When I'm Gone - Comments, page 13

@not_any_maryjane

Thank you! I always appriciate your kind words. :)

HOLY CRAP!!!!!! Louis is sooooooo going to break up with El. Its so obvious. And As for you Kate STOP BEING A GIANT BABY!!!! If you tell Louis how you feel the there is a 100 percent chance that he will break up with El and be with you


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@KAOT
Yes I have been around those kids. Sometimes they r very annoying. But when Olivia was doing it to Louis it was just hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing.

I really love this story, it is so different from the others. What I hate is that we have to wait to read what happens next! Can't wait though..

That was just adorable!!!!! There were like a little family:)
I love how Olivia tells everyone how much she likes Louis, Maybe Kate can learn to do the same before it's too late.
My anticipation is rising a lot, What did Louis mean by the wedding is not got going to be fun, and why did El leave so early in the morning last chapter???- Can't wait for the answers!!!

That was a cute chapter, Louis, Kate and Olivia were like a little family. I agree with Kate's mom that she needs to tell Louis how she feels about him. And I keep wondering what Bridezilla is up to...

Just Monday but surely your chapter made it better! I can feel the storm coming!!! xx

@llzhn1d
I for sure think they all need each other!

@Kitten2014
Love your nickname for Eleanor! You never fail to make me laugh!

@ONE DIRECTION LOVE
Ahh, that was what I was shooting for! Ever been around those kids who know everything...even at a young age? I picture Olivia like that. :)

I hope he leaves Eleanor soon because Kate and Olivia really need him

Hmmmmm, what is Bridezilla up to? She IS hiding something. Love Louis and Kate in this chapter, they are so perfect for each other.

Reading this chapter I felt like Olivia was the older one and Louis was the 4 years old. That was a.funny chapter. Oh and El is definitely hiding something. Who goes to a magazine discussion at 6 in the morning. And Louis OF COURSE KATE IS PERFECT!!!!! SHE IS PERFECT FOR YOU!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

@KAOT
I know :) I LOVE the story. :)

@Emmy2320
Ohh men. Lol. And totally agree, I'm sure eleanor is a lovely girl in real life, it's a bit difficult to make her "mean" but it just comes with the story! :)

@ONE DIRECTION LOVE
Love your comments...always thinking ahead. :)

@Kitten2014
Ah yes...don't you just love crabby attitudes?? :)

I hope Louis finally realizes what a bitch he would be marrying (only in the story I have no problem with Eleanor in real life just to clarify). He would be so much happier with Kate. Like obviously why is he trying so hard to hide his feelings?! Ugh stupid men lol

I swear El is hiding something. But anyway if she is going to be acting like that around Louis then they should just break up. And Louis should go to Kate :)

Uh oh Bridzilla is having a meltdown...perhaps the beginning of the end? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!