Sweet Desire - Comments, page 3

I definitely think she has to tell Louis something did happen between them, in part because he suspects it did, and second, because the truth helps to prevent mess, and at this point I don't know if they're able to manage more mess than what they already have. somehow I sense something's coming and I'm getting nervous all over again! Oh, these star-crossed lovers! xx

@KAOT
Oh he's really fallen :) thank you for commenting and reading! Sorry I've been away! Xx

@Who's Teddy
Hey! Thanks for your comment, sorry I'm so late to reply! Really pleased you're enjoying it. Thanks for commenting :) x

@not_any_maryjane
Shall try and update tonight my lovely, thank you for your awesome comment :) xx

Love this story,it is so exciting!!!

Oh I loved it! Louis has fallen quite hard for Bella. :) Everyone needs a bit of liquid courage every now and then! And I really enjoyed the flashbacks, fantastic update as always!!

I'm so thrilled to know what happened between them! Probably not so much and I don't know what I prefer. :) I love them together! Thank you for so many great updates! Xoxo

Oh, my! What did they do?! I'm sure I wans't expecting this but bring it on! They need a bit of happiness! And who doesn't? ;)

I know it takes time to mend things but sometimes we can't control our feelings because they're too strong. Great update, my friend! Can't wait to learn what really happened there! :D <3 xx

@not_any_maryjane
Ah their kiss, I'm not sure how theyre going to feel in the morning. Maybe Louis will be pleased, prehaps Bella will feel a little disappointed? We will just have to see how their sober minds think. I could be wrong. ;)
Bella did handle it well and I was glad to make her the one to show Holly and Louis that she isn't going to be silenced in a conversation that clearly involved her :)

Thank you so much my friend, bring on your next update ;) xx

@KAOT
Thank you :)
I think it's good that Louis has seen a side of Bella where she takes no crap. It was good for her to speak up as Holly was talking about her firstly to Louis. But yes, Louis should have said more but who knows what he'll do in the next chapter ;)
Appreciate you commenting my friend, can't Wait for your next update :) xx

I was missing this story so much! I can't believe they kissed! I'm so excited because they seem to be finding the way to finally get together. Bumping into Holly certainly was a low, but Bella managed it pretty well! KAOT's right though! ;)

Can't wait to see what will happen next! xx

Ohhh loved your two updates today!! And Louis and Bella finally kissed, he's in deep that's for sure! Holly just needs to step away, she was helpful but she's still very hung up on Louis. Louis needs to speak up too! He can't keep having everyone speak for him!

@not_any_maryjane
Yeah they really do need some space, Bella did the right thing as things just wouldn't have worked if they rushed into it. It's good to have some space,
Thank you :) xx

@KAOT
Yeah they just need some space, it's no good jumping into something when they're minds are clouded by other distractions. Hopefully they can chill out a little and just enjoy each others company.
Thank you :) xx

Yeah, if I were Bella I'd be a mess too. To have that chat after seeing Emily and with Louis telling her those things about she and Harry... it simply couldn't turn out all right. They need time to really figure out their hearts, and to heal the wounds. Good things take time!

Amazing update, my dear! xx

Ahhhhhh! I want them together but I understand Bella's reservation. If Louis is already saying he's jealous and can't get past her kiss, even if they weren't together at the time. They just need some time to figure themselves out before they dive into each other!

Loved this update! Fantastic!

@not_any_maryjane
Such a good point you made about Harry and Bella, they do just genuinely care about him and they've stuck by him even when things did get rough and a little complicated between them all.
I know it's a very sensitive thing to write about as so many people suffer in silence in relationships and are often afraid to speak up and tell someone. Holly doesn't see past the hurt that she feels and she's quite abrupt towards Emily, which is a shame because Emily explained things to her and that is the hardest thing to do. There will be people in life who don't quite understand the impact of one's suffering, but there will defiantly be someone who will listen and try to help. I'm proud of Louis for taking it seriously and for trying to be there for her even though he has his own issues with Emily.

Thank you my friend, you know I've learned alot from you :) thank you for sticking by me and for commenting xx

@KAOT
So glad to hear that from you, so much drama! Yes their chat will be interesting, Bella still sees Emily as a threat so hopefully Emily can make peace? :)
Thanks for commenting and continuing to read this story xx

@Who's Teddy
I shall listen to you because I love to hear what you think, you have a fair point. Harry doesn't see Bella like that because he knows she's into Louis, he's a loyal frien. Hopefully Bella will see that Louis is trying to make things right :)
Thanks for your comment :) x

@More than a feeling
:) thank you, hope you continue to like it! x