When I'm Gone - Comments, page 5

@KAOT
That narcistic piece of arse... He deserves to be alone. Any woman in her right mind would have him back after this... But some women are up to anything to get their men :/ I woke up in a feminist mood. I'm so mad right now!

@not_any_maryjane

I agree with your mom! They can't love others if they love themselves too much. coughLouiscough.

@softballchick79

We knew Louis would slip up eventually! In the middle of the sea is not ideal, but at least she found out!

@exhaletruth

Yeah! It was hard to write her being so calm and level headed, but she just reacts differently to trauma because of past experiences. And yes, Louis and Eleanor wern't my favorite characters in this chapter!!

@Kitten2014

You read it all in one day?! That's crazy, my eyes would be killing me! But thank you! I'm really glad you liked it, I spent a lot of time on it! And yes, Louis is a wuss, a putz to be honest. No backbone.

Oh, Louis.

My mum says when people think they love two different persons, they just love themselves too much... :/

I'm glad she found out - damn players

this chapter got me emotional man :( poor Kate she didnt deserve that. i would of slapped Louis in the face tho but shes a calm collected gal so her reaction is undersrandable. the fact that louis was sleeping with kate n stringing her along then said oh he doesnt know if he still wants to be with El like wtf. gosh louis is such an asshole and eleanor is a total bitch. cant wait for the next chaptetho hope el gets what she deserves.

Well now I want the cell phone eating shark to take his phone...while he's still holding it. He doesn't deserve Kate...she's been nothing but honest with him and he's a wuss!
On another note read Mandolin Rain (whole thing) today...loved it! You are a very talented writer...just keep getting better ;-)

@Kitten2014

Feel free to do so! :) Except I'm sure you don't feel any better after reading this chapter.

@softballchick79

Life of a celebrity... :(

@not_any_maryjane

Truth,

Louis Tomlinson I am gonna smack you upside your fictional head if you don't grow a set and tell fictional ex to take a long walk off a short pier!!!! Ok I feel better now ;-)

omg - a player - the worst kind

ughhhh :/

He doesn't deserve her...

@KAOT
Yep :)

@Emmy2320

I'm still writing though!! Well posting! I finished writing last night...eeks!! :)

@nata

Thanks! That's what I'm trying to write...those happy moments!

@softballchick79

I didn't even know you read my story! Exciting!! Mine has been doing that too, it won't tell me when stories update at all. Annoying.

@not_any_maryjane

Ah thanks! Just learning from the masters. ;)