Dreading to be happy - Comments, page 2

@Niallsgirl1
did you not get the request?? :P

there I sent a request lol

@Niallsgirl1
lol ! I did change the story plot sooo hopefully you don't mind!

@Britwit P.
YAS HAS YAS PLZZ

Hey maybe you can work with me on this story!



@Niallsgirl1

okay i think I might change this stories subject sooooo.....

@Niallsgirl1
:P

@Britwit P.
:3

@Niallsgirl1
Yupz

@Britwit P

Cool! I'm glad you like my stories.

Adopted, abused broken and hated ,bullies to kidnappers ,slow down and breath

@Niallsgirl1

@Niallsgirl1
I'll look through my subs and I will ya know yell you

@Britwit P.
Your welcome

Which 4? If you remember? :p

@Niallsgirl1
oh thank you and yea I been around for awhile I think I'm subscribed to at least 4 of your storys...

@Britwit P.
Yeah I was.. I want your story to get popular.

And omg you are? Thanks. :)

I try my best.

@Niallsgirl1
its fine you're just trying to help thanks and you're a good writer I'm actually a fan of your writing with out relizing you're one or are the writers so ya thats a good thing

@Britwit P.
Okay

Ex Chapter 2 )


"Guess what today is!" My aunt yells flipping on the lights.

"Jus-just 5 more minutes." I moan

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Like go down a space or two.. because it's also a bit easier to read.. just some advice. Sorry.. I'm not the best writer.

@Niallsgirl1
okay I get it now thanks!

@Britwit P.
Okay.. Like you need to make it a little more spaced out.. it's kind of boring when your all in one place.