Just as Much - Comments, page 6

That last paragraph was so sweet

I didn't realise you updated!
What a lovely chapter, Niall just proved how sweet he is and hopefully will remind Erica exactly why she fell for him. Written beautifully again. I love these two. Xx

Erica REALLY needed to hear what Allison told her! I have a feeling that they might make it through this conversation and if they do, they will make to the end!! His song book!! UGH!! I'm dying inside!! And the last line, it all starts with her, would have melted me on the spot. especially with the accent. I don't think I could ever go somewhere with an accent because I wouldn't be able to talk to any male without falling in love with them immediately!! I'm going to cry if I think about the fact that there's only three chapters left!! Please, more!!

Three chapters until I die I seriously don't want this to end!!

So thoughtful of Niall to give her his journal. Communication can be an issue, but it can be solved just opening your heart. Sometimes it's the most difficult thing to do, to share your heart with someone... :) I loved it!

Great chapter!
Everybody needs a best friend ;)
I was surprised when Niall appeared and so happy at the same time.

@All-is-on
I laughed while writing that party as well, no worries!! These two are hanging on a wire and we shall see if they're strong enough to take that leap of faith. Hope you got that chem lab report written, always hated Chem labs. Lol, thanks for reading and commenting!!

@LoveReadingAndWriting
I have some ideas but nothing written in stone! :)

@Blessing-in-disguisex
Three more chapters!!! Eeks!!

@xRockMex
Yes, they're both still learning! People may think that Erica has it all together but she still has things to learn about Niall too. That leap from friends to boyfriend and girlfriend is more difficult than people may think!

My heart physically hurt while reading this chapter! Oh, what your writing does to me!! But this line, 'I swallow my pride, it's long gone actually,' for some odd reason, even though it's pretty somber, had me cracking up!! I attribute it to stress. I'm reading this story while I should be writing a chemistry lab report. Oh well. I'd much rather be reading this story anyway!! I really need there to be more!! And by more, I mean a happy ending!! And by ending, I mean an ending to this story, not their relationship!! The end of this story will hopefully be the beginning of theirs. Even though I realize that that doesn't make sense because they are fictional and only exist in this story, so when this story is over, they are no longer doing anything. Oh man. I just rambled on for a while. Oh well. My brain isn't in my head like it's supposed to be. More please! Forever awaiting that happily ever after!

@KAOT

But when you finish the story, please make a sequel !!!

Niall better fix his relationship soon and no you can't end the story!!!

@KAOT
I know this site is starting to fall apart, I understand it's frustrating and the alerts are lacking! Xx

@KAOT
I know this site is starting to fall apart, I understand it's frustrating and the alerts are lacking! Xx

@KAOT
Oh Niall. You've really put your foot in it this time, but everything Zayn said was right. Erica is a good person and I think she's close to having enough. I hope Niall can work his way back to her before it's too late. We all make mistakes and do stupid things, it's a learning curve and Niall is still learning. They both are.

I think Rachel is right, Erica needs some space and Niall needs to sort out exactly what he wants from their relationship. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Xx

@xRockMex
Of course it didn't tell me you updated, not just once but twice! You know I would have commented and read if I knew it was updated!

They are are both so stubborn! It's a little difficult to put myself in the conversation because they're so stubborn! But that's what I try to do when I write, I'm glad it helps to make things seem more realistic! Thank you so much for commenting and aways reading, I can't wait to see where your story takes me!

@mcfee21
I can totally see your point about Erica! She is being just a bit irrational about things but things have just been stressful between them. :) Thanks so much for commenting!

@Niallers-Giraffe
Thank you so much! It was difficult to write as well, I understand the tears!

@lovetodance95
It probably would have! But you know me, just a touch more drama goes a long ways! :)