. Xx

Ohh Emily. I wouldn't trust that girl any further than I could throw her. I'm glad Bella at least stuck up for herself, but Emily seems to not understand the seriousness of the situation!

Thank you so much for the shoutout!! It means so much that you like my story!

Oh dammmmmmmmmnnnnnnn. Love this story! x

Oh dammmmmmmmmnnnnnnn. Love this story! x

OMG you are an angel !! - much love !!

this chapter makes the bitch in me want to fight - I hate girls like that ! Ughh!

@softballchick79
Haha, very good point! Xx

@KAOT
Yeah Emily deserves a good telling off! Aww I know, if only Louis could realise! Xx

Well, Atleast if a cat fight ensues, they're in a hospital....

Ohhhh I agree with not_any_maryjane I can wish Bell has some not so nice words or actions against Emily.

I'm hopeless, I still want Bella and Louis together. :)