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When I'm Gone - Comments, page 15

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@not_any_maryjane

Not yet.... :)

KAOT KAOT
10/30/14

@Kitten2014

I thought for a while about having Olivia pass, but I just couldn't do it, it would make me too upset! But I'm glad you liked the chapter, and poor poor Louis. :)

KAOT KAOT
10/30/14

So so happy Olivia is alright!!!!

Emmy2320 Emmy2320
10/30/14

At least he's not married yet ;)

So glad Olivia is all right! Amazing update! xx

not_any_maryjane not_any_maryjane
10/29/14

Oh my...I was reading this, tears in my eyes, completely prepared for the worst. The tears then fell in relief once I knew that Olivia was alright. Now, for Louis to pull his head out of his butt :-) Awesome chapter!!!!!

Kitten2014 Kitten2014
10/29/14

@Emmy2320

Well, Eleanor still has no real idea about his relationship with Kate so she's obviously still in love with him, which makes me a little sad but I am writing the story so it's kind of my fault. :) I'm glad I'm giving a range of emotions, that was my goal! The story is working so far! lol. Glad you like the update! :)

KAOT KAOT
10/29/14

@ONE DIRECTION LOVE

Hahah, he's totally doing the wrong thing!! :)

KAOT KAOT
10/29/14

@breadboy101

Yes! I love your comment! Louis will realize how miserable he is soon enough, he has to! I think a part of him already realizes how miserable he is but he's stubborn, and I think Kate is a little bit too. :)

KAOT KAOT
10/29/14

@Niallergurl

Thanks! I'm excited for whats to come! :)


KAOT KAOT
10/29/14

@Kitten2014

Aw yay! I know he should be with Kate but it seems as though Louis is stubborn. And I tried to think of the cutest thing I could think of, not just him asking her, but kind of making her work for it. :)

KAOT KAOT
10/29/14

@not_any_maryjane

Haha, Your comment made me laugh. Ruinning everyone life including his own.

KAOT KAOT
10/29/14

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Emmy2320 Emmy2320
10/29/14

Oh I forgot to mention how wonderful of a chapter and story this is though. It is still amazing even though I am frustrated

Emmy2320 Emmy2320
10/29/14

NO Louis should not have done that if he has any doubts at all. Ugh he is getting on my nerves. You are supposed to be with Kate!!!!! For real you can't be that stupid!!!! The proposal was still cute, that would have been hard to say no to! But I am still mad. I have a feeling however that they won't get their happily ever after after all. Just a hunch, though if this isn't true, I will be even more mad. Ugh so many emotions with this story!!!!!

Emmy2320 Emmy2320
10/29/14

NOOOOO LOUIS THIS IS THE WRONG DECISION!!!!!!!!!!! YOU SHOULD BE WITH KATE!!!!! Oh Louis what is wrong with u?!?!

ONE DIRECTION LOVE ONE DIRECTION LOVE
10/28/14

Louis what are you doing????
I can't believe that he didn't end things with Eleanor, instead he proposes to her, which i have to admit was one of the cutest things i've ever read.
However cute that moment was it isn't going to last because he truly loves kate, so when he finally ends things with El its going to be really sad since she was expecting to live happily ever after with louis.
i'm actually glad kate is moving away so that now Louis can see how miserable his life without her and olivia.
sorry for the long comment, i just really like this story, bye xx

breadboy101 breadboy101 @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
10/28/14

This is amazing can't wait for more

Niallergurl Niallergurl @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
10/28/14

As much as I know he belongs with Kate, that was an incredible proposal, I got teary eyed!
Another great update!

Kitten2014 Kitten2014
10/28/14

You can't stay mad at Louis for too long, even if he's ruinning everybody's life :)

not_any_maryjane not_any_maryjane
10/28/14

@Kitten2014

He's very frustrating! It's a bit difficult to write a character such as his but hopefully it's all making sense!

KAOT KAOT
10/28/14