She Belongs To Me - Comments, page 7

Oh my lord. This story is just so good!!! I honestly cannot wait for them to get back together, although the way you are writing it is so realistic, which one doesn't find much in fanfictions. Your work is truly lovely, and you are an amazing author. xxx

@not_any_maryjane
Oh right, that's lovely and something new I have learnt! Thank you for that. :) :) xx

@xRockMex
Bah, it just happens that where people see words I get to hear music sometimes, the rhythm of the rhyme. And it means the poet within you comes out when you least expect it :) xx

@not_any_maryjane
Can I ask what that means? About the title?
I love how you're getting everything that I wanted to get across :) Stephanie is really lacking confidence, what you said is very true.
They've not exactly summed everything up, but all we can do is see if they can prove changing and adjusting to starting fresh. No you didn't read it too deep, you got it spot on! Xx

@KAOT
Oh good! Such a relief to know that, thank you! :) x

@softballchick79
I know haha :) let's hope they realise it's not that easy to solve problems. Xx

The title of the chapter is actually a trochaic tetrameter with caesura! You English folks do master rhyme without even realising it :) And not only iambs! Well, beside of that, I loved that they could talk, although I get the feeling that Steph is a bit aprehensive. I sense that part of her would prefer Harry imposing his will to her, and that's what happens when you are lacking confidence. Am I reading to deep in that part when Harry explain between them to the boys? xx

I think you do an awesome job with really capturing how the characters feel! I felt it!

It's about time! Finally!

@One directioner 4 life
:) Thanks! X

@Jacie
He has the most perfect timing, for us readers anyway ;) Thanks for reading still! X

@TheTroubledNeophyte
I like your comments and please do continue to leave me feedback, they make my brain continue to work. Hopefully your suspicions will be on near the truth but not exactly the truth ;) I have to be careful I don't give too much away as I could easily blab on too haha. Life often throws surprises at us, good and bad ones so my story will experience them too :)
What you said is true, it was quite an immature way to act from Stephanie, but she's caught up in her issues that she's going to explain when they talk. I hope her explanations don't disappoint you :)
Harry and Stephanie will have to prove themselves how much they want to be together and to stay together. Even the hardest situations will challenge them but relationships are based on learning the other person. In my opinion, it doesn't matter how long you've been together, married etc you are still learning little things about each of other as the years go by. So they say, Love can conquer all.- But it does depend how strong you are too.

Thank you so much, I appreciate @not_any_maryjane for supporting me throughout this story and for bringing wonderful readers like yourself into Harry and Stephanie's journey :) xx

@softballchick79
:D Haha
Glad you liked it, thank you for your input and suggestion :) xx

@xRockMex
My suspicions are near the truth?! No!!! Uggh, I will hate myself if I am right and there will be baby drama, I hate it when people use children as a means to an end. And you better get use to long reviews from me dear, I tend to babble whenever I write one of these. I would say that what Stephanie did in the latest chapter was understandable, in a way a smart idea since some people find it easier to understand their partner during the throes of passion but I also can't help but think that it was immature. She was not able to plan ahead and decided just to wing it and that makes me nervous. This is why I'm looking forward thenext chapter since they would finally talk about what the hell happened to them and not just let their bodies do the talking.Your reply about my suspicions is really bothering me since I can just imagine the next topsy turvies your mind would take us and I'm scared for both Harry and Stephanie and how they can pull through the troubles together. You are one amazing writer and I'm glad that @not_any_maryjane mentioned your story and got me into your beautiful world of fiction.

Oh thank god for louis!!! :)

STILL AMAZ

Yes! And doing the happy dance :)

wonderful chapter as always dear :)

@KAOT
I have Netflix so I really hope that's true :) I wish it was on everyday here.

@xRockMex
Oh it's on like everyday in the States, I did hear all the seasons will be on netflix next year!

@KAOT
Haha! He is indeed, I really want to watch friends now :)